prAja ss:pyaar ki jeet (last chapter on page 74)

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Rao maldev's track has generated a story in my mind wich I'm dying to share with you ppl I hope you enjoy.I'm takin liberties here except ajabde being pratap's first wife nothin will be similar to history.this story will start from today's episode where rao maldev orders his wife to prepare for his wedding with his sister .but here rao maldev brings saubhagyavati and his sister to chittor along with him and decides to marry her along with pratap phool .though everyone are apprehensive about marriage dey can't say anything.here the story begins.prologue will be updated in a while.
Index
Part 1 and 2:page 1
Part 3:page 3
Part 4:page 4
Part 5:page 5
Part 6:page 7
Part 7:page 10
Part 8:page 11
Part 9:page 13
Part 10:page 14
Part 11:page 16
Part 12:page 18
Part 13:page 19
Part 14:page 21
Part 15:page 22
Part 16:page 25
Part 17:page 26
Part 18:page 28
Part 19:page 30
Part 20:page 32
Part 21:page 34
Part 22:page 36
Part 23:page 38     
Part 24:page 39
Part 25:page 42
Part 26:page 44
Part 27:page 46
Part 28:page 47
Part 29:page 50
Part 30:page 51
Part 31:page 54
Part 32:page 57
Part 33:page 60
Part 34:page 61
Part 35:page 64
Part 36:page 68
Part 37:page 70
Part 38:page 72
Last chapter :page 74Edited by farru786 - 5 years ago
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Update soon. Would live to read more stories written on praja :)
Best of luck!!
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chapter 1
In chittor Mahal rao maldev is given a grand welcome.phool is ver happy seeing her grandfather.she happily goes and hugs him.
Phool:humane AAP ko bahut yaad kar rahe the bade dada.aapko dekhkar hame bahut prasannata ho rahi hain.
RM:acha par hame toh laga ki aapko aajkal kunwar pratap ke alawa koi sujhta(thinking)hi nahi.
Phool blushes prettily.all smile except JB and ofcourse ajabde smiles forcibly.she comes forward and take RM's blessings he blesses her all move Inside rajmahal.everyone is given their respective rooms.in all this happiness two souls are extremely sad one is saubhagyavati(RM's wife )and other is leela(saubhagyavati's sister).
Saubhagyavati:leela hame shama karde kintu hum maldevji ke aadesh ki saamne besahara hai.hame maaf karde behna tere sapne todne ki liye maaf karde(crying bitterly).
Leela(emotionlessly):jaane Di jiye jija yeh hamari kismat hain aapka koi dosh nahi(goes away silently leaving behind a crying saubhagyavati)
Ajabde notices this scene between two sisters and is confused as to why her leela jija who is chirpy,bubbly,full of life is looking soo dull but before she could ask saubhagyavati anything phool comes and takes her.
Phool(happily):ajabde aaj hum bahut bahut bahut khush hain .sab sapne jaisa lag raha hain.hamara vivah ho raha hain aur wo bhi hamare sapno ke rajkumar ke saath(but suddenly becomes sad) lekin kunwar pratap yahan nahi hain.hamare rishtey ki baath hone waali hain aur ve apne guruji ke ashram mein kuch din rehna chahtey hain.lekin ve kar bhi kya saktey hain jab unke guruji ne unhe apne shishyon(students)ko talwarbazi sikhane ko kaha hain.ab apni guru ki baat koun taal sakta hain.haina ajabde..ajabde..
Ajabde(coming out of her thoughts):kya kaha aapne phool .
Phool:ye lijiye ham kabse bole ja rahe hain,bole jaa rahe hain aur AAP kahi khoyi huwi hain.waise aajkal kaafi khoyi rehti hain AAP kya baat hain haan?kahin kisise prem toh nahi hogaya aapko(teases phool)
Ajabde remembers all her moments with pratap and gets sad .
Ajabde(lost):haan hogaya hain hame prem.
Phool(loudly):KYAAA!
Ajabde comes out of her stupor and cursing herself she says
Ajabde:haan hame prem hogaya hain lekin chittor se phool.aur rani ma se .yahan sab kitna ache haina.
Phool(relaxing):ajabde AAP bhi na chaliye bhojan ka samay hogaya hain.
Both leave for dining room.all are seated.RM notices leela missing.he asks saubhagyavati
RM:leela kahan hain saubhagyavati
Saubhagyavati(hesitatingly):ji wo.. woh.. use bhook nahi hain woh baad mein khayengi.
RM:hmm hum samajh saktey hain apne vivah ka samachar sunkar aise hi bhook pyaas mit jaati hain and laughs his devilish laugh.all smile with him forcibly but phool and ajabde are confused.
Phool:leela jija ka bhi vivah ho raha hain aur kisine hame bataya bhi nahi .choti Dadi kisse ho raha hai jija ka vivah.asks phool excitedly.
RM:phool aapko ab unhe choti Dadi kehne ki adat dal leni chahiye kyunki unka vivah aapke bade dada se ho raha hain.
Phool and ajabde shell shocked.
Phool(in disbelief):KYAAA?bade dada AAP se kintu unki aayu aur aapki aayu mein toh...
RM:phool vivah aayu dekhkar nahi kiya jaata.vivah Mann ki prasannata(happiness)ke liye kiya jaata hain.khair AAP abhi choti hain nahi samjhengi.aur badon ke faislo mein bacche nahi boltey.says RM sternly.
Phool quitens down and all have their meal silently .ajabde is in thoughts about leela jija her pain,her emotionless face,all made sense to her now.she mentally noted to speak to her later.

Precap:leela-ajabde confrontation.ajabde helps leela escape.RM full angry on ajabde and gives her an unbelievable punishment. Shocked
If u want next chapter fast give me your honest views and comments.
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Nice please update soon :) 
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amazng story dear..
.shalll we get praja moment????
wel fr yr updt.. u r writng diffrnt story plz dnt mix wid d epi..
m havng fun in dis nw story..well eagrly waitng fr yr nxt updt..updt soon..
n yea dnt forget to pm me
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Thank you for ur likes but I would like to see ur comments as it provides views about wat u think of my story.healthy criticism is accepted but plzz do comment.here I present next chapter.
chapter 2
Ajabde takes food for leela .leela is standing near the Window her back facing ajabde.ajabde keeps the food plate on table and go towards leela and is shocked to see her with a knife trying to cut her vein.
Ajabde:HEY KRISHNAJI KYA KAR RAHI HAI AAP JIJA CHODIYE YEH CHAKU.exclaims ajabde loudly.she takes the knife and throws it away from window and shouts at leela angrily.
Ajabde:kya karne jaa rahi thi AAP jija.hum jaantey hain AAP is vivah se prassan nahi hai kintu atmahatya iska upaye nahi hain.
Leela(falls on floor weeping bitterly):toh kya kare hum ajabde jawaab dijiye kya kare hum.ajabde rao maldevji hamare jija sa hain humane unhe hamesha apne pita ke tool mein dekha hain .lekin woh ghatiya aadmi humse vivah karke apni hawas mitana chahta hain*angrily*chii ghin aati hai hame yeh sochkar bhi.aur sirf yahi wajah nahi hain ajabde hamare vivah naa karne ke ehem wajah hain ki hum kisi aur se prem kartey hain.
Ajabde(shockingly):kya??AAP kisi aur se prem karti hain ??koun hain woh??
Leela:chandangarh ke kunwar yuvraj.bahut prem karte hain hum unhe .yahan aane se pehle humane unhe sandesh bhijwa diya tha woh hame lene ghanero aane wale the lekin rao maldevji hame chittor le aaye.kunwar yuvraj turant chittor aane ke liye rawana hogaye honge.ve kisi bhi waqt yahan pahunch sakte hain lekin hame samajh nahi aaraha hain hum unse mile kaise.agar maldevji ko is baat ka abhaas(doubt)bhi huwa to woh hamare yuvraj ko mardalenge.agar hum unke nahi huwe to kisi aur ki bhi nahi ho saktey.AAP jaanti hain ajabde ki jab aapko aapka pyar na mile toh takleef hoti hain lekin jab AAP apne aatma mein kisiko basa Chuke ho lekin aapko kisi aur ko apna tan samarpit karna pade toh pal pal hazar mout ka anubhav hota hain.isiliye hum ek hi baar mein apne aapko khatam karke is peeda se mukti paana chahtey hain.
Ajabde is very emotional listening to leela .she very well knows the pain of losing your love .she decides to help leela.
Ajabde(self thoughts):Hume hamara pyaar nahi mil sakta lekin hum jija ko is peeda se gujarne nahi denge.hum unki awashya madat karengey.
She kneels down and picks up a distraught leela.she settles leela on the chair and give her water.
Ajabde:jija agar aapka prem saccha hain toh aapko apna pyaar zaroor milega.hum aapke sahayata karenge yahan se nagar nikalne mein.
Leela(happily):Sach ajabde AAP...AAP hamari madat karengi.AAP hame kunwar yuvraj se milwayengi.
Ajabde(reassurinngly)haan hum aapko aapke prem se milwayenge yeh hamara vaada hain.
Leela hugs ajabde with emotions.seems like god has finally sent a knight in shining armour to her in form of ajabde.
Leela(breaking the hug):lekin kaise??
Ajabde:kal hum bazaar jaa rahe hain agar kunwar yuvraj nikal Gaye hain chittor ke liye toh ve kaltak chittor mein honge.aur Mahal tak pahunchne se pehle unhe bazaar se gujarna hoga agar hamari kismat Achi huwi toh ve hame bazaar mein miljayenge aur asp dono ka bazaar se nikalna asaan hoga.lekin agar ve hame bazaar mein naa mile toh aapko mehal se bhagana kathin hoga.bas hum prathna kar sakte hain ishwar se ki kunwar yuvraj hame bazaar mein miljaye.
Both pray for the same.ajabde aftr feeding leela goes back to her room.phool is waiting for ajabde Der.
Ajabde:arre phool AAP ab tak soyi nahi.
Phool(dreamily):kya kare ajabde kunwar pratap ke sapne hame sone nahi dete.aur do dino se unhe dekha nahi hain isiliye Mann vichlit ho raha hain.
Ajabde(gulping down her hurt):fikar mat kijiye phool ab kuch dino mein aap hamesha ke liye kunwar pratap ke saath hongi unki patni bankar.says ajabde wiping away a lone tear .
Phool:Magar humse intezaar nahi ho raha ajabde kya kare hum .bhagwan kare jaldi se hamare vivah ka din aajaye.
Ajabde:acha ye sab chodiye kya aapko nahi lagta aapke bade dada leela jija ke saath anyay karr rahe hai.
Phool:haan ajabde hame bhi ajeeb laga sunkar ki bade dada leela jija se vivah kar rahe hain.lekin AAP hi kheti hain na ki hum bado ke baatein nahi samajh sakte isiliye chod dijiye .aur vaise bhi hum agar aapatti(oppose)karenge toh bhi kuch nahi hoga bade dada apna faisla nahi badlengey.chaliye hum so jate hain bahur Der hogayi hain.shubh rathri.
Ajabde:shubh rathri phool.
Ajabde(talking to phool):aaj hame aapki bahut Kami mehsoos ho rahi hain kunwar pratap.kal hum bahur bada karya karne jaa rahe hain .agar AAP saath hote toh itna darr nahi hots.najane kya hoga kal.kyun aisa lag raha hain jaise kuch bahut bada anarth hone wala hain.lekin hum leela jija ko chod bhi nahi saktey na kunwar pratap.apna prem na paane ka dard kitna gehra hota hain yeh AAP aur hum jaantey hain.hum kisiko bhi yeh dard se gujartey huwe nahi dekh sakte.isiliye hamare saath Jo bhi ho hum leela jija ki madat awashya karengey.
Pratap(in ashram seeing moon from window):sirf do din huwe hain ajabde aapse door huwe aur hame itna khalipan(emptiness)mehsoos ho raha hain.phir poori zindagi aapke bina kaise gujarenge hum ajabde.aajtak humne itna prem kisise nahi kiya jitna aapse kartey hain aur naa hi kabhi kisi se itna prem karpayenge.hamara hriday(heart)toh aapke paas hain ab poori zindagi sirf apne kartavya(duty)ke liye samarpit kar chuke hain lekin hame nahi lagta hum kabhi prem aur vatsalya(affection)ka anubhav kar payenge.kyunki hamari khushiyan toh aap le gaye ab sirf apne matrbhoomi ke liye jeena hain aur koi wajah nahi hain jeene ki ajabde koi wajah nahi.(says pratap with tears continiously flowing from his eyes)

Precap:yuvraj-leela escape.ajabde caught by uma devi helping leela.ajabde facing rao maldev's wrath and ajabde gets the biggest punishment of her life.
I update from phone so pm's not possible.next update will be oly aftr generous comments so if u want next update fast give me good comments and I may give you an update tomorrow
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awesomeee lovelyyy part waitinggg for next asap.
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Note:okay guys now I want honest opinions of yours for this.would u ppl like to read cosy scenes of prAja .cosy in the sense not intimate or sex scenes just scenes like cuddling,kissing(liplock),hugging etc.I know dey r children and imagining dem doing something like tat may be awkward for some so if u would like to see cosy moments u need to comment and tell and as usual majority will win.otherwise it will oly be eyelocks and romantic dialogues choice is yours
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