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Hello!! And a very Warm Welcome to AA!! 

Baahaahaa!! No.. No.. The other AA!! 😆

If you have not been invited, please don't lurk around! You are not supposed to be here! 


Hmm.. Now this little Chat Corner is for the few good writers and reviewers, who belong to the D3 Forum(Past, Present, or Future) 

We are here to:

- Discuss new Ideas

-Give reviews about current stories (Even a few sarcastic ones!)

-Criticize Constructively

- Plot new storylines

-Crib how sending a few 100 PMs is a pain-in-the-arse

-Rant at what the word RES evokes in you

-Lastly, have fun!! 



A STRICTLY INVITEES ONLY THREAD!! 



Let me introduce myself, I am Ankita. One of the few who started writing on IndiaForums and now finds it enjoyable.

If this thread completes 150 pages, please PM me. I will create the next one immediately. 

Any other queries or suggestions? Feel free to ask. 



Members:

-Vaish
-Upasna
-Nivriti
-Pria
-Tish
-Sukanya
-Prerna
-Deepika
-Akanksha
-Shahnaz
-KD
-Sarah
-Shahana
-Kishi
-Ankita
-Bleu (Rini)
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Her dangling earrings.

He is mesmerized, like a moth to flame when he sees the perfect beautiful earlobes of hers dangling with new colors every day. He thinks that one day would come, when he wouldn't be absolutely amorous, watching the jewelry on her in unbelievable ways. But he finds himself being wrong with each passing day. He cannot get enough of kissing the pendulous part, soft like silk, each night, each day, and each moment that he can, and savors the moans he elicits in response. 

 

Her nose ring.

That tiny loop of silver, twirled around on her nose, does absolute wonders to his concentration. He watches it twinkle in different lights. He watches it when she gets irritated by something immaterial and her nose flares up in anger. He just stares at it for hours, without any rhyme or reason, just because it is so unbelievably fascinating. Every night when he is taking her, joining with her in the union of their souls, he watches the silver gleam off on her perspiring aroused face.

 

Her red thread of mangalsutra.

The thread, he doesn't dare changing it. The way it just locks her swan like neck, he wonders at times why she wears it in the first place. The only conclusion he comes up with is to hypnotize him. It deludes him, into thinking that he deserves her. It enforces the belief into him, that he is good enough for her. It tugs on to him, he caresses it every night, as he kisses her neck, hungrily with a never ending thirst.

 

Her always shining, always teasing bangles.

He breaks at least a few of them every night. He apologizes too. But it gnaws at him so much, that he ends up bringing new different colored ones every next day. Which he ends up breaking in a few days too. He cannot help it, this raw gnawing passion that no matter how hard he tries, does not withhold itself into his body. It just has to come out on her and consume her as well into this fire which burns them, scalds them, night after night after night.

 

Her chiming anklets.

He enters the house, and the first sound he wants to listen is the tinkling of her anklets. They tell her where she is, they tell her how fast she rushes to meet him, like a stream flowing to meet the ocean. It is immensely arousing, to know that the distance that rankles him throughout the day, affects her too. He waits for her to thrash into him, the anklets announcing her arrival, and welcomes the dainty frame of hers into his own.

Her dark as blood sindoor.

She used to apply it by herself every morning. But now, he applies it to her. It just is something he has come to enjoy, to revel in, that the dark red symbolizes that she belongs to him. That he is the one, whom she has given herself to. That he is the one, the protector, the lover, the everything, the one.

 

Her thin waist chain.

He remembers the first time he touched that chain. He had felt goosebumps all over him. Him, a guy, more than sufficiently experienced with women, had shivered at the touch of the metal that held her soft, slender waist. He is jealous of it, at times, that it clings to that delectable area of his wife. He imagines his arms, clinging there, eliciting goosebumps, all the time. He kisses that waist chain every night, before ceremoniously taking it off and proceeding kissing and nipping and biting that delicious navel of hers.

 

Her deep colored odhanis.

He makes sure that she is securely wrapped up again in the deeply hued odhani that she had been wearing during the day. She is always spent, too tired, too deep in slumber to care for what she is wearing, or not wearing afterwards. He just finds that amusing, how he is the one who ends up caring afterwards. How he is the one who first covers her up, then himself, and then secures the blankets around her.

 

Her innumerable mirrors.

She has had mirrors on her since the first day. Be it in her hand, in her clothes, in her hair as adornments, or in her footwear. She just has an unbridled affinity towards mirrors. What he understands is that, she has this habit because she is one herself. She is pure, pious, and completely transparent. So much so, that she reflects everything around her. That is the reason, every night, he gives her his all. He gives her all the love, all the fire, all the tenderness, and all his soul. So that, she reflects it just as much.

 

Her kohl-laden eyes.

He accepts this. He accepts wholeheartedly that her eyes are the deepest darkest brown that he has ever seen. They hold him in, and he drowns. They tell him what she wants, what she doesn't. They tell him the intensity with which she loves. They tell him everything he wants to know about her, and know about him as well. He knows for a fact that, they are the truest window to her soul. And that in turn, makes him see glimpses of his own soul as well, for he knows, they aren't different beings anymore.

 

Her rose-colored lips.

He kisses them tenderly. He kisses them coarsely. He kisses them till he hears her pant on his lips. He kisses them till he is panting himself. He bites them, sucks them. He doesn't stop. He knows he never will. He'll continue merging his lips into her, till he breathes. For he wants evidence. He wants material evidence which only kissing her gives... That she indeed is for real. And that she indeed belongs to him.

 

Her never ending beauty-spots.

He has counted them for days. He has fantasized about them, once upon a time. He had even cursed them for being there. But now, as every night he worships them, kisses them reverently, lightly nips them, leaving them a bit red-stained, he knows he never really stood a chance against her. She had him wrapped around her fingers from the day he had first discovered a til on her.

 

Her dainty, too soft for her own good wrists.

He has this habit. This bad habit. This really really bad habit. Maybe this isn't voluntary. He doesn't really know what triggers this into him, because he has done this since he met her. He just has believed in the notion that her wrists belonged to him. Whether she struggled, whether she lay in throes of passion, or whether she was just taking a casual stroll with him. He hands would wrap around her wrists, and take control of her body, for he just really couldn't let go of her.

 

Her long, smooth as cream, always hidden legs.

He bites the flesh on her. He licks the whole expanse of the creamy skin of her legs. His fingers skim through her thighs, making her moan and gasp and shiver with fervor. He leaves trails and trails of burgundy love bites on her, unknown to the world, only his proud work of art. She blushes profusely at these actions of his, but he doesn't give in. He just wants his wife, all of her.

Her skin. Her iridescent as the moon skin.

His fingers roam all over her, taking in the glow. The unbelievably milky, alabaster skin eludes him. His mouth craves to taste it. His lips savor it. His tongue lavishly glides over it. And yet, he can never get enough of it. Like a crazed wandered finally finding home, Like a yearning thirsty traveler finally finding oasis, he worships her like no other. 

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anklets ki last line mein typo hai... the ya fir ehr hoga.. 
why aren't you using names??? :/
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Bada nhi ho rha kuch zyada??? 
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Kal I have to go back to work. :'(
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Originally posted by: Couch_Potato

Kal I have to go back to work. :'(



*not talking to you*
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Tujhe acche se pata hai SH mere liye kya hai.

Mujhe yeh bhi nahi pata ki yahaan kaunsi photo ki baat ho rahi hai.

Fir bhi mai yahaan hu..

Kyunki tune likha tha... Aur mujhe padhna hi tha. 


Kabhi Kabhi mujhe lagta hai ki jitni depth you give to writing naa... It is almost unfair that real life isn't that deep. Or that stuff like this doesn't happen all the time. 

Because, seriously. When you write... It is like reading facts... Reading traits of the character and not something make belief by some fan.

And that is amazing. Truly. 


*Even though me has commented here, I am heating a knife unless you comment on my PaRud OS in the next 24 hours*