OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow: Rebirth--NEW! (Friday, July 26th, Pg 16) - Page 15

Ok so I have read numerous FFs, SSs n OSs. Most of them are fantastic. But this FF is just brilliant. By far the BEST I have read so far. This concept of yesterday and tomorrow is just too good. I could go on and on about how amazingly talented you are as a writer and it still wouldn't do you justice. Thank you so much for creating this.

Everything about this update was beautiful. But if there is one moment that will stay with me, it is perhaps when she called him Major Saab. It is as if in that moment, all the power is now with Rudra. This is so beautiful and I am desperately trying to ignore the whole what could have been at this point.. Hmm.

res will be back when i read..  :)

As always wonderful update, waiting on next part

oh finally read up to this point!!

this is breathtaking.. i am waiting to know what happens next.. the crucial moment where innocent Paro's whole world will shatter as she becomes aware of the lie that had been her life.. and to watch the man who would hurt watching her hurt...

i know u will write this beautifully Navin.. and am anxiously looking forward to this...

Navin,

ur a magician with words...never seen the show but if it was a quarter as good as u wrote!

Hi , Can anyone please help me with the Tommorow - Rebirth Part 2 link if its already up ?

How unbelievably awesome is this OS!!! This is the first piece of work of yours that I am reading and I think you are a fabulously writer. This is sheer genius and the way you have etched out the characters is out of this world. I meant to spend 15 minutes on this OS and finish it later but I have been riveted to my laptop for the past 2 hours. Wow. I am just waiting to read more. 

I was a late fan to the show and caught it when Maira came into Rudra's life. After that went onto IF to watch the series from Day 1 and had been going thru the Forum reading all the amazing FF/OS's but I have to say hands-down your writing and in-depth story is way above even the most seasoned writers. Are you a professional writer in real-life? If not, WHY aren't you?