Ishra SS - Jaane kya tune Kahi

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Hi ppl m new here n Ishra made join IF ... Have been watching yhm regularly and I love all the FF's O'S ppl write here... M giving my try writing an SS about the confrontation between RKB and his JKR in regards to solving their relationship rues...

Ishra OS - Jaane kya tune Kahi - part 1
The story starts after Adi has apologized for Amma's accident n ishu taking the case back...
Everything is back to normal as it was before the accident Adi goes on to live wid Shagun and Raman n Ishita get back to their routine work.. Everything is same except Raman n Ishita's marriage. Ishita's trust is completely broken n she has turned cold towards Raman. She does all the wifely duties n responsibilities except for sitting with Raman n listening to his side of story. Raman has always known that he was breaking her trust with whatever he was doing but now that she took the case back he realized her real value and wanted his JKR badly back in his life the way she was... He would purposefully pick up a fight with her or try cracking some wise jokes for her reaction but nothing worked on her it was as if she had turned into a stone. He felt guilty and extreme pain about hurting the poor soul who always wished good for him, he was trying since two months to get things back to normal but in vain. Finally he decided to use his trump card Ruhi, Raman knew just as Adi is his weakness so is Ruhi for Ishita.
Raman asked Ruhi to pataofy her Ishima in going to an outdoor business event along with him. N Ruhi did just the same although it was difficult convincing Ishita to go alone with him but Ruhi found a way out saying "Ishima maine acchi Bacchi ki tarah aapki baat maani na jab aap mujhe akele shagun mummy k saath bhej rahe the... Toh babb aapki Bari aapko Bhi pappa k saath Jana padega...please Ishima please" 😳
The event was outside Delhi near Dehradun around 4-5 hours one way drive although they were supposed to return the same day back but Ishita was not comfortable spending so much time with Raman she didn't wanted to go through all the pain and hurt over n over again... But reluctantly she had agreed to her sweet angels pleas although she very well knew who was really behind it but she just cudnt say no to Ruhi.

Raman n his JKR 😆 then set onto the outdoor event on a Saturday morning... Both were dressed up in nice summer clothes with Ishita choosing to wear a cotton Saree. Raman tried hard to talk to her while driving but heart still had not melted towards him it was as if a snow had pierced through her heart and she had turned cold towards him...😔

They reached the destination Ishita saw that it was a small house perched on top of a hill that overlook a valley of green below and they had come from a concrete jungle to nature's heaven. There was a small river flowing a little below to where the house was settled and it culminated into a waterfall after some distance eventually running through the valley. 😊

Ishita realized that she was fooled into this and was really upset that Raman had to lie through their innocent daughter...
Ishita: aapne socha Bhi kaise ki aap mujhe Jhoot bolenge aur main aapki baat manungi
Raman: Ishita aisa nahi hai main tumhe sab samjhana chahta tha issliye main tumhe yaha laya... Maine Jhoot bold mujhe mad kardo
Ishita: aur kittne Jhoot bolenge aap, aur kya samjhana chahte Ho ? Jab Maine aapko samjhane ki koshish ki aapne mujhe dhoka diya hung mujhe kuch nahi samjhna hai mujhe bad yaha se jana hai wapas chaliye...
Raman: Lekin Ishita meri baat toh suno pehle...

She is highly irritated that Raman now wants to mend things when so much water has already flown over the bridge she thinks it's too late now... She's mad at him for getting her there and steps out of the car hurriedly to find her way back to Delhi, Raman gets behind her to catch but before that she stumbles upon a rock and falls some fifty feet down into the flowing waters of the river below. Suddenly she is being flown away choking and trying to take in breathes but as she is not a swimmer doesn't know what to do. Raman sees this and him being a good swimmer catches hold of her finally but they have been flown a bit away by the river. Somehow Raman manages to bring her back to the river shore but realizes that they've lost their way off the house. He drags Ishita along the way back as she is still partially unconscious after the ordeal.then as if Raman's lucky stars were working it starts raining and light drizzle turns into thundering storm. Raman had almost lost the way before finally reaching the house after sunset he realizes that Ishita is unconscious and too tired after the drowning and walking in the storm.
He takes her into the bedroom area of the house and lights the fireplace to warm them up. He tries to rub ishus feet and hands to provide her warmth but she is slowly catching fever.
Raman had actually managed to get Ishu here to convince her and forgive him about Adi accident. He had got her on a house of one of his friends back in Delhi and as they had not planned for a prolong visit they did not get any clothes and he was afraid that her condition might worsen if he took her in that condition back home. So he finally decided to undress her.
😳 😛

Plz don't throw Jura chappals my way m continuing OS n plz do comment thanks for the read!

part 1,2,3 are below

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part 6

part 7Edited by mnr123 - 9 years ago

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Pls continue... Waiting for next part...
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Nice 
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Very nice...pls continue...
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Part 2

Finally Ishu woke with a splitting headache and body ache the next day, it was sunrise time and their room had flooded with the warmth of the sun. She barely remembered the last day events after her drowning she thought that she was having a nightmare. But her nightmare was literally in front f her when she saw Raman entering with tea and sandwiches on a tray. 😆
Rage filled her veins and she remembered all that happened yesterday.
Raman: Utth Gyi Tum chalo kuch kha lo tumne kal se kuch nahi Khaya hai..
Ishita: "mujhe kuch nahi khana, mujhe bas yaha se Jana hai "n suddenly she realizes that he has changed her into bathrobe. She gets angry and tries to get off the bed but suddenly let's out an "aah" she's sprained her ankle badly yesterday and Raman had applied balm n bandaged it.

Raman catches hold of her n loses his temper : "Bahot hogaya tumhare nautanki chup chap baitho aur yeh thooso" he still has his firm grip on her n shoves off the sandwich in her mouth n she eats it without any nonsense but after she's finished

Ishita: mujhe bass yaha se Jana hai main kuch nhi Sunna chahte Hun
Raman: kiya laga k rakha hai Jana hai Jana hai main tumhe Kahi nahi Jane dunga tumhe meri baat Sunni padegi " sayin so he tightens his grip on her hand n makes her sit on the bed resting her back to the headboard and sits opposite her on the bed
Ishita: aah ur hurting mee
Raman suddenly mellows down from his initial irritation and says
"I know Ishita I am hurting u n I have hurt u a lot. That's y I just need some time with u to make u understand my problems."
Ishita cools down a bit n listens to him.
Raman: Bachpan se mujhe cheezein share Karne ki aadat nahi thi. Main sabse bada tha toh romi rinki simi mere pass aate the problems lekar n main unhe solve karta yaha tak mere dost mihir mere pass apni problems lekar aate hai mujhe apni dil ki baat samjhane nahi aati hai Ishita.
Mujhe husband wife mein trust kya Hota hai main nhi jaanta Maine kabhi shagun k saath sharing ka rishta nahi banaya. Who mujhse demand (expensive gifts, jewelry etc) karti gayi n main who poori karate Gaya Maine socha who Khush hogi aur mujhse pyar karegi. Lekin main galat tha ... Maine adi k saath Bhi wohi kiya use har who cheez Deni ki koshish kari jiase woh Khush hojayega (accident case, picnic) Lekin main abb Bhi galat tha ... Mujhe yehi laga ki adi mujhe pyar karega n pappa kahega par nahi aisa nhi hua woh abb Bhi mujhse na frat karta hai... Khair woh meri problem hai Lekin mujhe bura is baat ka laga ki Maine iss sab k beech mein tumhara dil dukhaya tumhe dhoka diya... Lekin main kya karta Ishita main "darr" Gaya tha mujhe laga ki Tum apni Amma ko insaaf dene k chakkar mein muere adi ko saza dogi...
Ishita cuts in Raman: bass itna hi jaana hai aapne mujhe ? Pata hai mujhe iss baat se dard nahi hua hai ki aap shagun ko bacha rahe the isase hua hai ki aapne mujhe trust nahi kiya ... Jab aapko laga ki param culprit hai toh Maine case wapas lend ki baat Kahi fir aapko aisa kyu laga ki main ek 11 saal k Bacche ko jail bhejungi?
Raman: yehi toh galti hui mujhse , mujhe aise baithke cheeze suljhana nhi aata ... Par mera yakeen Mano main tumhe hurt nahi karna chahta tha
Lekin adi meri kamzori nahi meri zindagi hai mere Dono Bacche meri zindagi hai ... Lekin Tum meri Saanse Ho tumne mujhe meri zindagi ko sahi mayne diye hai...
Tumhare Ane se pehle main kya tha ...ek machine Jispe sirf paisa kamane ki chahat thi iss chahat main Maine apni Bacchi ko almost kho diya...
Tumne mujhe meri zindagi di..." 😊❤️

A lone tear escapes ishus eyes but she wipes it out without letting him notice it...
Raman is on the verge f crying but he doesn't want to emotionally blackmail ishu into forgiving him...

Raman continues: Adi ne Jo Bhi kiya woh galat tha main jaanta Hun Lekin main use shagun aur Ashok k kiye ki saza nahi de sakta... Aur adi aisa bacha nahi hai ki Mai use daantu aur woh meri baat man le main chahta tha ki main use pyar se samjhau n accident ka case sab clear hone k bad main Khud tumhe Bata deta...
Mere adi ko tumhare jaisi samjhane wali maa nahi hai shagunn ne uslke dil mein zehar bhara hai mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki main iss sabko kaise handle karu...
Lekin Main apne bte ko Khush dekhna k chakkar main tumhe dukhi kiya ...😔

Ishita is slightly irritated by ramans adi jaaap she says : Raman mujhe issase koi lena nahi hai ki aap adi se pyar karate hai ya shagun se main abb bass itna Janna chahti Hun ki kya aap agar adi kahe ki mujhe chod do toh uske liye toh aap chodoge ? Kyu ki main jaanti Hun hakk se Ruhi p aap ka pehle adhikar hai Lekin main marr jaungi agar mujhe Ruhi se alag kiya toh ...

Raman is shocked at what Ishita had just asked him this thought had never crossed his mind... 😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read both the parts !! Loved it !! Hope something like dis happens in the show too... Eagerly waiting to read the next part
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Part 3

Ishita had asked him to choose between Adi and her... This was difficult than Raman thought...
Finally he mustered courage to say:
" Main aisa kaise karrr sakta Hun ?? Tum mujhe Tum Dono mein se ek ko choose Karne kahogi toh main obviously Tum Dono ko apne pass rakhunga... Main Bahot selfish Hun mujhe Tum Dono ki zarurat hai ...

Ishita cuts: bolna aasan hai but karna mushkil hai ...

Raman: Dekho main tumhe uss aurat k liye nahi chodunga jisne mera ghar ujhada mere bte ko mere khilaf bhadkaya meri Bacchi ko rota bilagta chod gayi...adi shayad aage chalke aisa Bol sakta hai lekin main use Khush Karne k chakkar main Ruhi ko dukhi nahi karunga Ruhi is my life main Ruhi aur adi mein se choose karna pade toh main Ruhi ko choose karunga kyu ki sahi mayne mein Ruhi me mujhe pappa hone ka hakk diya hai main kabhi Bhi tumhe nahi khounga Ruhi ki zindagi Ho Tum ... N tumne Bhi Humari shadi nahi todi kyu ki Tum chahti oh ki Ruhi ko uske maa baap ka pyar mile... 😳

Main tumhe samjhta Hun Ishita tumhare har choti baat main jaanta Hun ... Tumhara mere liye der rat main khana parsona , mere lapse tayyar rakhna, breakfast dinner banana, tumhara mere liye khayal rakhna main sab jaanta Hun ...
Aur main yeh Bhi jaanta Hun ki Tum yeh sab Putin zindagi bina kuch bole nibha sakta Ho ... Lekin main nahi kar sakta ... Tum isse meri kamzori samjho ya mera selfishness ... Mujhe meri Jhansi ki rani waspis chahiye ...

Ishita: itna aasan nahi hai ...

Raman : main maanta Hun itna aasan nahi hai par kya fayda Ruhi k liye Aisi compromise wali shadi jike ?
Main shayad aadi ko kho chuka Hun Lekin main tumhe nahi khona chahta ... Main Bahot tut Gaya Hun Ishita aur thank Bhi Gaya Hun...

After a while Raman has his eyes welled up with tears and in a cracking voice says:
" Maine aadi ko aapne aur lane k liye har mumkin koshish kari but main har Gaya ... Main aadi ko Bahot chahta Hun ... usase Bahot pyar karta hun ... Lekin main tumse Bhi .."
He was almost on the verge of confessing but he stops short ...

Suddenly Ishita realizes that time has stopped still n she has run away a lot from their marital discord but now with the dawn of realization she feels guilty for hurting Raman n asking him to choose between his kids and her...she had always wanted to believe that her ravan kumar will never betray her but past circumstances were not letting her believe so...

Ishita unconscious of the things happening around her lets Raman take both her hands in his and kneels down on his bended knees next to her bed 😃

Her trance is broken by his soft voice : I am sorry Ishita for all the heart break and troubles you had to go through ... But just gimme 1 chance just one chance ... Main chahta Hun ki tumhe zindagi ki har khushi mile ... Tum meri patni oh aur tumhara mujpar poor a adhikar hai ...
Main Aajke bad humesha koshish karunga ki tumhe Khush rakhu ... Main jaisa Bhi Hun tumhara Hun sirf tumhara ...

U deserve a Gud life aur main tumhe zaroor dunga ,Ruhi k liye nahi ,mere liye nahi par tumhare liye... Bass mujhe ek aur mauka do ... ❤️

Ishita had enough n was now crying after listening to his heartfelt apologies says : yeh mere liye itna aasan nahi hai Raman ... Mera bharosa tuta hai woh apne aap Judd toh nahi sakta ... Main aapko maaf karti Hun ... Lekin main aapke saath shyd pati patni ka rishta nahi bana paun main iske liye tayyar nahi Hun ...
Haan Lekin hum dost ki tar ah pehle se shuruwat toh kar sakte hai ... Aur dosti ka ek usool hai ki Hume hare baat share Karni padegi " 😊

Suddenly she feels as if someone has removed a huge stone off her heart... She looks at the beautiful valley outside the window and limps towards it to breathe fresh air and soak sunshine as if to gain some energy ...
She did not forgive Raman but he had helped her let go off the pain n hurt she was bearing she was thinking about how the past night was and how she was drowning in the river of pain n sorrow n how Raman saved her and after a stormy night how they had a beautiful sunrise to new life...

Raman gave a smirk once he heard that Ishu has forgiven him he comes next to her standing near the window gazing the natural beauty 😳
N says : waise tumhe Pata hai ...
Ishita : kya
Raman: ummm sharing se yaad aaya ( he's now facing her n piercing sharply at her eyes trying to find something, this somehow hypnotizes her n she gazes back into his eyes) ... Sharing se yaad aata ki kal raat ko kuch aisa hua Jo tumhe jaana Bahot zaruri hai ...
Ishu lets out a hmmm
Raman is now pulling Ishu towards him with his arms around her waist
N is whispering : kal raat tumhe Bahot sardi lagi toh Maine tumhare ermmm lapse it are ... Aur mujhse raha nahi eeerrrmmm Gaya
Ishu is blinking at what he's saying n thinks ohh that explains the body ache a slight blush was creeping her face [:d]
Raman : mujhse raha nahi Gaya ... Aur Maine ... Aur Maine
"Yeh dekha ki Tum Kitni Moti Ho Jhansi ki rani kuch karo"

Ishu is flabbergasted at what he just said she's back to her JKR mode n starts beating Raman with her fists while Raman is laughing at her stupidity ...

She breaks his embrace n just mutters an irritated "kuch Bhi" n joins in his laughter...

Obviously RKb being him didn't wanted to play " we r just Gud friends" card hence he had to trick Ishu to get her back...

N the valley is witnessing the sweet bickerings of RKb n his JKR ... 😳




Edited by mnr123 - 9 years ago
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Thanks a lot dearies for reading it I know posts are really long but just wanted to give a Gud justification for what both Ishra have to say ... Criticism is always welcome...
😃Edited by mnr123 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZedZee

Read both the parts !! Loved it !! Hope something like dis happens in the show too... Eagerly waiting to read the next part



Thanks for reading but I highly doubt if cvs wud've show something like this on the show ...

N once they show the confession they will hv no idea how to take it forward 😆