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Ok, first of all... itna lamba!!!
Ab sab quote toh nai kar sakti..
Ok. First of all, when u update, pm me.
Second-oh my god! It was soo refreshing to read. So refreshing. Never would have imagined them as journalists.
For a person who's job is to be observant, you are very unobservant.
I was like-LOL, πtypical zain Abdullah ..
And Aliya was worried shit about him.. and the way you described her worry.. kisses to you..π
Adha padke hi mujhe aisa laga ki even though have changed their occupations, you have managed to capture the essence of their charecters. That itself is a charecterstic of a really good writer. I love how zain came to meet Aliya first, even before his mom.that was really cute ..
And zeeshan ko tho kaam se hi nikal diya. Lel.π
And he asked rizwan to drop her home. Aww.[8>]
And the way u described their apparent hate at first sight to love...sigh! π³
And last part-hawt! Aah. I also wonder ho her ovaries did not burst.. π
nice π
second part kab update kia π² next tym pm me..I'll read nd phir fursat se I'll comment π₯±
-sanikaEdited by arshipotterfan - 9 years ago
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