MG SS - Rakshak #2 Updated Last Part - 28 Feb 15 Pg 98 - Page 9

Read many missed parts together, story going good, but the last part left me unfulfilled and disappointed. Don't get mad as I've always been an admirer of your work but pt 10 really disappointed me. All of a sudden I felt if I'm reading the right FF as this part had some uneven scenes. And then your focus suddenly drifted entirely to that sil of Maan's. I understand it might be a need of track but it felt overdose of Rohini as in the end the it leaves wondering if we are reading a Maaneet story or something else. Sorry if my view offends you but it was an honest view as a loyal reader.

First of all congrats for the new thread 👏👏👏👏👏👏
And now comes to the update...I wanna say a secret to you that while reading this part I was feeling so shy ☺️Maan's attitude in bed made me feel ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
But the while story is going so great yaar ...I m just loving this story so much thet now again gonna read the parts from thread one 😉
Plz update soon 😃

thats a nice start of their married life !! maan showing his right and geet giving in to him...all this leading to the growing confidence in maan and the desire to give geet the life she deserves...!! poor roshni comparing her life with maaneet's...!! waiting to see how maan starts his journey...to fulfill his dreams for geet...!!

part 10
awesome dear...
nice one...
Geet has taken it all upon herself to make Maan a strong one...
and all the cheapos are dancing to her tunes...
and Maan hes not able to control himself...
and Geet is making him to loosen up...
cont soon dear...

loved it

nice update!!!!
 pls do give updates frequently
will be waiting for the meeting in between  maan & geet's father.
 update soon.

Nice part loved it so geet has full confidence that mean will be business tycoon 

Loved the update