A Blade of Steel (TS) Part 3- page 16 - Page 7

Is Sid really going to be the traitor even after he was saved by Abhay and Pia?? I just hope they manage to defeat all their enemies

Loved all the growing emotional blend you build up for Abhiya. It was easy and perfectly written. Is Sid a evil man here too? Let see what happens next. Nice update and a lovely story. Keep it up and thanks a lot dear. 🤗

This is what u call choppy writing and gibberish? 😡 Go change the meaning of the word woman! It was amazing n to be honest the best piece of action I have ever read. Like EVER and I mean it 👏 This was sheer brilliance at its best ⭐️ I felt like I was watching a movie and mind u, a hollywood action flick coz bollywood still hasn't come up with anything this classy 👏 I liked the characterisation here n this has to be one of ur best write ups ever and I mean it 👏Edited by FieryHeart - 9 years ago

amazing update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love the way u splits the scenes into years and shows the abhiya bonding increases ... no attachments still they attached now what to do
i feel pity for them what will be there future ... seriously they are not allowed to like ur partner :(
woaw sid entry finally ... so he is the boss well i think he felt the connection of blade and steel ...  
abhiya hugged very emotional scene
lets see what future holds for them 
hats off to u shreya ... awsome story

So abhiya are partners and sid is a tratior...

sorry for commenting so late
fantastic update
full on action packed but filled with strong unsaid emotions
so abhiya are some kind of secret agents...liked the concept

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Superb, 👏thoroughly enjoyed reading dis update, 😊

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

brilliant update

a roller coaster ride.

both abhay and pia re fighting their attraction and emotions for each other.let's see how long can they keep it away.

their past seems sad. want to read more about that.

sid is a traitor...damn.he is giving their info to the enemies...hope they find out soon before they get into troubles.

Originally posted by: Kit_Kat

I so love woman in action😆
so loving it alot
nice update with all abhiya action

Originally posted by: Sh_Abhiya

awesome update , fulltoo enjoying while reading n happy abhay n pia indirectly coming closer , waiting how these two relation will take place , but feeling sad for mish , she died hope she alive , n last sid is back stabber or shud i say a snake , thanks for pm n continue soon