FF: RAJ KI RINGTONE. AVNI KA HOROSCOPE! || CHAPTER # 3 || PROMO OUT || - Page 7

Originally posted by: Sammy11

Shruti will reply later.. me gong out for some work.. Will comment if I'll get time in between..

Originally posted by: Princyz_Belle

aree it's okk sammy...i was just asking😉..waise bhi meine dhoond ke par hi liya na..itni asani se ff ka peecha nahi chorungi..😆😆😉

Originally posted by: Princyz_Belle

yup...mazaa aa gaya...it's raining outside n i'm sitting beside window n reading this...😳was laughing n enjoying full on...😉
wow.. great.. I can imagine it.. Mere paas zoordar toofani barish horahi he..lol ... chalo .. enjoyment milgaya.. mehnat rang laayi/!! 😉

hay hay...!! Suket ke saamne bhi ghanti baaje gi..!!😲😲🤣🤣🤣

lol.. yep!!! super funny wali!!🤣🤣

hmm...tht scene reminded me of show's baarish scene...tht was also magical..😳

yep my favr8 scene... Raj showing love, care and protecting her...

hmm...raj ka ye roop mujhe bhaa gaya...loved raj more for this😳...hahaha..mein bhi sawri ko do kheech ke lagati...😆😆

lol... Raj ka character hi itna magical hai.. lol.. everyone will love him at first sight. bas Avni hi panga le rahi hai! haha!!

hmm..God ji alwayz there 4 raj...😉

hmm.. right.. but Raj always complain.. 😆

hmm...quite interesting...😛😛

😃😛yep!

Avni ki tarah innocent toh aaj kal ke bacche bhi nahi hote...😆😆
lol.. sahi kaha!! but the way she gave chocky to raj was soo cute.. Raj ko aur pyaar ho gaya!

hmm..waiting 4 next chappy...😉
lol.. me still thinking where to begin! Ideas ki kami ho rahi hai.. lol.. Kuch bhi likhne jao romantic hi mind mein aata hai... aur woh FF mein likh nahi sakti.. hahah😆

Raj ka khatre ki ghanti baaj gayi..lol...😆😆

somewhat! haha!

kya..kya...kya...????😲Villains...!! hope suket is not ...ye bohot khatarnak hain...😆😆😆
sab ek ek type ke comedy villains hain! kahani mein spice and fun dono dalne aayenge! trust me they are not irritating.. like they are in show.. ek number ke foolish!😆

wlcm koi nahi wait kar loongi...😉
ok.. so nice of you!😳

Wow! Wat a dream seq. koi itna aacha dream dekhle to bas sota he rahe jaye Raj ke thara

Loved Raj & jiji's conversation...as sweet as d real 1... d way he came back 2 say bye wz d sweetest gesture😊

and der goes his ring tone again...Kuch khaas hai

Wow! Kya twist diya hai tumne...promo parke mujhe to laga tha ke Avni Raj ka class le lege lekin yahan toh kuch aur ke hogaya...Cricket ka score aur Avni ka angry bird wala exp. Smile me badal gaya...mind blowing!👏👍🏼

Loved all romantic scenes...4rm duppatta to dancing in d rain to Raj holding Avni...Raj's dialogues and as usual his ringtone goes very wel with doz lovely moments...very very beautifully written...Superb!
👏👏👏

Iss Sawari Bawari ke to...bechara Raj ko coolie he bana diya😡

OMG! I wz laughing through out...Lal lal tamatar, Bobby bhai, dharna devi,Miss Toothpick - Aloo chips...🤣🤣🤣

Chalo Toothpick aur Aloo chips he sahi...suruwaat to hua😃

SammyExpress, it'z awesum, outstanding, Superb...it'z wz a complete RomCom...❤️ed it🤗

About d precap:

Wel! I think Avni brought friendship band 4 Raj...

Oh no! 1^st meeting me he Suket ke saath panga hogaya...Bhagwan he bachaye Raj ko...

Originally posted by: tina_sre

Wow! Wat a dream seq. koi itna aacha dream dekhle to bas sota he rahe jaye Raj ke thara

Lol.. accha tha na.. continuation from previous FF.. lagta hain idea successful hai.. every update ke shru mein romantic dream.. lol😆

Loved Raj & jiji's conversation...as sweet as d real 1... d way he came back 2 say bye wz d sweetest gesture😊

Lol.. yep I'm trying to keep it as original as possible so that we can imagine those lovely bro sis scenes..

and der goes his ring tone again...Kuch khaas hai

bilkul situation ke heesab se an5d Jiji guessed it rite...Avni to bahut khaas hai Raj ke liye🤗

Ringtone hero of the story bangayi.. ab alarm bhi bajegi but kab kaise bajegi its top secret.. lol ..hmm.. everytime its according to situation and that only readers know about it.. because we know whats inside everyones heart.. lol.

Wow! Kya twist diya hai tumne...promo parke mujhe to laga tha ke Avni Raj ka class le lege lekin yahan toh kuch aur ke hogaya...

Promo aada sach hota hai.. Excitement badane ke liye ..lol.. Par Raj aslimein Avni ko dekh raha tha.. woh sirf Raj aur Amit ko maloom hai..haha..

Cricket ka score aur Avni ka angry bird wala exp. Smile me badal gaya...mind blowing!👏👍🏼

Yep I wanted that smile.. lol thank god sab theek thaak hogaya.. mehnat rang layi..😆

Loved all romantic scenes...4rm duppatta to dancing in d rain to Raj holding Avni...Raj's dialogues and as usual his ringtone goes very wel with doz lovely moments...very very beautifully written...Superb!
👏👏👏

Aww thanku.. AvRaj scenes ko to unique honahi tha.. aage aage dekho kya hota hai.. nafrat mein bhi pyaar nazar aata hai..lol😳

Iss Sawari Bawari ke to...bechara Raj ko coolie he bana diya😡

Dont worry all these villaiIns AvRaj ki life twist karke aasan banayenge.. lol..

OMG! I wz laughing through out...Lal lal tamatar, Bobby bhai, dharna devi,Miss Toothpick - Aloo chips...🤣🤣🤣

Yep sab comedy ka fresh tadka hai.. aage sab loat poat ke hasenge..

Chalo Toothpick aur Aloo chips he sahi...suruwaat to hua😃

Hmm.. but kya toothpick ko aloo chips se pyaar hoga? Ya Avni ko Raj se? Dekhte raho.. yahan bhi AvRaj dono ka dil tootega.. but ... (top secret)

SammyExpress, it'z awesum, outstanding, Superb...it'z wz a complete RomCom...❤️ed it🤗

Aww thanku.. 🤗 finally RomCom successful hogaya.. yippie..

About d precap:

Wel! I think Avni brought friendship band 4 Raj...

Hmm.. dont want to leak but yep.. and a small spoiler.. dosti toot jayegi.. becoz of... (top secret)

Oh no! 1^st meeting me he Suket ke saath panga hogaya...Bhagwan he bachaye Raj ko...

Hahaha.. aage bohot interesting scene hai.. dialogue cut kiya hai maine.. its half truth.. but panga hoga zaroor...

Originally posted by: Sammy11

Yippie.. I'm glad you loved it..

Felt nice😊.. thanku.. so much for reading such a big update.. 😃

actually I understood how it feels reading such a big chapter update.. 😆And I'm proud of my readers, for taking time to read and comment.. its too hard for me to read and comment lol..😆

I think I should make smaller weekly updates but my planning is for starting a chapter in morning completing it at night.. so lots of scenes make it big..

U want big update in 10 days or small weekly update? 😉

See ya..

//SammyExpress!!

Originally posted by: ShivinkiJas

main kabh yeh SS read karoongi 😕

Originally posted by: Sammy11

Yippie.. I'm glad you loved it..

Felt nice😊.. thanku.. so much for reading such a big update.. 😃

actually I understood how it feels reading such a big chapter update.. 😆And I'm proud of my readers, for taking time to read and comment.. its too hard for me to read and comment lol..😆

I think I should make smaller weekly updates but my planning is for starting a chapter in morning completing it at night.. so lots of scenes make it big..

U want big update in 10 days or small weekly update? 😉

See ya..

//SammyExpress!!