Os: Meri dard ka fikar hai...tumhara dard kya?

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Posted: 9 years ago
I have written an os based on the upcoming spoilers! This is my 3rd os in YHM forum! :) So guys  Apologies in advance for any mistakes! Hope you like it and do give your feedbacks!

Raman went to the balcony to make a call to the investors and Ishita headed towards the kitchen taking the plates and glasses from the dining table.

ISHITA: Iss ravan kumar ne toh dimag ka idli vada sambar bana diya hai...sona yeh...toh sona woh! Ekk yaa doo baar sona sona kare toh theek hai par!  Yaar mujhe kya? Arre kya mujhe kya Ishita? Tum Ruhi ki maa ho aur Raman Ruhi ke papa hai so farak toh padta hi padta hai na!

There stood Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla fighting between her heart and mind...n she didn't realise when she hit the candle which was on the kitchen platform.

ISHITA: I toh had it enough...mei room mei jake dewaar ko dekhti hun...I am sure ki woh iss ravan kumar se toh better hi hoga!

Ishita stoped in the mid way...

ISHITA:Jalne ki smell nahi aarahi...God meine gas band kiya ya nahi, Raman ke chakkar mei vo bhool gayi shayad!

Ishita ran towards the kitchen and found that the curtains had caught fire...otherside Raman came into the hall and was shocked

RAMAN: Ishita yeh kaise hua? Yaar tum kya karti hoo? Ruko mei jake pani lata hun...

Raman went to the bathroom and brought two buckets of water...By the time he came to the hall he found Ishita near the curtains and he was too late as Ishita's dress had caught fire.. He ran towards her

RAMAN: Ishitaa..Pagal ho gayi ho kya?

Raman found Ishita with the best MOM trophy which ruhi had given..

ISHITA: Yeh mujhe ruhi ne diya tha...i couldn't let it...

Raman could just see that Ishita was talking something...but his mind said that Ruhi's own mother doesn't love her as much as Ishita does...Then he didn't have time to waste he took his coat from the chair and started to put down the fire! It is when ishita realised what had happen! She cried holding Raman's shoulder and Raman kept on saying that nothing will happen!

ISHITA: Raman kuch karo...please!

RAMAN:Ishita cool down...please kuch nahi hai...

Few sparks of fire fell on Ishita..Raman ran towards the bedroom and brought the blanket and wraped around ishita! Later Raman hugged her while Ishita was still in shock but she held the trophy close to her! Same time whole family came and were shocked as they found the curtains on fire..Romi ran towards the bucket and splashed water on the curtain!

MR BHALLA: Raman theek ho na tum puttar...(looking towards Ishita) Ishita beta theek ho na! Jaa puttar dono andar jao aur aaram karo!
They started to go towards their room when Ishita saw Ruhi hugging Mrs Bhalla who was scared due to fire.. Ishita stopped!

ISHITA:Ruhi...kya hua? dar lag raha hai meri baby ko?

Ruhi ran towards Ishita and hugged her and Ishita lifted her...While lifing Ruhi Raman found few burns on Ishita's neck!

ISHITA:Darne ki kya baat hai..Tumhari Ishimaa theek hai! Dekha na Ruhi i said you to stop playing with matchsticks that day issiliye beta!

MR BHALLA: Ishita tu jaa kapde badalle...Ruhi puttar aaja mere paas!
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Ishita changed her clothes and came back to the room and saw that Raman had already changed his clothes...She found that his left palm was burnt!

ISHITA: Raman?

RAMAN:Ishita tum theek ho na...doctor ko bulaun?

ISHITA: Raman mujhe kuch nahi hua..apna haat dekha hai? kitne bure se jal gaya hai.

Ishita moved towards the drawer and brought First aid box!

RAMAN: Ishita iski koi zarurat nahi hai...Yaar tum aaram karo na!

Ishita had no choice..she forced Raman to sit on bed! She started applying the cream and also blowed air to ease the pain!

RAMAN:Meri dard ka fikar hai...tumhara dard kya?

He took the cream and applied on Ishita's neck where she had burns!

RAMAN: Abb soo jao Ishita please!

ISHITA:Theek hai...

Ishita slept on the bed and Raman put the blanket! Ishita was still worried about Raman which he did observe!

RAMAN:Mei theek hun Ishita...fine mei bhi soo jaun toh meri chinta karna chodogi?

He came to the otherside of the bed,slept and looked at Ishita who smiled!

Raman smiled and switched off the light!

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Posted: 9 years ago
hey buddy... nicely written... keep it up...liked it sacchi m... ⭐️
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such a sweet os... Hope aisa hi kuch dekhne ko mille
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Awww...such a sweet OS..actually they are in this stage..both care about each other before thinking about his/her own self
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Originally posted by: Birdy91

hey buddy... nicely written... keep it up...liked it sacchi m... ⭐️


Glad you liked it! :)
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Hey..Thanks! :)
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Originally posted by: magati

such a sweet os... Hope aisa hi kuch dekhne ko mille


Awww..Thanks a lot! :)
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Originally posted by: _Deepika_

Awww...such a sweet OS..actually they are in this stage..both care about each other before thinking about his/her own self


Hmm they are at this stage in the show..Hope they climb the other steps soon! :) Glad you liked the os.
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Glad you liked it! :)
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Thanks! :)