Imaginary stories about Hatim (new part added)

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Well here is how we imagine Hatim and Perizaad will meet... AGAIN 😳
story by Me (RK_Sweetie) and  radianteyes.😳
hope you all like it... β­οΈ


one day Hatim will wake up & his mom will say "dekho Hatim beta tujse milne kaun aya hai..? "
and at the mothers side Perizaad standing by looking the otherside, turns around to see Hatim... and they smile like anything...
hatim so excited to see her.. joy in her eyes clearly seen..
and they run towards each other.. Hug and perizaad will say "hatim, humne tumari bohot yaad aah rahi thi.. isliye socha kitumare pass kuch din rehne aa jayu..."😳
and hatim will say β€οΈ "yaad toh humhe b tumari bohot ayi.. tumhe tumare mulk jana zaroori tha, warna hum apko kabi b jane nahi dete.."😳

And here the mischief's started..
and they have good time together..
at nyt when perizaad is sleeping hatim climbs in her room and scares her.. Waking her up...

Hatim: perizaad... utho perizaad...πŸ˜›
Perizaad wakes up bt hatim holds her mouth so that she dont scream..

Perizaad: hatim tum yaha kya kar rahe ho itne der raat ko?? challo humhe sonne do... aur tum b so jao...πŸ₯±

Hatim: perizaad neendh ko jane do.. chale hum dono kahi gumne chalte hai...πŸ˜ƒ

Perizaad (shocked): Hatim kahi tum pagal toh nahi huye ho?? itni raat gaye jumne?? agar ammi abbu ne dekh liye toh??πŸ˜•

Hatim: dirre se yaha kidki se kudh k chalte hai... jaise hum aur bhaijaan kiya karte the... (& feels sad)πŸ˜‰

Perizaad: jo hua bhul jao hatim.. 

Hatim: toh hum challe??πŸ˜ƒ

Perizaad: tum toh aise puch rahe ho jaise hum kahege aur tum mann jaoge... challo phir...😳

Next morning.. as the king and queen wake up they see... hatim and perizaad  doing some sword fighting.. i mean practicing (like aslan and jabbar)
and than going out together... hatim, perizaad and kasim...
and hatim's mom says "badshah.. apne hatim aur perizaad ko dekha... kitne acche lag rahe hai na dono ek saat?"πŸ‘
and badshah says " sazia, tum wahi soch rahi ho jo hum soch rahe hai...??"
begam sazia will say "toh kya hatim se iske barem me baat kare?"
badshah will say "ji zaroor..."πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰

and on the same night as Hatim returns his mother ask him about perizaad, what he feels about her..
but unfortunately Kasim listens the talk...πŸ˜‰ 
Hatim confused totally.. and asks some time from his mother...

when hatim's mom ask hatim about this.. Hatim is confused what to say...
he think whether perizaad will say yes or no...
whole night he stand in the balcony and think what to tell ammi...πŸ˜•
kasim enters the room...

Hatim: Kasim, tum yaha?? abi tak soye nahi??

Kasim: arey Hatim, humari baat chodo tum b toh nahi soye.. perizaad k bare mein soch rahe ho??

Hatim stares at Kasim, thinking how he know...
Kasim: hatim, jab ammi apse baat kar rahi thi toh humne sunn liya tha...

Hatim: Kasim yaar meri madadh kar.. mhujse samaj mein nahi aata main kya karu.. ammi se kya kahu... πŸ˜•

Kasim: Sabse baadi baat yeh hai ki tum kya sochthe ho... tumare aur perizaad k nigah k barem mein... πŸ˜‰

Hatim: kasimm... (gives angry look)😑

Kasim: hatim miya, humhe b pata hai ki tum dono ek dusre k bare mein kya mehsoos karte ho...

Hatim: kasim, main perizaad ko bohot chahta hu, par kehne se darta hu... agar usne manna kar diya toh... yaar main uski dosti khona nahi chahta...😭

Kasim: dosti kaise tuntegi?? hatim soccho usne tumare liye kya kya kiya hai.. humare liye apni jaan thak dene k liye tayar hai wo... aur jab tu marne wale the.. bechari kitni ro rahi thi...πŸ˜­πŸ˜•
ek baar puch k toh dekh.. mera dil keh raha hai wo tuje na nahi kahegi...

Hatim: shukriya dost.. hum abhi unse puchte hai...😳

and Hatim again go to Perizaad's room..
he knock and knock the door... still no reply... he finally Break opens the door.. and enters... and quietly sits near her on the bed... and talks softly...

Hatim: (He thinks: Perizaad, yaar main baadi uljaan mein hu.. ek taraf ammi ko jawab dena hai dusri taraf humhe tujse apne mohobat ka izhaar harna hai...)
Perizaad tum sotte huye b kitni acchi lagti kash main tumhe bata pata...😳

Perizaad: (opens her eyes and smiles) toh bata dena Hatim... πŸ˜³

Hatim shocked and embarrassed.. dont know how to react.. try to run away but perizaad hold his hand...😲
and there was a cute eye to eye contact...
and a Romantic background Music... πŸ˜³β€οΈ

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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg omg
Our first story
Next update next week
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Originally posted by: radianteyes.

Omg omg
Our first story
Next update next week


hey our next part of story... Hatim and Perizaad k shaddi ki baat... πŸ˜³
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Yep di
Will write soon
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meaning to say its happening exactly how we wrote πŸ˜³πŸ‘
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Well here is what i was thinking...
one episode.. totally focused on Hatim and Perizaad...

there is a special Dhawat for some special guest (a prince from other kingdom..) and so dances, etc are organised...
Perizaad will dress up once again like a Princess and with crown...πŸ‘πŸΌ
and so does Hatim will be...πŸ‘
as the night fall the program will start and Hatim will be as usual sitting besides his parents..⭐️
and Perizaad standing besides him along with Qasim...

the romantic weather, people (couples) are dancing and Perizaad remembers her first dance with Hatim and get a inch of smile on her face...☺️
and Hatim too dream about that night in Rakbhan, the first dance  with Perizaad...
he slightly looks at her and finds her smiling among herself and he just gets carried away in her thought... 
unknowing that Qasim is looking at both of them...πŸ˜‰

Qasim feels he should say something now...
Qasim (bends to tell hatim something): Hatim, aise dekhne se kuch nahi hoga.. tum b le chalo usse nachane k liye...

Hatim (feels embarrassed): Qasim, aisi koi baat nahi hai...😲 

Qasim: hmmm.. Hatim, chupao maat.. tumare chehre se saaf pata chal raha hai.. arey bhai cholo b.. kahi aisa na ho... ki jo Badshah k bete aiye hai yaha dawat k liye wo na usse pucche...

Hatim: par qasim.. wo chalegi mere saat...??

Qasim: mana nahi karegi hatim... jaldhi karo...

Hatim: par tum yaha akhele kya karohe?

Qasim: tum humari chinta maat karo.. hum yahi chup chap rahenge...

Hatim: mere paas isse acchi tarkhib hai... main Perizaad ko leke chalta hu, tum Juhi ko leke chalna...

(Qasim hesitate...)😲

Hatim: meri baat mano, isse accha mauka nahi milega, Juhi k seet waqt guzarne k liye..

Qasim: hhh.. Hatim yeh humse nahi hoga...

Hatim: dekh Qasim, agar tum nahi chaloge to hum b nahi chalenge...

Qasim: phir thik hai.. pehle tum dono jao.. baad mein hum dono athe hai...πŸ˜•

Hatim falls on kneels infront of Perizaad with one hand infront asking her to dance with her...πŸ€—

Hatim: Perizaad... mere saat chalogi??😳

Perizaad (little shy and a lot excited): ji... ha... β˜ΊοΈ

(and she place her hand in Hatim's hand and Hatim take her on the dance floor, while going Hatim makes sign to Qasim and ask him to dance with Juhi)

Qasim goes near juhi who is standing at the other side near his father

Qasim: Juhi...

Juhi: arey Qasim, tumhe hatim aur perizaad ko dekha?? kitne pyare lag rahe hai na ek saat..

Qasim: hmmm... ha...
juhi, agar bura na mano toh ek baat kahe...??

Juhi: ji... kaho...

Qasim: tumhe nachne ko jana hai... abbb... wo tum kab se dekh rahi isliye puccha..

Juhi: ha ji bilkul.. par humare pas hatim jaise dost kaha hai jo humhe waha le chale...??

Qasim: aabbb.. hum hai na.. Hatim na sahi Qasim toh hai... 

Juhi: toh challo...πŸ˜‰

(and Qasim takes juhi too on the dance floor... )

(Hatim and Perizaad starts dancing like that night.. with hand in hand and eye lock... Hatim and Perizaad just get carried away with each other... dont realize about his parents...)😳❀️

Other side, Hatim's parents talk to each other;
Queen: dekha badshah apne Hatim ko... Perizaad k saat kitna pyara lagta hai na... mano ek duse k liye bane ho...😳

King: ha shaziya, ab lagta hai Saleem k bhadshah aur Perizaad k bhai jaan Meher se inke rishtey ki baat karne hi hogi...πŸ‘

and they smile at each other...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww di
Truly amazing
I loved it
Even I thought something like this
I hope it comes true
Your are a brilliant writer