A Tale Of Romance And Parody : SS (Part 4 on Page 6) 28/10

OmkaraKiParvati

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Posted: 9 years ago

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OmkaraKiParvati

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Posted: 9 years ago

No comments ??? No likes ??? 😭

Is it tht khataara ??? Criticisms are also welcome.. I suck at writing romance..

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Foram

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Posted: 9 years ago

mast che...
loved it...
but its ss so wen u updating next part???

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Foram

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: veeranu
No comments ??? No likes ???😭
Is it tht khataara ??? Criticisms are also welcome.. I suck at writing romance..

abey nautanki... u just updated... saans to lele... ppl are lost in RagNa land...comment karn me time lagega

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OmkaraKiParvati

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: foram.
mast che...
loved it...
but its ss so wen u updating next part???

Its a short story.. Story over...

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Foram

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: veeranu

Its a short story.. Story over...

ohk..
and u are an amazing writer

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Anusuya

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Posted: 9 years ago

😳😳😳😳😳

When r u gonna update next part...

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Roshna

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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb yaa:) Very nice...Dont stop this just continue writing🤗

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Arpita

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice start deepu..continue soon..

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sonia

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Posted: 9 years ago

awsum deepu👏👏👏... very beautifully written.. luvd d way u depicted dere feelings fr eachother !!

update soon,, will be wating 😳😳.. dnt let poo cm in b/w dem 😕

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