OS *REMOVED* - Page 5

Originally posted by: sameera_12

Okay!!! I guess this was your very first  OS on IF...
I know i am late... lekin bus exams k baad updates pe kaam kar rahi thi ab farigh hui hun...
WIsh She Could Be Mine!!! When i read the title i felt maybe its going to be an emotional one with deep intense feelings and i got ready for that ride...

Lekin yeh kya??? yeh to Love Triangle nikla ek tarah se😲 Krish, Samaira and Rudr!!
I liked the way you described the turn of events and i can see you have worked really hard on small small details... Keep It Up!!!👏

So... 'Sab ko sab kuch nahi milta, kisi ko mukammal jahan nahi milta!!' Well, that is a fact!! And This is life...
It was your first and a very good attempt!! Loved it!!😊
Sameera😊

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh

hey nandani

i am here as promisedd

i still havent read it but i am really excited to read ur writinggg...

wheee

ab parhte parhte saath saath comment krungi

Wish she could be mine. *sigh*

so lets start

its a non AR ff. i dn read any other couple bt as u have written it tou parh rhi hn

ONLY FOR U <3

it is interesting yaaar... a triangle. a girl nd two boys :P

for starters it was well written, all emotions feelings quite well written

the characters are so amazing, nice choice of names and plot

i hope there are more nd more to comeee... you could write so well yaaar

Good one nandani

proud of you :)

Originally posted by: teenorchid

koi baat nhi yaraaa

i ll read whatever u ll write

Originally posted by: Cucking_Frazy

Amazing OS

Originally posted by: kritika_24

oyyyeee why removed? ab main pm bhejne lagi thi and dekha toh its removed!!!

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh

Jess ke papa is getting it published in a book...toh I am editing it a little toh remove car diya