Os : adi : can I join in aunty

Hi frns !! just an attempt on how Adi n ishita tracks should move on

 

Os : adi:  can I join in aunty

 

OK here it goes from where the episode ended

 

Ishita driving with Adi towards the mall

Ishita gets a call from clinic

 

Sarika : mam you coming to the clinic na to fix cap of that kid ?

Ishita : hmm sarika can you delay the appointment for like 2-3 hours am actually out for sum work

Sarika : sure mam

Adi ( wonders she left her work 4 me n is thinking when last he went out with shagun )

Ishita : Adi chalo beta we are here

Adi : haan chalo I want to get over with this asap

Ishita locks the car n both of them move towards the shop

 

Shopkeeper how can I help you mam sir

Adi : I need school dress for myself

Ishita ( shows the shop keeper the older 1 &scans Adi n orders for a size)

 

Shopkeeper gets the size &handovers it to Adi

Ishita : go Adi try it out

Ishita back to shopkeeper can I have shoes n socks for him n tells him the size

 

( mean while she is shopping 4 ruhi)

 

Adi ( In changing room how she is aware about my size she was so apt even mumma doesn't know)

 

Adi comes out ishita scans him up &tells the shopkeeper to pack the dress

N asks Adi to ttry the shoes as well &hands him shoes she selected for him

 

Adi: I dnt need them

Ishita : take it as a gift from ruhi.. She loves her bro n she wud b glad to know her Bhaiya appreciated her love

 

Adi( how can she b so apt again with the size ) &continue wearing them

Ishita gets a call from ruhi

 

Ruhi : ishimaa aap kaha ho m missing u

Ishita: beta m out with Adi Bhaiya

Ruhi: wow ishimaa aap bhaiya k saath ho

Ishita : yes beta

Ruhi( feels bit low) aap akele Gaye.. Mujhe bhi Bhaiya se milna that

Ishita: awww my bacha.. Don't feel so low mumma vl take ruhi out also

LOoo Bhaiya se baat Karo n hands the phone to Adi

 

Adi ( confused) : hello

Ruhi: Adi bbhaiya how are you

Adi: oh ruhi ( n smiles) m fine how r u?

Ruhi : Bhaiya ap mujhe bhi lejaate shopping karne firr aap mein ishimaa papa sab ice cream bhi kaha ke aatee.. We wud Have hadfun togthr Bhaiya

Adi : ruhi m only with ishita

Ruhi: Bhaiya promise me u wud spend time with us

Adi ( feeling weird said) OK

Ruhi Bhaiya loot lo ishimaa KO n laughs

Adi( awkwardly) bye ruhi

Ruhi : bye Bhaiya.. Love you

 

Adi hands over the phone back

 

Ishita : chale beta chalo change your clothes n then we would leave

 

Meanwhile ishita clears the bill n ttxts Raman that they would reach wdin 30 mins

 

Adi: why did you paid ?

Ishita : beta jab bade saath hote h toh bache pay nai karte

Adi : but mom gaved me money 4 shopping

 

Ishita : I will be happy if you allow me to pay.. Chalo let's leave from here

Adi : OK

 

 

Ishita gets a call from sarika

 

Sarika : mam plz cum 2 the clinic its an emergency

Ishita : sarika plz arrange for sum1 els m actually out &can cum plz arrange

Adi ( wonders why is she ignoring her work..mum NVR does so ) : Adi you can attend the patient I won't stop you

 

Ishita ( looks him with ol love) : OK sarika m ccuming make the arrangements

 

Sarika : OK mam

 

Ishita n Adi reach clinic

 

Samrat( kid who is having pain) : moves towards ishita

Adi calls him : hey smarat way happen

Samrat : my tooth is paining n looks towardsishita

Ishita takes him inside Adi joins them

 

Ishita oper8s smarat with care n Adi observes this

 

Ishita to samrat : beta no more junk food till your cap is fitted

Samrat : ( smiles @ her) aunty you know na how much I love it :P

 

Ishita : beta kal ajana n we will get the cap fitted.. At least till then control na

 

N she starts interacting with his mum

 

Samrat : Adi what r u doing here you also having a tooth ache?

Adi : no I was out with ishita so came here

Smarat : you know her? She is such a nice doc yaar.. I toh love coming to her.. How do you know her?

Adi : she is my dad's 2nd wife

Smarat : so call her mumma na dn why r u calling her with her name don't you enjoy her co. I njy her co. A lot

 

Adi to ishita : chale

Adi to smrat : bye

Samrat : bye Adi c u in school n bye aunty c u 2mrw (n smiles)

Ishita ( laughs) bye beta

Ishita to Adi : chalo beta

 

Both of them reach Raman 2 ishita

Itna tym kaha lag gaya tumhe

Adi : we want to her clinic

Raman : ol OK beta tujhe kuch hua kya ?

 

Adi : nothing like that looks at ishita n tells her thanks 4 this n says a quick bye 2 both of them n moves back to ashok villa

 

Raman : ishita thanks for what you have done 4 Adi

Ishita : Raman you are forgetting a mother is not needed to be thanked for what she does for her kids

Raman ( looks @ ishita with respect love )

Ishita : thanks Raman for giving me 2 lovely kids

Raman : thanks ishita for everything.. You are the best mother

 

Ishita : aww

Raman ( back 2 ravan Kumar) chalo an udoo mat chalo mujhe meetings bhi attend karne h

Ishita : agaya ravan Kumar wapis

N both move towards car

 

 

**********

 

Ruhi's school is open

N both Raman n ishita reach their to pick ruhi ( from their respective work plc)

 

Ishita : aap yaha

Raman : haan ttoh mein apne bete KO pick karne nai AA Saktakya?

 

Ishita : hmm.. U cud Have informed me I wud have not come

 

Raman ( thinks pata deta toh tumhe kase milta) : kyu tum VIP ho Jo tumhara time waste Kara dia mane

 

Ishita ( chalu kkud kud ) c's ruhi

 

Ishita : calls ruhi shravu

N both joins ishra

 

Ruhi : wow aaj ap dono aaye ho..

Shravu : chitti mein bhi ap logo ke saath pati k ghr chalun plz.. Mein aur ruhi khelenge padenge

Ruhi : haan ishimaa plz

Raman : ohh bhai Behan tum logo KO ice creams nai khani kya?

Both ruhi n shravan screams ice cream yes

Just then Adi was about to cross them

Ruhi c's him n calls him

 

Ruhi: Adi Bhaiya

Adi: ( aawkwardly looks @ ishita n Raman) haan ruhi

Ruhi: Bhaiya cum join us we all are going for ice cream treat

Adi : nai ruhi mujhe kaam h tum log jao

Raman ( feels low n ishita consoles him with her eyes)

Ishita : Adi it wud havebeen gr8 if u could join us bacha

Adi : no  n moves away

Raman ( wipes his tears n says ) chalooo n ppicks both ruhi n shravan up

 

Shravan : chittiapa I want chocl8 chips

Ruhi : papa I want to have wwat ishimaa loves

Raman :are baba dono phalwan hote ja rahe ho apne Masi aur maa pe he ja rahe ho

Ishita : hawww

N ol llaughs

 

( ol Ds is observed by sum 1 who is following themsilently n wondering I wish I cud also njy this way)

 

At ice cream parlor

 

Raman here u ol go

Shravu here is ur chocl8 flavor

Shravan ( kisses Raman) thanks chitiapa

Ruhi papa mere aur ishimaa ke black current ice cream

Raman hhere you go beta n Ye lo ishita

Ishita teases kya baat h apko toh black current pas and nai the ap kase khaa rahe h?

Raman : wookya h na mein check Karna chahta hun tumhe lec ka current issue ice cream se milta h ya u don't need any current

Ishita : hawww how mean

 

Ruhi : uff ho ap log for shuru ho gaya papa ap mujhe khilao mein mumma KO n mumma apko

Both agrees n 4 f them are enjoying

 

Just then Adi cums to ishita

Adi can I also join in aunty?

 

Raman ( smiles n have tears in his eyes)

Ruhi : yes Bhaiya Ye lo have a bite

 

Adi is looking at ishita

Ishita smiles @ him n offers him ice cream

 

Raman is on cloud 9 he pouts a thank you to ishita n 5 f them continue enjoying!!!!!!;

 

Sorry for typo mistake typed it via phone..

 

I am unaware how bad it shaped as.. Still sharing.. Hope you would give your feed back.

Tc frns !!!

 

btw u cn chck my othr wrk on yhm :P

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3967421
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3904756
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3924614

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by swati_bhatia - 9 years ago

woww.. Its Really Very Very  Nice 👏
Brilliant OS 👍🏼
Loved it !

I wud like to see such scenes in show too.It was beautiful.

Res :)

*** EDITED

Hey Swati, first hats off to you for writing so much using a phone, it must have been painful!!!

A very good story Swati. I would LOVE to see this on screen. I think we'll first have some 'negative' track between Adi and Ishita and then we'll get to the good parts. When we do, I'd like to see what you have written

You have nicely integrated all the kids into the story. It is not really an IshRa OS, but their relationship is going to be strengtehned by their common love for the kids. and you have written that beautifully.

Please do write more.
Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 9 years ago

awww,loved the update 

beautiful,lovely OS...

woww!!! this s reallyy beautifulll.. loveddd it soo much!!

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thanks all for liking my attempt at writting  Edited by swati_bhatia - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: amalaziz

woww.. Its Really Very Very  Nice Clap
Brilliant OS Thumbs Up
Loved it !

thanks dear :)

Originally posted by: lourel24

I wud like to see such scenes in show too.It was beautiful.

thanks :)

Originally posted by: Nany

it was beautifull

thank you :)

Originally posted by: malaxmi

Beautiful OS...

thanks :)

Originally posted by: drooler

awww,loved the update
wish they could show something like this in the show also
please continue it

thanks dear.. i wont be writting this more s m blank :P
but wud try to write sumthing else :)

Originally posted by: daisydee425

Lovely

thanks :)

Originally posted by: KaBhi-FAN

Nice job

thanks for linking it :)

Originally posted by: ishra-rocks

beautiful,lovely OS...
Jst loved it

thank you :) 

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Res :)

*** EDITED

Hey Swati, first hats off to you for writing so much using a phone, it must have been painful!!!

A very good story Swati. I would LOVE to see this on screen. I think we'll first have some 'negative' track between Adi and Ishita and then we'll get to the good parts. When we do, I'd like to see what you have written

You have nicely integrated all the kids into the story. It is not really an IshRa OS, but their relationship is going to be strengtehned by their common love for the kids. and you have written that beautifully.

Please do write more.

hi .. m glad u read it :)

ya i knw it surely gona be negative initially but.. i wish he cud c d difference btw his shagun mumma n ishita  s he was able to c bala's love for his son.. i mean i saw a lil bit f regret in his eyes when bala was sharing his side of cherished moment with his son..

btw i m bad at romantic scenes tabhi hv never tried my hands on writting ishra moments :P (non experienced u c :P )

you can check my other os's also they are also not ishra chemistry :P

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3967421
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3904756
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3924614

:P
btw thanks a ton 4 reading it :)