Originally posted by: Andromeda001
Whoa! U finally posted it!
It s fiery n AbhIya in totally diff avtaar here! Fight sequence brilliantly written. Abhay in shock 2 find out abt his "Blade" s a gal. Two sharing their real names, those moments were beautiful. Eagerly waiting 4 d next part.
Originally posted by: .Chashmish.
This is like soo sooo intresting Shreya . Totally crispy โค๏ธ I love abhiya here , adorable and nice concept btw ๐ Reminded me a bit of scene in dhoom 2 ๐ Awesome yaar , conduit eu soon please , really looking forward to read this ๐
Btw what does a TS mean ? ๐
Originally posted by: flora212
Awwe I like the plot๐ณ it seams cute excited for the next part
Originally posted by: sukuvivu
AWESOME...I always wanted to read something spicy on abhiya Like this!!!
Thanks for writing shreya n i want link of the outsider too.plz giv na..
two shots ๐ฒ Matlab only 2 upds ? I want more
shreya maza agaya ๐
a v interesting start,steel(abhay)partner in da mission turned out to b piya,she killed angelo n risked her life,abhay took da bullet upon himself n agay kia hota hay shreya k pm ka shiddat se intezar rahe ga.
Originally posted by: .Chashmish.
two shots ๐ฒ Matlab only 2 upds ? I want more
Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
it's just too awsum shreya.
i am watching homeland these days and i was just wondering if we will ever have a show like it on indian telly and i so hoped visu would be in it. show ka toh pata nahi but i m glad that i got an opportunity to read a story like that on them. though the concept is totally different but i lvd the starting.really looking forward to read it more. i so luv to see intelligent ,smart women as cops or spies .(thanks to castle and homeland)eagerly waiting to read the next part.btw i luv the name blade and steel!
Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.
Wow Woww what a concept. I totally love it. the title is amazing and reading the 1st update itself I can see how it fits. totally loved the fight and how they protected each other. smart and intelligent..superb.. waiting to read more.
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