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Posted: 11 years ago
Love the update
Beautifully written
Love it zoya sitting in the moonlight admiring her ring
He comes to talk they talk work related she is stressed her relax her
He is so amazing and understanding have a solution to all her problems
Ayaan comes and poke his nose glad she ask him if couples can't have friendly convo
So she is cold he hugs her wow she rested her head on his shoulder and him on her head and closes his eyes
So comfortable with each other and also, Mona and raabert bond form
So,zoya will stay with blossoms and teach her special kids he is proud
She got her transfer when she needs and her time off
So nikaah in 2 wks like how she calm ayaan down
She is already taking care of her new family
So is their love already hmmm
So,the baby will be taken care of when he comes the baby have to go to Bhopal too😆
Continue soon enjoy vacation
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing chapter...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you so much all of you for the lovely comments! I shall reply individually to all in a while! Love you all! ~ Mrina <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Thank you so much all of you for the lovely comments! I shall reply individually to all in a while! Love you all! ~ Mrina <3


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Mina Di,

I love you loads

This chapter was just flawless... enchanting... perfection... awesomeness... fantastic

Zoya sat in her night suit on the swing in the garden of their farmhouse admiring the ring on her finger. The moon light fell on her petite form making the diamond on the ring shine even more. She put her legs up and hugged them as she closed her eyes feeling the cool breeze on her face.

Engagement ho gayi... yay... I am so happy... these first lines are my fav in the whole chapter... there is something about these lines 😳
Thank you baby! 😳

"You mean you teach the disabled?", he asked in surprise with a proud feeling bursting in his heart.

She smiled.

"I teach the mentally and physically challenged kids. We shouldn't call them disabled. They are just different. They are very capable of leading a happy life if given a chance you know!", she announced.

"You know what, I truly respect you so much Zoya!", he said with a proud smile playing on his lips.


I am so proud of Zoya... Asad definitely is lucky and so is Zoya as her fiance supports her totally ⭐️

Both are lucky but Zoya is way more lucky. Reasons would be revealed as and when I progress with the story! 😃


"How unromantic!", taunted Ayaan.

"Kya ye zaroori hai ke agar ek couple saath mein baitthe ho, to romance ho? Why can't a husband wife, or a boyfriend and girlfriend sit and have a friendly talk?", asked Zoya.


True... so true... completely agree with Zoya here.. 😊

That's my POV that I put through Zoya's dialogues! 😊


"Kitna achha mausam hai na? Infact kitni achhi raat hai! It's beautiful. Chand aur taarey aasmaan ko kitna khoobsurat bana dete hain!", said Asad.


This dialogue took me to the phone convo between ZaShaf after the engagement... the chakor chand one ❤️

These are Armaan's Dialogues from DMG!


He stifled his laugh and shifted closer to her and wound his arms around her shoulder. She smiled at the first time closeness they were sharing. She kept her head on his shoulders as his arms wound around her. He kept his head on her head and closed his eyes. They themselves didn't know how long they sat in that position when suddenly it started drizzling. They broke apart quickly and ran towards the main door of the house. They managed to not get drenched and laughed. There was so much comfort in their relationship and neither of them felt weird after the time they spent on the swing.


This is romance and this is the most beautiful feeling for them at present

This is romance in real sense! ❤️


"Thanks Bhabhi. You're a great friend. Ab main phone rakhta hoon. Aap aur bhaijaan apni unromantic baatein kijiye!", he chuckled.


Mona-Rabert... I love this totally love their bond 🤗

There won't be too much of them in this though! 😳 But sufficient to keep you happy! 😉


"Asad, mere baby ko bhi Bhopal le jaana hai mujhe.", she informed.


"We'll see to that once I'm there. We'll see what to do with your baby!", he replied with a smile.


This was so cute... baby... the car... 😃

Haha.. More of such convos coming soon! 😆


And about your vacation... I know when and where you going and after how many days exactly 😉

You know everything! 🤗


Replied! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R

Yaayyy!! The engagement is done.. 🥳

Aww she was admiring her ring.. She is so falling in love already.. 😳

Itni jaldi kahan? Abhi to bohot kuch hai! 😛

Asad and Zoya's talk about her transfer was so cute..
He is proud of her being a teacher in a physically and mentally challenged school.. 😳
She is grateful that he is supportive of her work.. 🤗
He is helping her out with her transfer as he feels happy in her continuing in the same school... 😃

He is an amazing husband. You'll see more of it soon! 😳

Ayaan.. .. seriously... he came to disturb their romantic moment even if they had one.. 😡
Kabab mein haddi..
But he got it right back when he realized they were doing boring talks.. 😆

He is adorable DD! 😊

Loved Asya's cute moment in the swing till the rain planned on disturbing it.. 😆
There was so much comfort in their relationship and neither of them felt weird after the time they spent on the swing.👏😳

Truly my favourite part! 😃

Awww.. love the bhabhi-devar bond..😃
Ayaan calls her when he is troubled.. loved that part a lot..😃
and her assuring Asad that everything is fine with ayaan.. 🤗

All's well.. Just exam tension! 😆

Hehehe.. their flirting attempt was cute.. waiting for the full version of it.. 😉😆

Full version would come soon after the wedding..! 😉

"Asad, mere baby ko bhi Bhopal le jaana hai mujhe.", she informed.🤣
"We'll see to that once I'm there. We'll see what to do with your baby!", he replied with a smile.😳
"Good Night!", she said.😳
"Good Night Beautiful!", he replied.☺️
She laughed and cut the call.

Loved the update.. 😃😳

Thanks so much DD! 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yumna.imad

R 😃
Unres
OK I know I'm late main kal hi unres kardeti lekin event main Jana tha
Amazing update 👏
Hayeeer they are engaged
Loved their convo 😳 Asad is so understanding
Ayaan 😆
Overall an awesome update 😃
Loved it 😳 ❤️
Finally Mona - rabbert ⭐️
Update soon 😊
Love u Di 🤗


Thanks Yumz! 😳 I'm so glad you liked the update! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mona12345

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Yo Hey !!

So, the engagements done ! 😃
Love how Asad is so understanding ! Zoya and is relations building on slowly !! 👍🏼

Like the glint of mischief in Asad ! 'Nikaah ke baad dekhenge ! Ahem! 😳

Mona-Rabart are here ! 😃

Loved the moment spent on the swing! So cute ! 😳

Chalo , abh bye !

And... Let the Vacayyy begginn !!! 🥳⭐️

❤️🤗


Chalo chalo.. side to.. pagal aurat aayi hai! 😆

Tu to gutter mind ki bhi hadd hai.. 😛

Bye.. 😳 Vacayyy begins on Tuesday!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

They got engaged 😳


Zoya is really very generous 😊

And Asad is very understanding😳

Poor ayaan uski teasing ka kuch nahi hua😆

Tsk ... Tsk... Tsk... Uske exams hai😆

Awww Zoya wants to take her baby too 😛

And that convo.. Di I swear u are u r fab with phone convos 👏

Enjoy ur vaccations🤗


Thanks so much Niya baby! 🤗
I know I'm fab with phone convos! 😉
Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Res 😃
Unres 😳

Adorable update ! loved the cute garden scene, even i'm impressed with Zoya 👏 Ayaan coming to disturb their not-so-romantic talks ! 🤣 how Asad shielded her from cold ! ☺️

Loved Mona-Rabert bonding ! 😆

Asad and flirting ?! ☺️ ❤️

Loved it !! 🤗 ❤️


Thanks so much Bano! 🤗 Glad you loved it! ❤️

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