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Aditya Srivastava & Ansha Sayed Bday - Poetry Cnts Result (Pg 3)

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Themes:

Theme 1
Transition Aditya to Abhijeet:
 As CIDians and Aditya sir fans we speculate a lot about how actually be. What must be in his mind before stepping into Abhijeet's shoes? The theme wants you to use your creativity and think what must be his frame of mind in the process of Transition from Aditya to Abhijeet. You have all the freedom to think and write it your way provided, it shouldn't be derogatory, attacking, vulgar or offensive.

Theme 2
Ansha the Versatile:
 We have seen Ansha maam doing so many amazing roles. She has almost mastered the switch on switch off acting. The theme wants you to explore your creativity and write about her versatile acting skills. Speaking about Ansha as Purvi or any other character from any other show will do but the poem should be Ansha centric and not Purvi centric.

Theme 3
A Diligent Senior - A Model Junior:
 
Here you can speak of the amazing connect between Abhijeet and Purvi. For those who want to write the same about Aditya Ansha, you have all the freedom to do so. However the theme wants you to keep it strictly professional. Avoid derogatory, attacking, vulgar or offensive language

 

Contest Rules:

1.       All entries must be either in Hindi or English or mix of both

2.       One can take part in all the three themes but only one entry per theme is allowed.

3.       Max 3 entries per participant

4.       The Poem should be of minimum 12 lines and maximum 60 lines.

5.       Please do not send any offensive entries. Keep respect of the actors by sending decent entries avoiding embarrassment.

6.       All the entries should be sent by 6th July to Sonali.' in a pm titled "Poem Contest Entry" by 12 P.M IST

7.       Any of the above rules are not followed, the entry will be disqualified.


Rules for Voting:

1.    You have to Rate the poem out of 10   

2.       x/10, y/10, z/10

3.       Adding a review to the poem would be added advantage.



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Posted: 9 years ago

Entry 1

A short poem written by stepping into Aditya sir's shoes.
Then and Now!

I was not sure what I felt, 
Nor was I sure about tomorrow,
Where it would land me up in, 
Still I knew I had something in me, from none I can borrow.

I was not sure how I took the task
Yet I believed I could accomplish.
A task not so easy, of a cop
Now the same role, I relish.

Post playing as a vile and vicious one
I knew I could do this too, alright.
With my hopes and prayers, I set my foot
To play the role in Stolen Dynamite.

Quite easy as then the seed was planted.
Little I knew that the roots would grow deep 
I gave my soul, my heart  to the work I did.
For I knew, I would never let it fall steep.

Here I am now, in that chosen path
Where I was destined to plant my feet, 
To tread on and carve my own way. And now,
I see Abhijeet in me and me in Abhijeet! 

Edited by Sonali. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Entry 2

Yaad hai aaj bhi gujra hua woh kal mujhko

Ek ajnabi ki tereh  mila woh jis pal mujhko

Kehne ko toh wo sirf ek kirdaar tha naya

Jisko nibhaane ka mauka kismet ne mujhe diya.

 

Na jaane kya  tha usme jo is dil ko bha gaya

Aur dheere-dheere jaise main usme samaa gaya

Yun toh nibhaaye aur bhi kirdaar maine magar

Uski daastan thi auron se zara hatkar.

 

Seene me tha toofan uske aankhon me ek kashish thi

Farz ke naam per mit jaana,bus ek yehi khwaaish thi.

Uljha  hua tha wo ateet ki dhundli yaadon mein

Kuchh anjaane rishton mein kuchh mushkil haalaton  mein.

 

Sachchai aur imaandari ki ek misaal tha who

Saahas aur soojh-boojh  me bhi kamaal tha who

Uska her ehsaas mujhe apna sa lagne laga

Phir to jaise woh mujhme, aur main usme dhalne laga.

 

Yun toh mile the hum bus kuchh hi din ke liye

Per dekhte hi dekhte barson guzar gaye

Socha nahi tha ek din aisa bhi aayega

Jab naam uska meri  pehchaan ban jaayega.

 

Yunhi  saath uske jeevan ka safar tay karta gaya

Aur har din us kirdaar me ek naya rang bharta gaya

Nibhaaya nahi balki maine jiya hai uski zindagi ko

Uske her imtehaan  ko,har ghum ko har khushi ko.

 

Yun toh humdono hain ek duje se kaafi juda

Phir bhi  jaane kyun lagta hai jaise wo aksh hai mera

Meri bhi thi chaahat kuchh karoon desh ki khaatir

Auron ke liye jiyun aur maroon desh ki khaatir

 

Usne meri  har dabi  khwaaish ko poora kiya

Kayi khoobsurat rishte diye,ek  naya  parivaar diya

Usse milkar to jeene ke maayne badal gaye

Manzilen badal gayi,raaste badal gaye.

 

Auron ke liye beshaq woh  hoga Abhijeet

Per mujhko toh wo mera hi ek roop hota hai prateet

Ab toh uske bina jaise meri pehchaan  adhoori hai

Aur uske zikr se hi hoti meri  kahaani  poori hai.

 

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Posted: 9 years ago
Sirf 2 entries πŸ˜’

Sonali can u change the title of the thread ?
'Aditya Srivastava & Ansha Sayed Bday - Poetry Contest Rating thread'

I have no so much knowledge on poem so don't feel bad with my rate or comment ! πŸ˜›

Entry 1 - 8.5

Entry 2 - 9

Wonderful poems..very difficult to judge which one is the best...i love both ⭐️ A request to the writers please reveal ur names to me...of course PM πŸ˜† i want to add it on the bday thread...dnt worry my rate will not be changed
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW, both the poems are just mindblowing.πŸ‘πŸ‘
Very accurately written. Hats off to the writers as i know that writing poems isn't that easy. It requires deep imagination and perfect vocabulary. Excellent work done.⭐️ 

Ratings : 
Poem 1 - 8
Poem 2 - 9
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Deba done... 


Yaa its sad jus 2 poems... Even I wanted to write as I was hosting I didn't...
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Posted: 9 years ago

I am not rating anything Sonali. Both are good. For me both participants are winners just because they sent in some entries.. I am disappointed with the contests this time. Sorry. Please don't mind.

Edited by visrom - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow...wow...wow...πŸ‘πŸ‘ both the poems are really  Superb,heart touching and perfectly  match with the theme...πŸ˜›
Sonali,should we really rate them...???😲
both are winners for me...πŸ˜›β­οΈ
though i really want to know the name of participant  for entry 2πŸ˜›

Poem 2 is excellent...loved it...πŸ‘β­οΈ
Edited by Abhi-Anamika - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Rate the poems on this thread itself... 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaar I mean, seriously? Just 2 entries for poetry too πŸ˜² Where have the writers of our forum gone😲.. Man seriously! This hurts! 
Anyhow a big applause to the 'busy' people who at least wrote and sent in

Entry 1: 8/10
Entry 2: 8.5/10

I'm sorry. I'm someone who gives detailed feedbacks on poetry contest but too disappointed this time, so just voting. But believe me, both the poems were mind blowing πŸ‘πŸ‘β­οΈ