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Originally posted by: mirage123
hi hamlet hi mirage😊
fab ud...dutta & drive scene was too good😊
lover's tiff episode thanks for reading and commenting, much love hammie
Originally posted by: mirage123
hi hamlet hi mirage😊
fab ud...dutta & drive scene was too good😊
lover's tiff episode thanks for reading and commenting, much love hammie
hi hamlet hi jedy😊
superb writing...one of best episodes of LTL😊
thanks for reading and commenting ,much love hammie
hi hamlet hi dilse😊
wonderful ud😊
thanks for reading and commenting much love hammie
hi hammiee hi naku😊
jeep mein dutta ka naku ko dekhna...haiii😊loved the ud
thanks for reading and commenting,much love hammie.
LTL Written Update
Episode ~ 238
17th December 2010
Naku sits in Dutta's jeep and he takes her home..
Kala's den
Kala paces up in down deep in thought ,her two evil sisters watch her. Sudarshan comes in panting and says, khare the driver rang and told him Bhau took Nakusha to the temple!.. Leela chips in none of your moves work ! god knows what Naku has about her? you also brought in Suresh to humiliate Naku, but it no effect on Bhau.. his wife's ex lover comes into the house but Bhau even, so much so does not question Naku! this plan is not working Kala Tai!.. think of something fresh otherwise this husband and wife will reunite and we will be swatting flies! Sudarshan winds up.. fuming she smashes a flower vase on the floor. Gives Sudarshan a blood thirsty look and exits her room.
Tasha in jeep
Dutta keeps giving Naku looks via the jeeps rear mirror.. Chaskar rings and wants to know Dutta's whereabouts.. as he was waiting for him. Dutta was short with him.. while Chaskar tells him he has struck a deal with an renowned builder! Dutta checks Naku out and tells Chaskar he can't make it so do the deal yourself. Chaskar says it's our first deal , besides I 've made arrangements to celebrate this! Dutta says, change the time of the meeting and I'll get there as soon as I can! Chaskar protests I have arranged for the pandit too! you'll have to come! for vahini' sake and Dutta snubs him, don't talk rubbish! Chaskar smiles, you'll come and I am waiting for you!
Dutta stops his jeep at the side gate.. she gets off in silence and he drives off... and Naku looks on.
In the kitchen
Naku cooks.. and dreams about the beggar's prayer FB.. may god bless you as a couple... then Dutta in the jeep rolls his eyes.. at the mention of the word couple. she smiles shyly as she recalls his furtive sided looks at her in the passenger seat.. how his eyes on her instead of the road, nearly causes a collision with a pedestrian! Kala watches Naku's smug expression. Naku asks a maid if she has tidied Dutta's room. she replies she'll tidy it after she has finished her cooking. Naku tells her with a wide smile, I'll do it.. Kala looks at her.. this does not bode well for Kala...things seem to be looking good for Naku and Dutta.. as told by Naku's smile. Kala waits for the house help to leave so she and Naku can be alone.. Naku gives her a ready and waiting smile.
Kala slithers into the kitchen and hisses across at Naku over the island worktop.. you look very happy.. all because Dutta Bhau gave you a lift to the temple? Naku looks at her mockingly.. Kala continues, you think just bcause Dutta allowed you to sit in his jeep, he's forgiven you? just don't be under this illusion Nakusha .. Naku just rolls her eyes , enjoying Kala squirm... Kala sneers, here I just pulled one card out of my cards, then what would happen if I throw in my second card? Naku narrows her eyes and retorts, I don't know how to play cards Kala but I have seen my father play.. he used to say, the winner is that person who uses the right card at the right time.. so one must show patience! besides a joker cannot help you win the round Kalavati ! Kala retorts back! didn't your father tell you this that when the joker joins sides with the king and queen, the game turns! now you watch how my joker , turns your winning game around! you are cooking for Bhau? from today he will not even break bread made by your hands! you want to see what I have dished out for him today ? someone will be here shortly to serve him dessert! sneers Kala . Naku glares at her with a questioning frown.. as Kala says with deep hatred, just you be ready Nakusha! save yourself Nakusha! because if Dutta Bhau doesn't kick you out of this house today! then.. you can slap me! she says with an amused smile! Naku raises her tone, you have challenged my love and Bappa's blessings! Bappa does no injustice! so me and my Bappa accept your challenge, got that Kalavati! Kala mocks her .and Naku looks at her in pity! and leaves the kitchen!.. Naku comes and stands before Bappa's idol... today is the test between vice and virtue ,and I know you will uphold virtue! and as long as you are with me ,I fear no one!
Dutta return home drunk
Chaskar and Sudarshan accompany him. Chaskar sings , semi drunk, by the looks of it Dutta appears fairly drunk, unable to uphold himself.. he swaggers in and sits on top of the sofa back.. Chaskar sings his own praises! how his truce with Dutta will profit Bhau! Dutta rolls his eyes. Kala slithers behind Naku who prays before Bappa ..naku prays, Bappa time and again I am tested in this family! and you give me victory every time...but today the enemy has targeted my love and my character! Bappa save me today , I have never kept anything from Saab except one think... the truth behind my true colour! you know Bappa I have never even looked at another man! uphold the truth Bappa! Naku! she prays and Kala looks at her mockingly.
Dutta looks up in a drunken state... Chaskar too looks up at Dutta house standing in hall way.. and asks Sudarshan ,where he was? was it his house?.. when he's told it's Dutta's house..to impress Dutta Chaskar replies.. this is not right, I am drunk and standing in Bhau's house.. what will Bhau's sisters, mother and wife think of me?.. I have to leave! Sudarshan insists that Chaskar stay! as he wants Chaskar to see the staged show about to happen.. and then spread the news to every one about Bhau's marital crisis. But Chaskar tells Dutta he's leaving and he'll come next time when he's not drunk... Kala calls Nakusha! Dutta Bhau is here! you're ready aren't you! Chaskar wants to leave but Sudarshan offers him a small glass but he refuses and Sudarshan wants him to stay, and he even invites Bhau for a drink , which he refuses with a shake of his head. ..
Suresh comes again...
Naku! all look! Dutta turns his head frowning. and sees Suresh barging in past the two BG Naku! Dutta stands .in anger , looks at the man yelling Naku! Kala smiles and looks at Naku, ready to swallow her. Suresh yells, now this house is going to be duped too! because of that cheat! he struggles, let me go inside! Aye Sahib , Baji come down the stairs! Dutta looks at him Suresh .. Baji yells at Suresh , you've turned up again? Dutta yells Baji!! and Baji stops, and looks down. Dutta glares at Suresh, with a wave of his hands tells his BG to leave him alone.. Suresh comes to Dutta and begs, Bhau! as he stands before Dutta! Kala looks at Naku who glares back at her unafraid! Dutta asks, who are you? Suresh replies, I am Suresh the ill fated! Dutta recalls,FB the name from the letter... plus Kala's words , he's fallen in love with Nakusha's beautiful face. Suresh drops on his knees, heard a lot about you Bhau! that you are like a demi god! you are the boss! Give me justice Bhau! the whole area respects you! Dutta growls, shut up! and come to the point! Suresh insists, give me justice Bhau! Dutta says continue! Suresh delivers his dailouges.. the one you married! that Nakusha she's a fraud of the first degree! Her father took money off me, said he'll get her married to me! after that in the darkness of the night all of her and her family disappeared from the slums! after they left I found that I was not the only one, there were others too whom she duped! Sudarshan , after Chaskar had heard the crux, says to Chaskar, leave now! who says looks like Bhau's personal matter. Suresh cries.. after me Bhau , she trapped you and married you! Baji comes to him and says, shut your mouth! and Dutta yells Baji!
Baji stops from nearly striking him! Kala smiles at Naku as Dutta roars at Baji! and moves to Naku with Suresh and koel Naku picture in her hand. Dutta meanwhile signals Suresh with his hand! to continue with his story. Suresh cries, Bhau I spent everything I had on this girl! I spent money on her alcoholic father as well! Bhau I have become bankrupt! be fair Bhau! do justice! I know Bhau , you won't believe me , Nakusha is such a fraud! Dutta glares at him. sometimes she dark! sometimes she's fair! but Bhau I have brought a proof with me. shows Dutta.. a picture , this is me and this is Nakusha! koel Nakusha! Kala shows Naku a copy, would you like to see Nakusha?? Dutta stares at it! Naku stares at the copy in her hand. episode ends Hamlet53~ 5.8. 14.
Kala made a huge mistake used the picture of the dusky Naku.. the one Dutta loves
N.B ~many thanks for reading the previous wu. Mirage, jedy, dilse, uwith, Naku, bart, twinky,tammy.
Originally posted by: tamanna1391
so finally kala mohra coming infront of dutta so kala confident that much as she is giving chance nakku to slap her
hi tammy with your one liner! dutta and his huh.. huh.. face.. but its a good thing he was drunk..listens to his heart then!
much love hammie!
Hi Hamlet helllooo my sonaaa😛 your flowers cheered me up!
Awesome UD...cunning witch kala is😡thanks for reading and commenting.. sorry for delays, here hoilday season.. much love hammie
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