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that was really one heck of an action packed chappy. Loved it Shreya. Why steel and blade though, interesting choice of name.
Originally posted by: FieryHeart
After a long time I got to be the first to reserve in ur works 😆 And whoa! Girl u call me action specialist? 😛 Nothing I have ever written before or will ever write in future can come close to this 👏 It was fantastic ⭐️ Looking forward to read it 😃 And I have a feeling I am gonna like this one a lot but not sure if it will beat MD 😆 But loved the start and an interesting choice of a title 👏 Ur titles have always been intriguing and this is so catchy 👏 Waiting to read more. And I so envy u right now 😊
Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Err...I dunno. MD was 20 chapters long, this one will only be a two-shot, plus the format will be entirely different to what I usually write😆 good to know you like the prologue and I hope you like the coming bits too.PS. Action specialist? That's still you.
Originally posted by: FieryHeart
Not after writing this piece Officially ur now the action specialist of our forum and I dare anyone to challenge my opinion, even u 😆
Originally posted by: arwakantawala
OMG what a start full action pack and Zoomblastic never read a story like this please duely continue it
Originally posted by: withered
Well many questions are roaming in my mind for obivous reasons . But a really interesting update .
We are going to get abhay and pia as agents wow a gripping concept for us readers u know !! 😉
Originally posted by: beautiful_heart
Brilliant concept and update loved the ending part where Pia says her name to Abhay. I loved Pia said her name to Abhay trusting him so much and Abhay said it back. Pia felt awestruck on Abhay and relied to say her name to him. Love the start and a fight sequence. Loved how Abhay saved her. Keep it up and thanks for sharing. 🤗
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