OMG a new story and that too a horror- mystery ...yaar what are you???? I simply cant believe how did you do it so wonderfully...
chapter one itself is so catchy...
khushi and arnav stays alone with their dog fluffy and then something terrible happened with her when he was away.. and the dog could sense trouble but our mahaan sanka devi was busy reading sheildon...gosh!!! man, aisa sirf tu hi dikha sakti hai...but honestly, its so gripping...
i am already hooked to it...badly want to know ke kya hua hai???
aur sidhe hospital???
wrist-cut?????
khushi ne khud se toh kiya nahi hoga, then who???
she has turned so damn hysterical dammit...and arnav is staying with her day and night. awww...love him yaar, mujhse bhi aisa hi husband chahiye
but what on earth have you shown in the second chappy...
he called out - no response he knocked - no response and jab usne enter kiya...that terrifying whisper...
god knows whats going on in that creative head of yours...
but i want the mystery unfolded soon...mai patience ke maamle me kaisi hu tu to jaanti hai naa
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