Originally posted by: cuteparsh
Hey PURNIMA DI
i know i m late to comment on it plz sorry
i read ur whole ff [its took 3 hours and 54 min correct, but i dont feel bore from it]
its awesome di👏
your idea is different
randhir carrying nature
understanding pari nd renuka
and our sandhir chemistry is awesome 👏😊
you are writting it very well di
i m w8ing for ur next update
update soon di😳
love u
SAKSHI
Originally posted by: anu_anya
lappy jaldi repair kar wado jaldi update do :((
Originally posted by: anu_anya
update karona purnima plz...:(((
Originally posted by: chowanisha
UPDATE KARO JALDIII
SRY FRDS... SRY FOR LATE LAPI PBLM NOT MINE... I M REALLY SRY...
PART 28
They reached the island.
S: wow!! ye kitna beautiful hai man kar raha hai yahi rah jaaun. Kitni calm hai
ye jagah.(clicking images)
R: kuch adjustment karun??? Kaho na pyar hai waali scene jo shoot karni hai
tumhe.(sat in a nearby stone)
S: omg. Tumhe bol hi kyun rahi hun main. Tumhe to sirf jhagda karne me, mujhe
irritate karne me mazaa aata hai.
R: haan jao. Mere jitni himmat kisi aur me nahi hai, tumhe tolerate karne
ki.(took out a burger from his pocket)
S: sahi hai. Tumse jitna door rahun utni shaanti milegi mujhe.
R: jao na. Tum to supergirl ho.(bitting his burger)
S: o god randhir, you are impossible. Kash main is island pe hi kanhi kho
jaati, kamse kam tumhari in irritaing taunts se chhutkara milta.
He gulped his burger at ones. Cleaned his hands. Went near her. Pulled her by her waist. Their faces inches apart
R: 8 saal tumhe kho kar kis tarah main zinda tha ye sirf main jaanta hun.
Dobara kabhi mazak me bhi ye mat kehna ki tum kanhi kho jaogi. Mujhse bardaast
nahi hoga. Tumhe dobara kho diya na to shaayad main hi na rahoon.
S: aisi baaten mat bolo. Main to sirf mazak kar rahi thi.
R: nahi.. Bilkul nahi.
S: ok. Baba bas.. Itna senti mat ho warna tumhara burger me namak zyada ho
jayega.
R: mazak apni jagah hai sanyu par tumhe khona main afford nahi kar sakta.
S: I know donara nahi kahungi. Achha chhoro. Ye dekho imli ka ped. Mujhe tod k
do.
R: paagal ho kya??? Itne upar chharunga kya???
S: pata nahi tum 1st kaise aate the. Bewakuf. Paththar maaro aur todo.
R: paththar hi maarna hai to khud hi tod lo. Mujhse kyun mehnat karwa rahi ho.
S: kyun tum budhhe ho gaye ho kya. Itna chota sa kaam bhi nahi hota tumse.
R: o hello randhir singh shekhawat koi kaam free me nahi karta.
S: to yahaan bhi koi shart hai tumhari.
R: ofcourse. Ek kiss. Ab itna to mera haq hai.
S: hah.. tumse hoga hi nahi isliye tum aisi shart rakh rahe ho. Taaki josh me
puri kar lo.
R: excuse me. Aisa koi kaam nahi hai jo main nahi kar sakta. Aur haan is bar na
tumhari in stupid harkato se main apna decision change nahi karne waala.
S: haan haan. Mat todo. Main khud hi tod lungi.
She picked some stones and started throwing to tamarinds. But no
stone hit anything.
R: kyun mehnat kar rahi ho. Haar maan lo apni.
S: kabhi nahi.
R: tumhari marzi. Par soch lo. Bar bar hum yahaan nahi aane waale. Aur ye imli
bhi kabhi dekhne ko milegi.
S(in her mind): tumhe kya lagta hai randhir meri marzi k bina tum mujhe kiss
kar sakte ho??? Never. Aur ek bar ye imli mil jaaye fir tum kahan aur tumhari
shart kahan.
R: kya hua??? Soch liya???
S: haan. Tod do.
He threw a stone and in one shot bunch fell down. As soon as it
fell she rushed and took it
R: dekha. Aise todte hein. Maine kaha tha na I m no.1. Mere liye ye left hand
play tha. Ab tumhe apni condition yaad hai na.
S: kaun si condition???(sucking her tamarind)
R: zyada smart mat bano. Warna.
S: warna kya kar loge haan???(coming closer)
R: main...
Then she pushe him.
S: chhoro. Chalo yahaan se. Ander chalte hein.
R: aur meri kiss???(forwarding his hand towards her)
S: sochungi.(after walking few steps turned back and said)
They went inside. Again sanyu became busy in admiring the sculptures. After clicking some pictures of her and some monuments, he gave a wicked smark, kept the camera in his pocket and went towards sanyu. He came from behind and captured her in his arms by her waist and kept his chin on her shoulder. She got a jerk.
S: randhir, chhoro mujhe. Sab dekh rahe hein.
R: to??? Apni biwi ko pakda hai. Koi aur thodi hai. Official right hai mera.
S: to kya idhar announcement karoge???
R: bologi to wo bhi kar dunga.
S: bschpana band karo aur jaane do mujhe.
R: meri condition puri kar do, chhor dunga.
S: done. Par ghar me. Please abhi chhor do
He finally he left her.
R: lo choor diya. Par yaad rakhna agar apni condition se pichhe hati na tum to
mujhe zabardasti bhi karni aati hai.
S(in her mind): ab dekho mr. shekhawat, tumhari condition kaise puri hoti hai.
They were in courtyard. There before clicking pictures he took
another burger from his pocket and offered to sanyu.
R: lo ye kha lo. Dopeher ho gayi hai, tumhari medicines ka time ho gaya hai.
S: tum to hale mein bhi medicines dena na bhulo. Unbelievable.
R: zyada naatak mat karo aur khao.
She took the burger and ate it.
R: ab ye lo medicines khao.
S: haha paani kahaan hai.
R: haha tumne kya mujhe bewakuf samjha hai??? Main medicines laya hun to paani
kya bhul jaunga???
Usi pocket me dekho. Paani hai.
Saying this he started clicking images.
S: khadoos(and she ate her medicines). Aghhh. Kitni kadwi hai.
R: haan.. Tumse kam. Ab chalo ander.
They started moving from cave to cave. Now they moved on to a
cave where No one was there except our sandhir. Randhir was busy in taking
snaps. Sanyu came and moved her fingers on his cheeks.
R: kya hua??? Badaa pyar aa raha hai.
S: hai hi. Bas tum ji nahi dekhte.
Now she came infront of him and surrounded her arms in his neck.
S: to tumhari condition k baare me socha hai???
R(hesitatingly): sanyu tum.. Yahaan pe to..
S(coming closer and closer): koi nahi hai.
R: is jagah par ye sab...
S: kyun??? Main to tumhari wife hun. Copy right hai tumhara mujhpe. Fir dar
kyun rahe ho. Wahaan to bahut sher ban rahe the.
R: par sanyu koi aa jayega.
S(whispered near his lips which were just an inch apart from hers): aane do.
Apne husband ko kiss kar rahi hun koi gair thoci hai.
R: par.
Before he complete, she smashed her lips on his. His eyes wide opened due to shock. She kissed him again. And once again. After few seconds his eyes closed gradually. He forgot the world around him, the setting sun, the melting passion, the mingling tongue everything surrounding him. The passion grew more and more and finally his one hand surrounded her waist and other one her neck. Now he was also responding. Her all 10 fingers brushing his hairs, sometimes hardly sometimes softly. They passion grew even more and kisses grew hungry. They were sucking each others lips to every soothing blood drop. Sometimes he was bitting her lower lip and sometimes she. They forgot the time and went on and on. But suddenly the camera which he was holding fell down and they both came into sense and started breathing heavily. Before they could express anything to each other some people came with their guide. They without any question randhir picked his camera and they both went out.
They went out of the caves and walking slowly without facing
each other. To break the silence and awkardness sanyu spoke.
S: aaa.. Maine kya pehle bhi tumhe aise kiss kiya hai???
R(laughed and then): haan bilkul aise hi humari pehli kiss ki tarah.
S: tab bhi kya tum itna hi sharmaate the???
R(smiled): nahi tab pehle maine kiss liya tha wo bhi gusse mein.
S: fir maine kya kiya???
R: wahi jo maine kiya.
S: kya??? Zabardasti???
R: haan zabardasti. Pata hai tab blast ho gaya tha.
S: wo kaise???
R: actually jab main library mein gaya wahaan tum pehle se thi kuch kaam kar
rahi thi. Jab main aaya to tum distract ho gayi, kaam wahi chor diya aur blast
ho gaya.
S: mujhe pataa tha sab gadbad tumhari wajah se hoti hogi. Haan..
R: o hello tumhe pata hai humare bich dushmani bhi tumhari wajah se hui thi.
S: huh jhute.
R: au kya tumne blast kiya jabki maine manaa kiya tha wires jodne k liye aur
wow mujhe hi fasaa diya. Jab kal tumhe sab yaad aa jayega na tab maalum chalega
tumhe.
S: aaa.. Biti buri baatein koi yaad karta hai kya??? Wo dekho wahaan bangles
hai. Mujhe leni hai.(and he ran to the shop)
R: are ruko sanyu. Gir jaogi.
And as he thought she was about to fall but our hero how could he let her fall.
He caught her by her wrist, she looked back and an eyelock and music played...
Waise to mann mera, pehli bhi raaton mein
Aksar hi chahat ke haan
Sapne sanjonta tha
Pehle bhi dhadkan ye, dhun koi gaati thi
Par ab jo hota hai woh, pehle na hota tha
Hua hai tujhe jo bhi jo bhi
Mujhe bhi is baar hua
To kyun na main bhi, keh doon keh doon
Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua
Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon
Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon
R: dekha. Kaha tha na dekh k chalo. Abhi gir jaati to chot lag jaati na.. And muzic again...
Aankhon se choo lun ke bahein tarasti hain
Dil ne pukara hai haan, ab to chale aao
Aaoge shabnam ki boonde barasti hain
Mausam ishara hai haan, ab to chale aao
Baahon mein dhalein, baahein.. Baahein..
Baahon ka jaise haar hua
Haa manaa maine mana mana
Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua
Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon
Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon
Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come and feel me.. How feel me...
To be continue...
again i m really sry frds...
HI GUYS FRM PART 29 THERE IS NEW THREAD SO HER IT IS THE
NEW THREAD : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4117429
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