beautiful poetry at the end...
well suited for the whole track of the story...
its painful for me tooo after hearing khushis words abt adi...
Originally posted by: lovedrops
Deepu..
If I have to highlight the favorite parts of this chapter to comment, i have to copy and paste each and every phrase you wrote. Every sentence has its own emotion. Every word has its own depth. Amazing.. Amazing.. Amazing yaar. πWhat a poor souls they are ... played by the destiny... ditched by their own emotions... punished brutally without their mistake. Whose mistake is it for what happened. Whom should they blame for their misunderstandings and for their wrong decisions.Do they hate each other to think that they always fight. Don't they trust each other to think that, how can they fathom the situations playing around them. Don't they believe in marriage to think that they are trying to escape from their relation. A big NO.The problem here is,... They LOVE each other to the extent of their emotions take over their hearts. They TRUST each other to the extent of their possessiveness take over their beliefs. They RESPECT each other to the extent of giving up their oroginality instead of blaming each other.LOVE.. TRUST... RESPECT... these are the pillars of a beautiful marriage. And they are on these pillars since the day they got married. These are the reasons why they got so close and pushed themselves to start their relation beautifully from the stage of rancor. They came out as a strong souls after knowing they were meant to be together since they met and bound together by a Taveez for eternity.BUT their own strong pillars played with them brutally. Their own possessiveness pushed them into a deep chasm. Their own trust betrayed them callously. But the only thread and the most strong remained between them is their LOVE. That's the one which pulled them back together after what happened. The unconditional love they have towards each other is what brought back their trust. Where there is love .. there is trust. Yes if you love someone .. you will trust them blindly.One weak moment of trusting his own eyes than the person he loved the most in his entire life. One weak moment of feeling betrayed by the person whom he thought is the one he has as his possession in his entire life. Punishing him heinously...After Khushi opened up every single thing she felt... how Arnav should feel for what he did. How Arnav should react for the love and trust Khushi showed towards him unconditionally. How Arnav should react after Khushi told how much she respects his decisions. Other than madly loving her... Other than blindly trust her... Other than obliging her every word.I know she knew, that Adi was the one who assaulted Payal. I know Adi she knew Adi is not to be trusted one in the entire Raizadas. I knew she kept mum because of Arnav. Although I am not sure about the reasons.I loved the way he pulled her close... I loved the way she told everything to him... I loved the way they demanded each other like old days... Khushi always loved him as ASR. She can't see the defeat in his eyes. Khushi always loved the demanding ASR... She can't she him obliging to everything. Khushi Loved him as ruthless ASR.. She can't she him with slumped shoulders. Khushi loved him as an arrogant ASR.. She can't see him in vulnarability.I wished so much for the Khushi to open up and clear many clouds which are making him suffocated. And you fullfilled my wish like an Angel Deepu... You don't know how much happy I am now.They knew they it's the new beginning of their relation. And we knew it's the new beginning of their Love.I couldn't find any verbals to say how amazing this update is. I couldn't find any words to explain how an amazing writer you are. I couldn't find any emotion to show how emotional every word of this chapter made me.This is my standing Ovation to you Deepu... You deserve more than that.. But I couldn't find more than that to praise you expect my Silence .. closed by the intensity of emotion you gave to me.π π π π π π π π π π π π πA few words from me to Arnav... I couldn't stop myself.Nuvvu nannu velivesavani Bhraminchaanu... KaaniManasulo bandhinchi guppillu therichavani thelusukunnanu...Nuvvu nannu mosam chesavani oohinchanu... KaaniNuvve vidhi chethilo mosa poyavani thelusukunnanu...Nenu ninnu dooram cheyyali ani prayathninchaanu... KaaniDooram avvalenantha mana manasulu penavesukunnayani thelusukunnanu...Nenu ninnu dveshinchaanani anukunnanu.. kaaniDveshincha lenantha pemistunnani thelusukunnanu...Mana iruvuri madhyana vunnadi prema ante... aa maata chinnadi avutundemo... kaani anta kanna baruvaina maata nenu yeruganu priyathama...Innallu ee badham yedo ani bhraminchaanu.. Mana balamaina premani ee roje thelusukunnanu.Anni theralu tholigina vela... naa kallanu moosina mabbulu chella cheduraina vela... Naa manasuku vesina musugu tholigina vela... nenu thelusunnanu.. ide mana premaku.. mana bandhaaniki mali aarambham ani... Ika nundi prathi adugu andamaina anubhavamani...
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