RAGNA: SS **KIDNAPPED BY A VAMPIRE PRINCE**part1A updated page 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Seems to b interesting...continue pls
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Ahaan, I'm loving the character sketch! Looking really good and awaiting to read the first chapter! 
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#13
A really interesting character sketch!👍🏼
Am eager to read more of your creative writing!!😊
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interesting and nice cs update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Interesting!! Continue plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ur character sketch like twilight series. Kalpi is bella. Raghav is edward. Prem is jacob. M i right?
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Nice CS
I can't wait to read this story
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wow interesting 
plz continue soon 
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Originally posted by: mumtaz82

Ur character sketch like twilight series. Kalpi is bella. Raghav is edward. Prem is jacob. M i right?


No itx not like that.. Itx diffrnt from twilight..
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Thanku guys for the comments..!!
**PART 1A**

Kalpana's pov
I fell asleep and straight
into a nightmare, just like
every night ever since I can
remember. The present
nightmare feels like it's
really happening. I've been
having this same
nightmare for a month, in
the nightmare I'm in bed
sleeping and wake up to
see something but when I
wake up in the morning I
don't remember what that
something was. All I know
is it's too scary and I'm
better off not knowing.
I don't think I can take
having this nightmare
again. I'm asleep right now
and I can feel the
nightmare coming, my
neck and back are sweating
by now. I try to wake up but
it's no use, it's like
someone is forcing me to
have this nightmare and I
don't know why. Why do I
keep on having this
nightmare? What does it
even mean? Will it ever
stop? I'm loosing sleep
over this, the only time I'm
asleep is during the
nightmare. I 've tried
everything to stay awake,
I've drank coffee before
bed and even tried boost
but still I manage to fall
asleep. The nightmare
keeps repeating for hours,
this can't be good for me
and has got to stop.
Finally I'm awake and the
nightmare is over. I rush
out of bed to prevent
falling back to sleep  and
back into the nightmare. I
strip bare and get into the
shower. I have work today. I work in an office, I started
working here when I was
18, I'm 22 now I live alone,
my parents disowned me
because I was born a
mistake, they never
wanted me and the rest of
my family agree so I ran
away when I was 17. It was
the right thing to do
because I like being alone,
i'm a very independent
person.
I got out the shower and
changed into my
underwear and work
uniform which consisted of
black trousers, shirt and
jumper with black flat
shoes. I combed my
straight blonde hair into a
pony tail and did simple
makeup of eyeliner and
Mascara. I
grabbed my Jacket and car
keys and got into my blue
citroen. I stopped at a cafe for
breakfast. I had eggs, bacon
and hashbrowns with
orange juice. When I
finished eating I drove to
work with a coffee.
After work I came home
and it's now 6.30pm. I
changed into white shorts
and a light yellow tank top
with white sandals. I made
some cheese pasta for
dinner and after eating was
so tired I went to bed and
fell asleep completely
forgetting that the
nightmare was on it's way.
I waited and waited for the
nightmare to come but that
night it never did. I didn't
dream of anything, how
strange.
Then I woke up in the
middle of the night it was
pitch black in the room I
couldn't see a thing. I felt
somthing move on my bed,
it seemed to be getting
closer until I could feel
someone's breath on my
face. I moved back and
ended up crashing into the
headboard.
"Are you alright?" a voice
asked in the darkness. The
voice sent shivers down my
spine.
"Who are you?" I asked
"Nobody," the voice trailed
off. It looks like it's gone. I
got out of bed and
switched the light on and
looked to my bed with no
one there. That's good
maybe I imagined it all or
did I? Right now I couldn't
care less as I drifted off
back to sleep.

Plzz guys tell me is it good or not..?? 
Do like and comment.. :-)