OS: Fixing hearts and other broken things.

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Only one word comes to my mind: Beautiful.

It's not the necklace that Arnav has fixed, he has fixed much more than that. The OS was beautifully written. It was very touching. Loved every bit of it. Good to see you posting your stories again. Thanks for the PM :)

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Lovely OS..

Arnav fixed the necklace which he broke once.. thats so sweet of him..

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Tia Maharaj

@Honeybee27

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Wow wow wow wow wow
And that's how a painful loop of past is beautifully close.
I love this one shot, it was so sweet and very well written.
It's fabulous.

Thanks for the awesome Comment🤗..you make writing stories so much more worth it!❤️

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Tia Maharaj

@Honeybee27

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: RizArshi
Only one word comes to my mind: Beautiful.
It's not the necklace that Arnav has fixed, he has fixed much more than that. The OS was beautifully written. It was very touching. Loved every bit of it. Good to see you posting your stories again. Thanks for the PM :)

. Thank you sooo much for your beautiful, precious comment!🤗 you have no idea how much it makes me smile😃 I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm honoured that you find it beautiful❤️

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Arnav's honesty, sincerity & boundless love and Khushi's purity, large-heartedness & non-judgemental love - have been reflected with perfection in this OS.

Through the OS you have succeeded in conveying so many emotions...said and unsaid! Very very touching...

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Beautiful Os!!! Loved it 😊

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zainab Rameez

@zainy26

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Cute os dr. It reminds abt da heer ranjha scene dr

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Nice closure to one of the hurt period in Arnav - Khushi's life. Loved reading this story. There were so many small things that the PH have left as is in the show rather than giving them a complete closure. I loved the way you have written this part and closed this loop. I have requested you to add me to your buddy list. Please PM me when you update your stories. Thank you.

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

That was so fantastic. Poor Khushi, she is so forgiving and Arnav, the Shaitan; rightly said. He can be both. Oh, what a life Khushi had during those six months. Devastating.

Thanks for the OS. It was a breath of fresh air to all the torment, she endured.👏😃