KriYansh OS: Sensuously Haunted - Page 3

aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

OMGGG shenzzz

Such a hawwttt and sensual os

Fantastic concepttt

and moi luubb tt and awesomeee titlee

amazingly written

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Amazing concept and a beautifully written OS😊

Totally was held throughout

Ur descriptions were so captivating

Keep writing more

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SM_maniac

@SM_maniac

Groupbie

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Awesome OS

Loved it a lot

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

OMG... didi uh kept ur promise

an OS.. Wow n it was sensuous... n a bit haunted

the story was perfect... and uh described it so well

earlier i thought Kria would be an evil or witch or smething

but i guess i was wrong... but in actual she was in search

of that man who would free her... in short...

I loved it... <3

Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 10 years ago

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vaishali

@-Vaish-

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

I had opened it...

and then due to unforseen circumstances... The ghosts were there... I wasn't able to comment..

Now I love you so much that I would fight the ghosts to comment here..

So here I am...

I loved it..

I love it when you write random sexy things... Kyuni tab khoob accha sexy likhti hai... Mereko achanak se randomly ek aur controversial vichaar aaya... 😆

Though mereko samajh nhi rha woh kyun aaya.. lekin bas aaya.. so suck up with it...

I loved how you described everything.. and the eerie surrounding sensation and feeling was actually amazing.. Nicely described set up..

I was about to say to you yesterday to send me the KR version.. But you posted... Khe khe khe..

Awesome one... Phornzu... :D *this also has a special meaning pertaining to te situation pata hai.. if you can notice the change.. 😛*

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

mindblowing OS

loved it

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Abhilasha

@Cieli.Santi

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

ooppss i read it..🤣 u knw i always read it whatever u write..

so coming to the OS first of all snigs di thank you for making shenz write this in KR version..

god shenz this is damn hawt..

i love stories like this alot wrie more like this..

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trishika rajput

@trishikarajput0

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

I love it

I just love it

awesome os

kria was waiting for her perfect man...and rey was the one..

he helped her without knowing...

love at first sight...was she that hypnotizing...

rey was still thinking of her

love the concept...

thanx for the pm

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Ahmazinggg

Superb n unique concept ;)

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Omg wht was that this
was to awesome
Sooo
Hawt Hottt epsssdd
Mindblowing really gud

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