The twisting kaleidoscope- RAGNA FF 2nd Thread- REMOVED - Page 64

Wow! Brilliant!! Just brilliant!! Your creativity and originality is outstanding! What a plan!! You've only made it evident to us what RS truly is!! Everything you wrote and the way you brought out the true intention of RS towards Sahil is just amazing!! When you're big you're big!! One can do anything when they have money and power!! The only thing is that sometimes not everything works out as planned!!
I love they way you brought out Kalpi's feelings of neglect!! It only made him realize how his actions affected her!! DAMN!! Being RS wife one can never escape from his care and protection! He certainly knows everything that he supposed to!! Make no mistake about that!! When it comes to his Wife he makes no mistakes!! Although he showed her that he has drifted apart from her!! He definately has his feelings and care towards her as he should!! He never takes anything for granted when it comes to Kalpi!! But, will she find out what he did? Will any worker die? Are you gonna make 'THE GREAT RS' realize that revenge can only hurt the ones you love?! And that life is to precious to take such risk!! leave that to you Vidya for you surely will keep us on our feet with your amazing talent!! Hats off to you!!

Superbb update
Raghavs Revenge is only making him to loose his dear ones love...
His revenge is leading to workers death...
Hope nothing big happens

Originally posted by: aryagr

superb update. thnx 4 the update. plzzz update soon

Thank youuu 😊 Will update soon

Originally posted by: Cinderella81

Nice update. Hope only ppl injured no death should be there. Waiting for next update.

Thank youu 😊

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal

Awesome update...
continue soon

Thanks Shikha 😊 Will continue soon

Originally posted by: sampa79

Superb update

please update soon next part

and don't separate ragna

the way story is heading their is full change of separation

I am not going to separate RagNa yaar 😊

Originally posted by: eishe10

Brilliant update!!

Thanks Eishe! 😊

Originally posted by: shoonya9

Action packed update Vidya, omg everything is happening in same day right from Adhira leaving haveli n marriage to tiff b/w Mr n Mrs Singhania, to trapping of Sahil Kapoor. Hoe many more twists are you going to give? Hope there is no loss of life n eventual RAGNA separation. Although u hv assured Of no separation ur update makes anxious about it. Actually without any melodramatic gimmicks of separation you hv shown how realistically story can progress, including revenge. You have wonderfully portrayed THE RAGHAV SINGHANIA who is in full fledged revenge mode painfully ignoring his most beloved wife n yet taking care of her utmost move equally possessing n protecting her.

You dunno how difficult it is to wait for next update. You have mastered the art of gripping the readers without losing a bit of creativity. Congratulations dear.

Glad you are enjoying the story my friend and thank youuu 😃

Originally posted by: Anjinie

loved that Kalpi answered Raghav back, I really hope the workers are not seriously injured, just for Kalpi's sake, lovely update

Thanks Anjineee 😃

Originally posted by: sunyy

Omg such a power packed update. Poor Karan got jilted at the mandap. Poor kalpi felt sorry for her and rags because of his revenge an innocent man might be dead. So many emotions in one update. Girl u r AWESOME! Totally love you!!!!!! 😃

Thank you my no.1 fan 😛 - big hug-