Aditya Shrivastava & Ansha Sayed's Essay Contest-Results (Pg 3) - Page 2

gadhadada

@gadhadada

IF-Addictz

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

THEME: FIVE

Entry 1: (7/10)

it's really Nice to Read PURVI Journey but it's Not REAL COP as per Theme and topic...😊😊

I really appreciated U gave the Information of each and Every Small Centric Scene of PURVI with Episode Names...👏👏

Entry 2: (8/10)

Just One Suggestion, Plz Dunt Compere Cops with each other...😊

All the Best to All Participants...👍🏼

Thank you so much...😳

@RAVI... Lovely Job...👏👏

Thank You so much...😳

All the Best to All Participants...👍🏼

Thank You so much...😳😳

Edited by gadhadada - 9 years ago

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Veena..

@Veena..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Entry 1: very nice eassy, good to read purvi's journey in CID till now. Good job👍🏼 7.5/10

Entry 2: very well descirbed a real cop, her bonding with others, welldone job. 8.5/10

Ravi bhai superb writing 👏

Very nicely u deacribed their bond, great work 👍🏼

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LavenderBloom

@LavenderBloom

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Theme 5

Entry 1- 8.5/10

the essay is excellent and superb...👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️
i loved the way you described Purvi didi's cases giving perfect examples...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
it was memorable to read it...😊😊😊😎😎😎👏
the essay aptly describes didi's journey in Cid from the beginning till now... 😊👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️

overall the essay was awesome, informative lovely and impressive...😊😎😎👍🏼👍🏼👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
thank you for that wonderful sweet writing... 👍🏼👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Entry 2- 9.5/10

i loved your essay, your style of writing and content... 😊😊😊👏👏👏
fabulous use of language and amazing content... ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
the introduction was fantastic... 👏😎😎👏👏👏👏
i enjoyed reading each and every sentence... 😊😊👏👏
you clearly and efficiently described the bonding of Purvi didi with other team members.. hats off to you...⭐️👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️

overall the essay was remarkable, stunning and outstanding...😎😎👍🏼👍🏼😊😊👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
thank you for that beautiful cute writing...👍🏼👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

<this review is my personal opinion and i am very sorry if i hurt the feelings and views of the writers unknowingly..> Edited by LavenderBloom - 9 years ago

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LavenderBloom

@LavenderBloom

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Theme 1

Entry- 9.5/10

@Ravi bhaiya...
Bhaiya this is the first time i am reading an essay written by you...

i am impressed by your writing,content and fluency of language...😊😊😊😊😊😊👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
the essay was short but very beautiful and heart touching...😊😊😊😊👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
i loved each and every sentence written about their bond...👏👏👏👏

the essay had a classic touch...👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️😎😎
wonderful thoughtful introduction.and brilliant ending...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
your views were clearly reflected in the essay...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️😎

overall the writing was incredible, electrifying, memorable and enchanting... 👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️😎😎
thank you for this charming,delightful,splendid,marvelous essay... 👏😎😎👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

<this review is my personal opinion and i am very sorry if i have hurt your feelings and views unknowingly..>

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LavenderBloom

@LavenderBloom

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Posted: 9 years ago

i appreciate and applaud the organizers for organizing this event beautifully and opening this thread... 😊😊😊😊👏👏👏👏
i applaud the participants for their lively participation.. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏⭐️👏👏⭐️
All the best..👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️😊😊😊

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Soni.

@Soni.

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Theme 1 - Ravi - Loved your piece of writting. It was simply flawless. Absolutely beautiful

Theme 5 -

Entry 1 - The journey of Purvi was really beautifully described. Excellent piece of work - 8

Entry 2 - The bonding you described with ACP sir, Adi sir and others were described very nice. Loved your admiration for Purvi - 9

All of you have done a great work 👏

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 9 years ago

Lovely essays everyone. I am sorry I forgot to go through this one. I thought I had..😳

Theme 5:

Entry 1: Nice long description of Purvi's exploits and it was very informative to someone like me who hasn't been watching CID regularly in the last few months. I will look up to this essay whenever I need info about Purvi. I think this should be included in Ansha's AT. 😊 I would have normally given this one a 9, but there's a word limit of 400 mentioned in the rules which I am sure has been exceeded. Hence I give you an 8/10.

Entry 2: A very beautifully written essay about Purvi. Loved reading it. 😊

8.5/10

Theme 1:

A very well written essay about Abhijeet-Purvi. I want to see a normal platonic friendship between a guy and a girl on the CID team...I miss it from the Asha-duo and Muskaan-duo times. I hope FW develops this nicely like written in this essay and prove that all girls need not be romantically paired with someone on the team. Good one. 👍🏼

Edited by visrom - 9 years ago

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