FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140 - Page 15

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WOW!! outstanding update dear...loved it...πŸ˜ƒ
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Too painful to read RK suffering so much
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Very emotional update 😊 I liked the bonding between Madhu and Patel.Rk hurt because of Deepali.Hope Madhu helps Rk to overcome his heart break.
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superb story... loved it... waiting for further updates...
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Amazing story with superb writing style😳please continue soonπŸ˜ƒ
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So patil is in team madhubala, good, waiting for rk to fall in love with madhu knowing her truth. Thanks for pm, update next part soon pls
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hey hi loved this story a lot plz update this soon i cant wait to read next i hope plz give regular updates do pm me the next part dear great writing love RK πŸ‘πŸΌ
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U updated after a long time.
Happy new year πŸ€—πŸ₯³
coming to update . RK is very hurt after seeing dips n sikki together . Is it bcz of his male ego , pride n trust which dips butchered by cheating him wid his step bro
or its bcz he liked/loved or had started to like/ love dips.
more dan him i feel so bad fr madhu. she is somuch hurt n helpless n has been betrayed badly by her closed ones n not to forget her father .😑
Thank god patil is in good terms wid her now.
cont soon πŸ‘πŸΌ
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hi update the next part soon dear we are waiting 😳
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Originally posted by: shriyakadge

Ah! I m loving this like hell! I finally caught up wid this story :D Glad tht i read it. Its so awesome. Wonder how u write so beautifully. In the strt u wrote a note tht this is a serious story..so most of the people wont like it. But to b genuine, i have always loved stories which r close to reality (Thts why i gave my ff a realistic end πŸ˜† ) The first 3 parts broke my heart πŸ’” Madhu! I seriously sympathize her :( She went through so much! N then Rk! He went through a sad phase too. But in this story, Madhu is more close to my heart. I m kinda liking Patil :) At first i couldnt remove the serial wala Patil's image from my head. But then when Rishabh called his Patil Kaka..then i could somewat imagine him as an old man :P Glad he came to knw bout Madhu's past. N bdw...r those shayaris written by u? If yes, then let me tell u they r awesome! ⭐️ You are so talented! I seriously love ur stories...First it was ANKAHEE n now this. Waiting for the nxt update :) Update soon :D


Thank you for reading! Yeah, this is supposed to be serious-ish and not very likable. I am still debating how long to make it because I have a few different length ptions in my head.
And yeah, the poetry is mine. :)

I wanted an old Patil kaka in the story, because I don't have too many other characters!
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