Inshi ff : Pyar to hona hi tha 2nd thread last c 56 pg 49 - Page 36

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Posted: 9 years ago
Totally majestic! Looking forward to an electrifying ending!
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Lovely update ketu ðŸ˜³ ðŸ¤—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Surish

Totally majestic! Looking forward to an electrifying ending!

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Lovely update ketu ðŸ˜³ ðŸ¤—

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see..i was correct ketu..loved d update dear...
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Originally posted by: sreevijayan

see..i was correct ketu..loved d update dear...

aapnehi toh idea di ðŸ˜† 
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Posted: 9 years ago
abhitak nahi padha...but padhungi n den cmnt karungi
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Posted: 9 years ago
at lst i hav read d update
so...confession ho gaya inshi ka in a rajkumar-rajkumari story f dere's
n sabse bada shock...jasoos nani...seriously ye to maine 0.1% bhi nahi socha tha ki sab nani ki planning thi including dat ayesha jiska mujhe lag raha tha ki ye chamatkar karegi...but all is well dat ends well..Inshi atlst ek ho gae...
N one more shock dat dis ff is also going to end in d nxt ch
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: designersaini

at lst i hav read d update
so...confession ho gaya inshi ka in a rajkumar-rajkumari story f dere's
n sabse bada shock...jasoos nani...seriously ye to maine 0.1% bhi nahi socha tha ki sab nani ki planning thi including dat ayesha jiska mujhe lag raha tha ki ye chamatkar karegi...but all is well dat ends well..Inshi atlst ek ho gae...
N one more shock dat dis ff is also going to end in d nxt ch

finally aapne padh liya ðŸ˜†
aapke liye story puri kar di ðŸ˜Š chipku aayesha ðŸ¤£ chamatkar ðŸ¤£ 
yess jasoos nani ya detective nani ðŸ˜Ž ðŸ˜† 
shock pe shock ðŸ¤£
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Chapter 56 
Last Chapter
Ranjit, Aayesha jane lagte hain. Shekhar Ranjitse thanks kehta hain. "Are Shekhar thanks kyu keh rahe ho? Jab bachhe galti karte hain tab hum baadonkohi unhe sahi raah dikhani padti hain. Maine usmehi tum sabki madad ki hain. Ab ye thanks keh kar aise hume paraya mat kar". Dono hug karte hain. Rishi Ranjit, Aayesha se thanks kehta hain. Indira Aayeshako lekar sideme jati hain,"Thanks Aayesha, tumne aur unclejine humare liye jo bhi kich kiya uss sabke liye thank you so much". Aayesha hasti hain,"Nahi Indira, thanks kehneki koi jarurat nahi, yeh to mera farz tha, tum meri dost ho aur dostike liye itna toh me karhi sakti hu".
Indira : Sach keh rahi ho tum, par me ye baatbhi achhese janti hu, tum kahi na kahi Rishiko chahne lagi thi, hain na? Aayesha shock ho kar dekhti hain. Aise chauk kyu gayi? Me tumhe bachpanse janti hu Aayesha, tumne ye sab mujhse jyada Rishike liya kiya hain na? Aayesha apni aankhe pochti hain,"You know what Indira, tum bahot lucky ho jo tumhe Rishi jaisa pati mila hain. Jab usse tumhare accidentki khabar mili tab wo bhag kar tumhare pass aaya. Usne apna sapna tumhare liye chhod diya. Wo tumse bahot pyar karta hain Indira, aur rahi baat meri toh mujhebhi aisa pyar karnewala ladka jarur milega".

Indira : Haan jarur milega. Dono hug karti hain. Ranjit, Aayeshako chodne sab bahar aate hain. Wo janeke bad sab andar aate hain. Dadi INSHI ko bulati hain,"Maine tum logonko maf kiya hain par itni badi galti karneki tumhe saja jarur milegi".

Indira : Haan dadi, aap jo bhi saja dogi wo hume manjoor hogi. 

Dadi : Toh tum donoki saja yahi hain ki ab jaldise mujhe ek bar wapas pardadi bana do. Yeh sunkar Indira sharmati hain. Kya hua dono chup kyu ho? Yad hain na abhi tumne kaha hain, saja bhugtaneke liye tum dono taiyar ho.

Rishi : Dadi me taiyar hu ab aapki bahukahi sawal hain, kyu Indira? Wo wink karta hain. Indira wahase bhag jati hain. Sab log haste hain.

INSHI's room
Indira room me aakar puri roomko dekhti hain. Usse darwaja band karneki awaj aati hain. Rishi aakar usse peechese hug karta hain,"Kya hua hitler biwi? Aise kya dekh rahi ho?"

Indira : Sab kuch sapne jaisa hua hain Rishi. Maine socha bhi nahi tha hum log kabhi aise mil payenge.

Rishi : Haan, par dekha humne jane anjaneme ek dusrese pyar karhi liya. Lekin agar tum pehlehi apne dilki baat mujhe bata deti toh itna sab kuch hota hi nahi.

Indira : Excuse me, maine nahi bataya par tumnebhi kaha bataya? Tum toh humesha US US karte the.

Rishi : Thik hain, par tumhe batana chahiye tha... Iss batpe dono ladne lagte hain. Thodi der bad donoko realise hota hain aur dono haste hain. Dekha hum aaj bhi waisehi lad rahe hain jaise pehle din lade the.

Indira : Haan par uss wakt hum pyar nahi karte the par ab...

Rishi : Ab hum ekdusrese bahot pyar karte hain. Dono eksaath "I love you..." Rishi kiss karne lagta hain, Indira rokti hain,"Yeh sab abhi nahi Rishi".

Rishi : Are toh neeche jo maine dadise promise kiya hain uska kya? Mujhe to ab jaldse apna promise pura karna hain. Wo Indirake aur pass aata hain par Indira usse pure room me bhagati hain. Suddenly Rishi deewarpe dekhkar chillata hain,"Chipkali..." Indira bina dekhe usse hug karti hain,"Bhagao usse Rishi please..." Rishi hasta hain,"Mujhe nahi pata tha yeh chipkali mere itne kam aayegi". Indira gussese uske taraf dekhti hain,"Tumne yeh majak kiya. How mean Rishi, Aise kisike darka majak udate hain kya?" 

Rishi : Haan toh me kya karta? Tum jaisi hitler biwiko manane ke liye aise kurafatu ideas aajmani padti hain. Samjhi meri pyari hitler biwi? Agar nahi samjhi toh aur bhi tarike aate hain mujhe. Wo wink karta hain. Indira haskar sar hilati hain aur dono hug karte hain.

4 years later
Do bachhe bhag kar ek roomme aate hain. "Daldi talo...daldi talo walna hum pakle dayenge. Daldi kalo Dhluv". Ek ladka dusre ladkeko ek room me le jata hain. Dono curtains ke peeche chup jate hain. 

Dhruv : Dekhna Chaltak, ab papa hume kabhi dund nai chakte.

Sarthak : Haan, ab papa hume dundte lahenge. Dono haste hain. 
These kids are Master Dhruv Rishi Diwan and Master Sarthak Rishi Diwan. 3 saal pehle INSHIko judwa bete hote hain. Rishi thodasa naraj hota hain kyunki he desperately wanted a baby girl lekin jab ladke hote hain tab Sameer usse chidhata hain,"Dekhle Rishi, bete humesha apni maa ki hi jyada sunte hain. Ab dekho tumhare bete tumhe kaise pareshaan karenge". Rishi tab decide karta hain wo apne betonko bilkul mumma's boy nahi karega. Wo unhe apne tarah banayega aur wo isme successful hota hain. Dhruv, Sarthak bilkul apne papa jaise hite hain. Dono bete aur Rishi milkar Indirako bahot pareshaan karte hain. Sarthak ki kuch kuch bate Indira jaisi hoti hain par Dhruv bilkul Rishiki carbon copy hota hain.

Dhruv, Sarthakke janam ke bad Diwan builder's ko bahot bada profit hota hain. Rishi apna sapna pura karne US jakar waha DBki nayi branch kholta hain. Indira pura dhyan bachhonpe deti hain. Vidhit aur Yukta shadi karke Indiame Inderke pass aate hain. Payal ki shadi uske college friend Prashantse hoti hain.

Rishi dono bachhonke sath luka chupi khel raha tha. Dono bachhe INSHIke room me aakar chupte hain. Rishi donoko dhundte dhundte waha aata hain. Usse curtains hilte huye dikhte hain par wo jan bujkar unhe dhundneka natak karta hain. "Oh god ab kaha dhundu me inhe? Pata nahi kaha chupkar bethe hain. Har din nayi nayi jagah chup jate hain". Wo dheere dheere window ke taraf aata hain. "Par me unhe dhundhi lunga", wo curtains sideme karta hain,"Dekha dhund liya..." Dono bachhe bhagne lagte hain. Rishi unhe pakadta hain.

Dhruv : Papa humne kaiche dunda?

Sarthak : Aapto pata ta papa?

Rishi : Papako sab kuch pata hota hain beta. Tumhare papa bahot intelligent hain. Wo bachhonko kiss karta hain.

Sarthak :Hum bhi innelident hain na papa?

Rishi : Haan tum dono super intelligent ho. Waha Indira  bachhonke liye khana le aati hain. Bachhe muh banate hain. Rishi unke taraf dekhta hain,"Kya hua tum donoko?"

Sarthak : Papa hume wo ganni chabji nahi khani.

Dhruv : Haan papa uss chabjiche ganni bu aati hain.

Rishi : Achha toh yeh baat hain.

Dhruv : Papa hume chupao na... mumma aake wahi chabji khilayengi. Dono bachhe Rishike peeche chupne lagte hain. Indira yeh sab dekh leti hain. "Chalo bachho jaldi idhar aake betho". Dono bachhe aur chupneki koshish karte hain. "Me janti hu tum dono papake peeche chupe ho, chalo ab jaldise bahar aao warna mumma gussa hogi". Wo Rishike taraf dekhti hain,"Rishi please unhe yahale aao na, tum bhi kya unhe aise chupa rahe ho?" 

Rishi : Indira, bachhe hain wo, unse aise hitler jaise baat mat kiya karo.

Indira : Haan janti hu bachhe hain par kiske bachhe hain ye bhi dekhna padta hain na. Sach me Rishi dono bachhonko tumne pura bigad diya hain. Wo uske peeche aati hain. Chalo bachho ab jaldise khana kha lo.

Dhruv : Naaa... wo chabji ganni hain. Hume wo nai khani.

Sarthak : Haan mumma, hum nai khayenge.

Indira : Agar tum donone yeh sabji nahi khayi toh papa jaise strong kaise banoge?

Dhruv : Naa hum nai khayenge aur dono bhagne lagte hain. Indira gusse se Rishike taraf dekhti hain,"Sab tumhare wajahse hua hain aur bigado inhe..." Rishi hasta hain. Dono bachhe Indirako puri room bhagate hain. Rishi ye sab dekh kar bahot hasta hain. At last wo Indiraki madad karne aata hain,"Achha bachho meri baat suno". Wo Indirase plate leta hain. "Dekho bachho agar aapne yeh khana abhi khatam kiya na toh papa aap donoko ek achhisi nayi story sunayenge aur kal badisi chocolate bhi denge".

Sarthak : Sachhi papa? Rishi sar hilata hain,"Haan muchhi, par aap donoko bhi promise karna padega, aap dono ab jaldise khana khaoge aur ab mummako bilkul pareshaan nahi karoge".

Dhruv : Haan mumma hum tang nahi karenge. Cholly mumma. Dono apne kan pakadte hain.

Indira : Awww... mere bachho, mumma bhi aapko promise karti hain me aap dono par kabhi gussa nahi karungi. Mumma also sorry. Wo bachhonko hug karti hain. Bachhe usse galpe kiss karte hain.

Rishi : Mummako kissi di aur papako kon dega? Dhruv, Sarthak usse bhi kiss karte hain. Charo group hug karte hain.

Jab rab jodi banate hain wo jodi unbreakable hoti hain jaise humare INSHIki jodi. Dono bahot lade, jhagde, dono ne apne pariwar ke liye contract marriage bhi kar li. Lekin kab dono ek dusre ke sath jud gaye iski khabar unko bhi nahi lagi. Lekin kehte hain na jab uparwala jodi banata hain toh usme pyarka atoot dhaga bandhata hain. Toh isme humare INSHI alag kaise ho sakte hain? After all unki jodi bhi uparse bandhke aayi thi toh unme Pyar Toh Hona Hi Tha...

The End
Edited by Ketaki19 - 9 years ago