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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

thanks for reply.I am happy that my writtings are not bad and acceptable.

your user name is somthing different Imean in telugu 'raatri' means night.

...no doubt...about the writing style...it is indeed good...
...in hindi also it means night...actally .its a synonym of my name nisha
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Raatri

...no doubt...about the writing style...it is indeed good...

...in hindi also it means night...actally .its a synonym of my name nisha

nice one with a meaning.

my user name is SAKIV RAM
SAKIV is reverse of my real name VIKAS
and Ram is  character I created for my story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice 1 :) plz upd8 soon :) :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Vikas...
Hows u ??
I was out of station for a week ...so cud not read ur writings on time...😭
Read all ur last 4 writings just now ...😃
Aww...Amazing yaar ...Tum toh mere PHD waaley writer ho 😉😆

Your comparison of the refection of the moon in the pond with the presence of ishita in Raman's Life was absolutely UNBELIEVABLE & OUT-STANDING Imagination ...and U can declare ur self as professional writer  ..👏👏
I loved the the convo whr Raman proposed Ishita ...Aww..It was so Cute 😳
I guess u read Romantic novels more ...😉Sry if it was a wrong Guess ...
And ..LOL .. Raman's reaction after Ishita wakes up ...😆 ...If Ishita didnt realize that it was true ...How awkward she must be feeling ...realizing that she was gonna kiss Ramz on his fore-Head 😆
Update Soon ...!! Waiting for ur next part ...
Waiting to see ishita propose Ramz ...
😆
And I am unable to wait to see Ramz reaction for that ...
Kaash ..!! Ye sab TV pe hota ...😆😉 ...CV'S Use some Brain 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweety_98

Hey Vikas...
Hows u ??
I was out of station for a week ...so cud not read ur writings on time...😭
Read all ur last 4 writings just now ...😃
Aww...Amazing yaar ...Tum toh mere PHD waaley writer ho 😉😆

Your comparison of the refection of the moon in the pond with the presence of ishita in Raman's Life was absolutely UNBELIEVABLE & OUT-STANDING Imagination ...and U can declare ur self as professional writer  ..👏👏
I loved the the convo whr Raman proposed Ishita ...Aww..It was so Cute 😳
I guess u read Romantic novels more ...😉Sry if it was a wrong Guess ...
And ..LOL .. Raman's reaction after Ishita wakes up ...😆 ...If Ishita didnt realize that it was true ...How awkward she must be feeling ...realizing that she was gonna kiss Ramz on his fore-Head 😆
Update Soon ...!! Waiting for ur next part ...
Waiting to see ishita propose Ramz ...
😆
And I am unable to wait to see Ramz reaction for that ...
Kaash ..!! Ye sab TV pe hota ...😆😉 ...CV'S Use some Brain 😉

I wish your work went good.
I just thought to use pond
Your guess was wrong
Most of novels Iread were advnture 
Ishita will be in confusin for two days
next update maybe tommorow.
precap for you(Raman will romance with Ishita but again confuse her to dream or true.Raman will bring Ruhi secretly in night .confusing all in Iyer's house and Ruhi will help her papa in drama.)(Iyers will be confused whether some one kidnapped Ruhi)
good you are back buddy.
I have a pm for you about a concept I am planning for a story.I need feedback.
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Posted: 9 years ago

I wish your work went good.
I just thought to use pond
Your guess was wrong
Most of novels Iread were advnture 
Ishita will be in confusin for two days
next update maybe tommorow.
precap for you(Raman will romance with Ishita but again confuse her to dream or true.Raman will bring Ruhi secretly in night .confusing all in Iyer's house and Ruhi will help her papa in drama.)(Iyers will be confused whether some one kidnapped Ruhi)
good you are back buddy.
I have a pm for you about a concept I am planning for a story.I need feedback.


OMG ..thnx for the precap ...And that too specially for me ..😉😉
LOL ...Raman bi na ...I think he loves surprising others ...
evrything he does ...last min mai dhamaaka ...😆😉 ..He is FAB ...
And ur Super FAB ...for molding his character the way we all wanted to see ...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsom
love ishra confession
bechari isu get confuse by raman tesing
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dream Continues


 

Scene starts with Ishita thinking whether it was dream or true.

Ishita "Raman aisey bolengey kyaa .Jho mainey apney kanon sey sunan  ussey kehtey huen."

Ishita was still in confusion.Raman watchin from distance and feels happy and smiles.

Ishita was preparing break fast still thinking whether Raman told or not.

While Ishita was busy and confused Raman slowly comes inside kitchen and hugs her from back side.

Ishita gets startled and pushes Raman away  and Raman falls down.

Raman "Kya hogaya tumko .Kall tho thum uthnaa galley lagaa rahee the aaj dhakka de raheen hon."

Ishita seing Raman on floor gives her hand to help him.Raman gets romantic holds her hand and kisses it sweetly.

Ishita was in shock but happy ,immediately withdraws her hand .Raman gets up.

Ishita is still in confusion over what to speak .

Raman "Aaj nashtha kyaa banaraheen hon ?"

Raman "Aaj mujhey upma khaney kaa mann kar rahan hain."

Ishita was puzzled.

Ishita "Aap theek tho hain aap upmaa kayengey."

Raman "Usmey kyaa bath hain mainey tho banayaa bhee tha naa."

Ishita remembers the incident where her hand gets a cut and Raman makes Upma following her instructions.

Ishita "Han banaya thaa lekin khaaya nahee."

Raman "Tho main aaj khaaonga.Meri pyaari biwi key haatho mey." Raman leaves telling that.

Ishita thinking over what she heard "Raman ney abh kyaa kaha. Pyaari biwi mujhey"

She feels happy and prepares upma and arranges the table before Raman comes.

Raman comes there and sees break fast as upma.

Raman "Yeh tumney kyaa banaaya.Mainey tumhey pehley hee bola tha naa.Main yeh sab neheen khaonga."

Ishita was shocked listening this.

Ishita "Aap kya majaak kar rahen hain.Aap hee ney bola tha kuch deer pehley kee aapko upma khana hain."

Raman "pagal ho gayye kyan.Main kitchen mey kabh ayya tha .Aur main upma kyon mangoonga.Jab mainey banaaya tha thab bhee  main naheen khaya aaj khaoonga."

Raman "Main naheen khaney waalan hoo yeh sab .Main bahaar jaa rahan hun."

Raman goes away angrily.

Ishita "Pagal main hun yaa Raman ussey ney shubha bola kee ussey upma khaana hain aur abh bol rahan hain kee who ayya hee nahee."

She remembers morning incident where he kissed her hand.

Ishita touches her hand and feels happy.Raman watches this from distance and feels hapy.

While Raman was sitting inside car and was waiting for call from Ruhi.

Ruhi calls them.

Ruhi "Aap kaisey hon.Main theek hun mainey abhee nashtha karlee."

Raman "good girl,Han maintheek hun ."

Ruhi "Papa aap ney kahan aap mujhey bhoot key baarey mey bathaayengey."

Raman looks at Ishita hinting that I will tell her.

Raman "Beta koi bhoot naheen tha .Mainey aur apkey Ishiama ney kal raath bahaar hey soye they bhoot ko dhekney key liyen."

Ruhi "Papa sach mey."

Raman "Han sach,phir humney sound sunee tho jaakar dhekha tho waha kuch naheen thaa balkee ek gudiya pedh par phas gayya tha aur awaaj aa raha tha."

Ruhi "Mian bhee aaongi waha."

Ishita takes phone and speaks to Ruhi while Raman goes inside the house.Ishita looks at him strangely.

Raman was eating Upma in kitchen silently and Ishita comes there.

Ishita laughs at Raman "Abh aa gaya gaadi seedha .Abh aap kha rahen hain upma."

Raman "Kya bol raheen hon mainey hey tho poocha tumhey upma banaaney key liyen ."

Ishita "Phir shubha aisey kyon bol rahey they."

Raman "Mazak bandh karon mainey kyaan kahan."

Raman finishe eating and wipes his hand with Ishita's dress and leaves.Ishita loks puzzled in starting ann later smiles seeing his possessiveness.

Ishita "Raman ko kyaan ho gaya ,ek pal aisey behave kartha hain kee Ravan Kumar hain aur abh Romantic  Bhalla bankey aagayen."

Ishita "Murugan yeh confusion jaldhee clear karon."praying god.

 

It is around after noon Ishita was preparing lunch and Raman comes there scolding her.

Raman "Khana tho jaldhee banaon yaar,shubaha naashtha bhee naheen kiyan."

Ishita again shocked listening this  "Aap ney shubaha upma khaye they naa."

Raman "Main upma khayya .Tum sach mey pagal ban gayye hon.Mai tumharey saamney hey bahaar gaya tha naa.Phi mainey kab khaaya."

Ishita was shocked and puzzled she feels something wrong and prepares lunch for Raman.

Raman eats it quickly and goes near pond thinking something.

Ishita gets som many surprises like this full day.One time Raman will act romantic with her and again say she is dreaming.

 

After dinner Raman and Ishita sleep in their own rooms which Raman cleaned.

Ishita thinks about different scenes happened whole day  and gets confused.

It is morning Ishita gets up in her regular manner and gets shocked seeing someone sleeping besideher.

It is Ruhi sleeping beside Ishita and Raman along with her.Ruhi was sleeping as usual with her arms and legs around RAMAN.

Ishita gets shocked seeing Ruhi and Raman  in her room. 

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Posted: 9 years ago
So raman cont his teas wow love it but how can ruhi be there love the part where he kiss her n be romantic cont soon 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update !
Poor Ishita 😆
Raman is so mischievous !
And now Ruhi is here too ?
Eager to read the next one 
Continue soon 😛