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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dr.Tinni

Interesting...
waiting 4 nxt updt
tnx 4pm




continue soon plzzz


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akilagoud2

interesting start ๐Ÿ˜Š
continue soon
thanks for pm


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

Next update jaldi dooo nehi to 

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Hehe..dnt wrry iski update jaldi hi milegi..m nhi likh rhi hu na
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: priyajan12

wow damn interesting story

plzz continue sooon


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aasiyajain

Its realy good n interrestng part di nw waitng for next part


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Very nice story pls continue soon


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sahana747

Oh, I see, Your story too has moved to Hi-Fi century๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ Facebook friends Wow.

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Hahaha...hifi nhi di wifi century..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

Different story with nice concept
waiting for first part continue
thanx for the pm


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Posted: 9 years ago
Chalo all sets..ab aram se updates milengi aaplogo ko..waise agr wo nhi manti to m bhi unko dhmki dene wali thi ki unki id aplogo ko de dungi to aaplog pm kr kr ke update mangenge to khud hi dena padega..pr ye karne ki jarurat nhi padi khud hi man gyi..so sweet of her...

Han ek aur bat..nam thoda sa change kar diya h..aajkl amir khan ho gyi hu..hr cheez me perfection chahiye hoti h๐Ÿ˜†..name should say story itself na..

Ok here u all go with update..hope u all like it too..

Part 1

Priya was super busy at home though it is a holiday , as her sister is coming with her son whom Priya love the most . She made all fav's of Arjun & eagerly waiting to hear his non stop batter & Of course playing with him ..she dint even look at phone from morning actually she totally forgot abt it until it start ringing with out pause .. She was searching for it , finally she got & picked up . It was from her sister who called her to inform they r going to reach home late , then Priyas mom who went to temple came back , she told her mom the same nd prepared coffee for both. While talking she noticed messages nd thought .. Goshhh their was around 20 messages unread & she started reading & replying nd noticed Ram's message she want to ignore it but she somehow felt it is rude not to answer nd thought she would just say 'Hi' ..so she starts reading his messages nd just says good to know U ... Ram was waiting just for tht beep sound , he was lying down trying to sleep not to think abt her too much but the movement he heard his alert tone he picked up his phone nd read her reply , he dint understand wht he should think , whether he should try to make a conversation r just let it b , any how he asked how r u ..? Trying to b as normal as he can because he don't want his excitement to get to know abt her more & more takes over ..
On the other side Priya saw his message & just answered wht he was asking , nd the conversation went on they dint even realized tht they chatted for more than an 1hr until Priya's mom called her to help with some household stuff nd softly scolded Priya for being on Phone for so long ..so she just stopped chatting nd went to her Mom totally forgetting abt Ram ..

Ram was wondering why is she stopped replying suddenly , he is a short tempered guy , he was furious to know why she left like tht & he dozed off thinking abt her & their conversation .. As for the first time he is feeling very strange , confused as he is not able to stop his urge to talk to her more . Next morning passed , he attended his patients , his routine but he was waiting for her reply , checking his FB inbox again & again hoping may b he missed his alert tone , now he is more annoyed & irritated . 
But Priya totally forgot abt chatting she was busy with her family , specially with Arjun .
Ram after his hospital hrs came back home early , so he started to cook himself & he invited his friends for dinner too , just so divert himself from her thoughts but at his early night hrs he remembered , it is morning for her , he recollected every word she said during their conversation & imagined wht she might b doing , 
She wakes up early , very early ( he thought to himself ) seeing his watch , he smiled to himself then he hears door bell , he already know who might b , he went & let his friends Neha & Satish in .. They were talking abt their patients & stuff , Ram mostly kept quite but he was trying to b active in conversation with them , they started their dinner (Ram is a very good cook) , Neha loves his food so all praises for him , after dinner is done he checked time again , then he thought of her again .
There Priya who was trying to finish her morning chores in her routine composed manner . She made her trademark chai nd want to njoy it in peace before Arjun wakes up .. Nd she starts to check her FB & remembered her unfinished chat with Ram ... So she messaged him saying sorry , Ram on the other end who was waiting all day for her reply & when he saw , his anger raised but he tried to controll himself & excused from his friends went to other room , and asked her why she left their last conversation with out even telling him & why she dint reply fast ,
Priya was suprised with his shooting questions , she was still calm nd she replied she don't need to give any clarifications to him & she is not free to chat with him all time .. It made Ram loose his temper ... He kept quite for sometime & thought he would never talk to tht rude , mean women again .. Nd their Priya was feeling wired , she is a person who knows where to cut off & she does tht with eaze , but this guy is making her think again abt the way she spoke , his arrongance is annoying her , still she is thinking abt him , she jerked off her thoughts nd thought to get ready & was abt to close chat box but Arjun snatched phone from her hand , he is 4yrs but very good at playing games on phone , he started running away from Priya shouting he wants to play , Priya knows she cannot win with him so she smiled watching him nd said , Careful Arjun saying so she asked Arjun to come to her Room so she could connect cell to her lappy & he can play on lappy .. Saying so she connected nd left for bath , Arjun unlocked phone , nd accidentally pressed video chat on Rams chat box , but he got diverted with their dog & ran behind her ,
Ram was susprised to get a video call from Priya , he hesitatingly accepted & he was even surprised when he see no one there , he was now really pissed nd abt to end call when he saw Priya coming with her loose wet hair , she wore light pink Punjabi dress , she was very simple but Ram was just staring at her with a lump in his throat , she has Perfect body , she is moving here nd there in room nd getting her things , wiping her water drops from her hair ( it made Ram sulk more ), nd she turned to see her aunt next door who came in calling Priya by name to her high pitch , Ram barly understood their conversation but he now know She is Priya nd her voice is making him crazy , her smile did all the magic he just could not stop looking at her Smiling face & at her luscious lips ... He unknowingly said r rather murmured to himself ur Beauty is divine Priya , I know Iam falling for U .. Priya suddenly realized lappy was on so she turned to shut down when she noticed a man Staring at her , she was horrified , Ram came to his senses with Priyas expressions & just said Hi , Iam Ram .. Priya dint understand a thing , she just shut the screen off in still shock .. 
Ram was having a huge grin on his face , he forgot abt his anger , frustration .. He said again to him self , I am falling for U Priya !!

To b continue...
Edited by veena23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG!
Awesome & Mind-blowing update
Chatting scenes are cute
Highlight is Video chat, i can imagine Ram's reactions while reading
Thanks for the wonderful update
Waiting for the next update
Continue ASAP๐Ÿ˜Š