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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Very nice update... Khushi has started realising that she have some feelings for arnav... Arnav was jealous of nk... Both of them miss lavanya... She was definately a kind hearted person... I hope this jealousy factor nk brings them close...

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#162

This is such a beautifully composed, artistically designed and creatively written story. I love the pace and sensitivity with which the story has advanced.

You are a wonderful storyteller!!

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Hey Abeer.🤗 First and foremost accept my apology for not been able to comment here. Trust me it was all because of my work load with university and stuff. But I hope to earn my forgiveness my making you smile till the end of my comment. 😳

So here I go...

Started off from chapter 43. I just love how you manage the characters and keep the readers rooted through your innovation. I love how you twist almost each update. I read all the updates in almost a day. I am so happy to see that finally they are heading towards a second chance and I totally appreciate your way of describing every minute detail. I think that's your trademark.

Some of the dialogues in these updates were just bang on!! I was completely engrossed in it. But the best parts were Arnav's sorries...Anjali and Nani's planning and plotting😆... and Khushi's realization. I enjoyed Arnav being jealous of NK. Its so fun to read. Also loved how Arnav and Khushi are being affected by each other.

You did a remarkable job. 👏👏 But the thing that really lifted my spirits while I first read was that you gave Khushi an individuality. She being a desginer at LaAnk is just fabulous. The way you described Khushi's character was just awesome in these updates. Too good.

I am eagerly looking forward to the next updates.

So plz update soon Sweety :)

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: ILoveFF
Awesome

THANK YOU :)

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: piyaarshi
She was so confused... Her father, shyam, arnav everything running in her mind continuosly... I loved the past part where small khushi found solace when shashi kept his hand on her head... Then hari prakash panicking... Heap of jalebi's is khushi's signature... :D fantastic update... Just waiting to explore more about their life...

Yup bichari is completely confused in this chapter...everything she thinks she knows now completely shifts and she is left to wonder...aww Im glad you liked the jalebi bit...it is definitely Khushi' signature one she is incomplete without so had to incorporate it into the story :)

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: piyaarshi
Very nice update... Khushi has started realising that she have some feelings for arnav... Arnav was jealous of nk... Both of them miss lavanya... She was definately a kind hearted person... I hope this jealousy factor nk brings them close...

Yup I always loved Lavanya and so wanted to highlight her warmth in this story glad you guys love her here the way you loved her in the show...n jealousy...well haha...it definitely has the power to bring two ppl closer, will it do that for ArShi well you will have to wait n see I guess 😛

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: faffy
This is such a beautifully composed, artistically designed and creatively written story. I love the pace and sensitivity with which the story has advanced.

You are a wonderful storyteller!!

OMG THAT IS SUCH A HUMBLING COMMENT... THANK YOU SO MUCH!! I AM GLAD YOU ENJOY MY STORY AND STYLE OF WRITING...TRULY HUMBLED BY IT!! 😳

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: HSFA
Hey Abeer.🤗 First and foremost accept my apology for not been able to comment here. Trust me it was all because of my work load with university and stuff. But I hope to earn my forgiveness my making you smile till the end of my comment. 😳
So here I go...
Started off from chapter 43. I just love how you manage the characters and keep the readers rooted through your innovation. I love how you twist almost each update. I read all the updates in almost a day. I am so happy to see that finally they are heading towards a second chance and I totally appreciate your way of describing every minute detail. I think that's your trademark.
Some of the dialogues in these updates were just bang on!! I was completely engrossed in it. But the best parts were Arnav's sorries...Anjali and Nani's planning and plotting😆... and Khushi's realization. I enjoyed Arnav being jealous of NK. Its so fun to read. Also loved how Arnav and Khushi are being affected by each other.
You did a remarkable job. 👏👏 But the thing that really lifted my spirits while I first read was that you gave Khushi an individuality. She being a desginer at LaAnk is just fabulous. The way you described Khushi's character was just awesome in these updates. Too good.
I am eagerly looking forward to the next updates.
So plz update soon Sweety :)

HI FATI

AWW THANK YOU FOR THE LONG REPLY...LOVE LONG REPLIES 😛

THANK YOU SOOO MUCH FOR THE SWEET N HEART WARMING COMPLIMENTS...TRULLY VERY HUMBLING...N IM GLAD YOU LIKE THE LITTLE CHANGES I HAVE BROUGHT TO THE STORY AND CHARACTERS BUT AM GLAD YOU CAN STILL SEE THE TRUE ESSENCE OF THEIR CHARACTERS...THE CHARACTERS WE FELL IN LOVE WITH...THERE IS ALWAYS A DANGER WHEN YOU CHANGE THINGS IN STORY THAT YOU MAY CHANGE TOO MUCH...BUT ITS NICE TO KNOW YOU GUYS DON'T THINK I HAVE MADE TOO MANY DRASTIC CHANGES, THAT YOU CAN STILL SEE THE CHARACTER YOU FELL IN LOVE WITH 😃😳

N BTW THANK YOU SOO MUCH FOR MENTIONING THE DIALOGUES BECAUSE I WORK THE MOST ON THEM, AM NEVER TRULLY SATISFIED WITH THEM, KEEP ON CHANGING THEM AROUND TILL THE LAST MINUTE BEFORE I UPDATE, BUT GOOD TO KNOW YOU LIKE THEM 😃

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: arhi-raizada
A nice update

thank you 😃

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#170

HI GUYS

KAAN PAKAR KE SORRY FOR SUCH A LONG WAIT FOR THIS UPDATE. REALLY REALLY VERY SORRY, FOR THOSE WHO I HAVEN'T TOLD I AM ACTUALLY AM WORKING AND AT UNIVERSITY AT THE SAME TIME SO AM SWAMPED PRETTY MUCH 24/7 AND THAT IS WHY UNFORTUNATELY ON MOST OCCASIONS THE STORY ENDS UP HAVING TO TAKE A BACK SEAT EVEN THOUGH I DO NOT WANT IT TO...ANYHOW I AM FINALLY BACK AND HOPEFULLY WILL NOT DISAPPEAR AGAIN, BUT IF I DO I AM REALLY SORRY...

AND THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR PATIENCE AND WAIT...YOUR WAIT FOR CHAPTER 47 FINALLY ENDS, CLICK THE LINK FOR IT 😃

Chapter 47

Oh btw I don't know whether you guys get notifications when I reply to your comments on my blog, if you don't just know I read all the comments and reply to them, so should be able to find them if you go on the site. Let me know if you have any problems reading the update or comments 😊

Edited by ACTywm - 10 years ago

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