Love me or Hate me,A Kriyansh Story(update on Thread 2) - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AishPoojaKR

superb update

i loved it

thanks a lot for pm

update soon

pooja thaank uuu fr the wonderful comment😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SweetDevil_KR

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luvd ur update
that cheap shivam i will kill him
how dare he
why kriya doing this &
rey
jaldi update warna main volcano ban jaoongi

yaa shivam is a chipko here,but dont worry apne rey hai na😃 kriya was playing the game only😳 and rey bhi apne khud ke insecurities sort out kar raha tha!!😳 actually the situation and ofcrse the seniors ae to be blamed!!!😡😡 o god tum volcano ke roop mein😲 i will hopefully update in the weekend😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey akansha i will update it tomorrw hopefully,and thannk uu for the comment 😊😊
Edited by pia.raha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PHASE SEVEN OF THEIR LIVES: (FRIENDS OR FOES)

That day for the 1st time,the atmosphere was very tensed up,and no one could do anything to lighten up the atmosphere..Rey whose presence only makes everyone smile,he was in a sulking mood,Vicky was trying to talk to him in between the classes,but he was failing miserably as Rey wasn't letting him talk.

On the other hand Kriya was trying very hard to control her tears,swayam tried to console her but kriya told him to concentrate on the classes because Kriya didn't wanted anyone to console her as she knew she would break down then.😭

The classes ended on a bitter note... and as soon as the bell rang kriyansh tried to get out of the classroom and in the process they came face to face,it was difficult to tell which face showed more anger,and they both stormed out.😡

In the evening swayam went to kriya's home. Kriya was sitting in her bedroom and was in a very bad mood.

Swayam: kriya tu aise serious mat raha kar,mujhe bilkul achha nehi lagta

Kriya: plzz swayam leave me alone for some time

Swayam: kriyuuu mein tujhe akela kabhi nehi chod sakta,...(after a long pause)... afterall tere pass mere saare screts hai,agar tujhe chod diya,to tu to mere saare secrets reveal kar degi sab ke pass jakar (swayam called her kriyu sometimes)

Kriya gave a sad smile,and tears were already started to flow from her eyes😭

Swayam: kriyaa don't cry yaar,it was just a bad day,Vicky was also telling that Rey

Kriya(who was crying,and was angry,and was hurt too---just couldn't control her emotions): uska naam mat lo mere samne,mujhse kisi ne itne bure taarikein se kabhi baat nehi ki hai,aur usne sab ke samne mujhe itna kuch kaha

Swayam: kriya,shayad uuse koi cheez distrb kar rahi hai

Kriya: swayam main kuch sunna nehi chahti,wo itna arrogant hai ke itna sab kuch hone ke baad ek sorry tak nehi nikla uske muh se

Swyam: kriya tu

Kriya: nehi swayam,galti meri hi hai maine hi usme kuch achha dekh ne koshish kar rahi thi,but now I know wat type of person he is,mera 1st impression hi sahi tha,,I JUST HATE HIM!!!!!!!

Swayam: achha thik hai,ab tu thoda cooll down ho ja,and mujjhe wo 32 all out wala smile de

kriya gave him a small smile😊

swayam: itne chote se smile se mera maan nehi bharta,I want that biggest smile!!! And he started tickling her. And kriya couldn't control her giggle!!!😃

Swayam then went to meet Vicky.

Vicky: swayam,us ghar ka vatavaran kaisa hai??

Swayam: Thunder aur lightning zoro se ho raha hai,maine thodi der ke liye toofan ko delay kar diya hai,thoda temperature bhi kaam karne ki koshish ki,par ye toofan thamne nehi wala

(for those who are not undrstnding wat swamcky are discussing,I will help u guys, they are discussing about kriya's temper)

Swayam: yaaar Vicky mujhe khud ko counselor ki tarah lag raha hai,sab ki counseling karta phir raha hu!!

Vicky: haan tere to double duty chal raha hai

Swyam: night duty tu lagana,mein sirf kriya ki vaakalat karke ghar bhagunga

Vicky: achha thik hai tu kriya ki vaakalat karna aur mein rey ke sudden chnge ke baarein mein pata lagauyanga

Swamcky went to rey's home.

Rey: tum dono yaha, dekho mera dimag waise bhi nehi chal raha hai,ab tum dono mera dimag aur kharab mat karo

Vicky: dimag chal nehi raha hai,is liye to dhakka dene aaye hai

Swayam: dekh rey mujhe pata nehi tune class mein aise rude behavior kyun ki hi,mein sirf itna kehne aaya hu,that Kriya is not at all arrogant,she is a very sweet rather the sweetest,the most simple and innocent girl one can ever found,aur usne tumhe jo thappar mara tha wo isliye kyunki hum logo ne uuse dare diya tha,aur ye wo tumhe bata bhi deti,par uuse pehle tu uspe baras para,no one has talked to her like that ever,and u have hurt her a lot. Mein sirf isiliye aaya hu,kyunki I don't want any misundrstnding between my two friends and mein nehi chata ke koi kriya ke baarein mein galat soche.😳

Swayam went to his home after saying all this.

Rey who was trying to justify his actions for being rude to kriya, started feeling little guilty after swayam told him everything

Rey: Vicky,kya swayam sahi bol raha tha

Vicky: haan judge sahib,swayam bilkul thik bol raha tha,par tu mujhe ye bol ke tu atom bomb ke tarah kyun burst hua,iise pehle bhi hum logo ne kitne baar truth dare khela hai,and we used slapping some1 as a dare before also!!

Then rey narrated the story to Vicky

Vcky: what the heck!!! In logo ki himmat kaise hui!!! Aur tune bhi mujhe collge mein kuch nehi bataya

Rey: mein khud hi itna confused tha,aur upar se kriya ne

Vicky: cummon dude,even I have interacted with her,she is really very sweet,tu bekar uus bechari ko itna kuch suna diya

Rey: ya dude,mujhe uuse is tarah se baat nehi karna chahie tha,newayys,agar galti ki hai to sudharna to padega hi😊

Vicky: dats like my best buddy!!! But brace urslf bcoz ladkiyo ko manana,matlab jung mein utarne ke bararbar hota hai!!😆

Rey: I just hope Jhansi ki rani mujhe murder na karde😳

Vicky: iisee pehle ke tu shahid ho jaaye,let me wish u happy frndship day buddy!!😊

Rey: are haan 12 baj gaaye,happy frndship day tuje bhi yaar!!!😊

Next day at college,

Kriya jst entered the classroom when some1 hugged her (stop imaginig guys,its swayam)

Swayam: happy frndship day kriyaa!!!😊

Kriya: happy frndship day swayam!!! Be my friend always,and she tied a friendship band on his hand,and he gifted her fav chocolate,it was their every year's custom!!😊

Every1 wished each other.😊

Rey hugged swayam and wished him.

Rey (with a proper smile and not a smirk): hiii kriya,happy frndship day😊

Kriya looked at another side completely ignoring him,and her face was completely filled with anger

Rey: kriya listen,mein tumse kal ke liye,sorry bolna chatu hu,kriya wo mein

kriya : swyam can I sit on ur other side (the side whch is not near rey's )

swayam looked at rey and signaled that he couldn't help him,and he swapped seats with kriya

rey went and got seated

Vicky: Rey 0 kriya 1😆

Rey: shut up yaar Vicky,ye kriya to silent mode mein chali gayi hai😲

Vicky: matlab sab se danger mode bhai,ladkiya jab silent rehti hai matlab beta shahid hone ka time aa raha hai😳

Rey: vicky,agar tujhe ladkiyo ke barein mein itna gyan hai to mujhe bhi thoda bohot knowledge hai,kriya ka gussa tab hi shant hoga jab wo ye silent mode se bahar niklegi,mein uuse itna pareshan karunga ke wo barse gi,aur uska sara gussa niklega aur uuse mujhe maaf kar na hi padega!!!😉

Vicky: all the best buddy😃

And from that time every minute of kriya's life was filled with rey's sorry😆

Rey started to pass small pieces of paper to kriya where in bold letters were written SORRY,and those pieces of paper were travelling via every1 vicky,swayam,Sharon koi bhi nehi bacha postman banne se,and kriya was crushing those papers and throwing it on the ground.😛

Agar ye sab kam tha to rey was blcking kriya wherever she was going.

Rey: kriya I am sorry,maaf kar do na

Kriya: agar kisi ka murder kar do,aur phir sorry bolo to kya wo thik ho jayega

Rey was thinking of wat to say but he didn't have to😲

Kriya: nehi thik hoga,to ye sorry ka pitara mere samne mat kholo!!!😡

By saying this,kriya went on her way,rey called her name but she didn't stop.

Kriya went to the canteen,and rey kriya ke samne baith gaya.

Rey: mein kehna chahta tha k har mujlim ko apni safai mein kehna ka mauka hota hai my lord😃

Kriya rolled her eyes and got up in an irritated way,and was trying to get out of the canteen,but rey wasn't letting her,he was blcking her and was saying sorry in different tones!!!

Kriya tried to push rey,to get out of her way,and rey held her hand.

Rey: kriya today is frndship day,is day ke honour mein hi mujhe maaf kar do😊

Kriya sahked his hand off her hand.

Kriya: frndship day doston k liye hota hai dushmano k liye nehi!! By saying this,she was gone😡

Rey: aj ka din khatam hone se pehle meint umhe apna friend bana kar rahunga,miss.baatcutter!!!😉

akansha and meghna finally i have updated,aur wo bhi 12 baaje se pehle so technically aj hi kiya😆 thaank uu for hurrying me up😃 ria thank uu for the name swamcky😉
monica,hina,akansha,meghna,ria,sanchita,sana,anjali,rajeshwari,kiara,blakcheart,pooja a thaank uu soo muchh for thee superbb comments,i long for ur lovely,long comments guyss!!!🤗 sumimita my new reader thank uu for reading it😊😊

Edited by pia.raha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
me 1st
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awesum pia...
Loved it...
Kria is so sad plus angry on rey...
Lekin thank god rey ko akal aa gayi...
Acha hua kria usse attitude dikha rai hai...
Feeling like kicking those seniors...
Update soon...
N thanx for mentioning my name in update...(blush)
Edited by Meghna_kriyansh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
guys i am enoc**tering a problem,i dont know whether its an internet connection problem or something else the no of pages which are there in this post,its sometimes howin 22,smetimes 23,where as i know its 25,also the no of pms are chnging every time i reload!!!😭😭😭 agar kisi ke paass koi solution ho then plzz dena and till then enjoy the update,hopefully its enjoyable😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally u updated ..thank god...
rey ko akhir pata chal hi gaya...
kria aage aage...rey peeche peeche...
superb...
lets see un seniors ka kya hota hai...nd also kr performance...
k excited
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Posted: 11 years ago
aawesome
luvd it
yupi balle balle
abh to rey ki lag gayi mazzaa aagaya
thora aur nachho mrey ko kroya
muah
just luvd it
keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read d whole
It's wow wow wowww!!!!
Srsly I want the best part jaldi
Rey n kriyas fights
Kriyas feelings
It was just amazing
Loved it
Update soon

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