SaNu OS: Tum Hi Ho(dedicated to ChulbuliAnnu).last part-pg7 n 8 comple

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Shanaya and Anika were pacing from here and there in Anika's room,since a long time... They were in deep thoughts,as to how they will unite their brother and sister...

Shan(raising her hands): Maro magaj ma koi shu idea nathi aave chhe... Doll,ab hum kya karenge? Indono ke chakkar mein hum piss rahe hai...

Ani(still thinking): sahi baat boli tanne,par,mhare ko yo koni samaj na aave se,ki,bhaisaa aur bhabisaa aakhir chahte ke hai? Ab tu dekh... Bari Maasa aur Mota Kaki ne yo zimmedari mhare aur tharey ko diyo se.. Ab toh mhare ko laagey se ki yo kaam main na karpaungi se...

[Shanaya and Anika are still thinking about how to get these two love-birds together.. Anika is Sameer's pampered yet caring and well-mannered and loving cousin sister,whereas,Shanaya is Annu's younger sister.. Whenever they are in tension,they start talking to each other in their regional state languages..]

After a lot of thinking,they got an idea.. Both the girls' discussed their plan,as to how they will execute it.. They also took their fiances' help in it. After discussing it for the final time,they went to sleep...

Next Morning:

During the breakfast time,a courier-man comes and asks for Anika Rathore.. Anika finishes her breakfast and takes the envelope. She smiles inwardly and says to Shanaya over the bluetooth,

''Plan A done... Wahaan ki kya khabar,partner?''

''Same condition here... Mere haath pe bhi envelope hai... Chal,plan B ko shuru karte hai.. Bye...''

Both the girls' disconnect their phone and went towards the dinning table...

BM: Ani beta,yo ke hai?

Ani: Bari Masa,bhaisaa aur main jis college mein parte thhe,uss ka aaj re-union party hai,sab purane batches' ka.. Aur yeh bhi likkha hai,ki,wahaan pe bhaisaa ko special honour se bhi sammanit kiya jayega,along with Annu di... Haaye... Dono ek saath kitne acche lagte hai.. (in a dreamy stance starts to sing), ''Bare acche lagte hai,yeh dharti yeh nadiya,yeh raina,aur..aur...

Sameer choked as he ate his breakfast..He quickly drank water,while Bari Masa and Ani chuckled at his condition.Sameer quickly finished his breakfast and stuffed his gun inside his holster,took the car keys and was about to leave when he stopped onhis tracks and said, ''Tu taiyaar rehna... Muj...''

''Mujhe late hone ka aadat nahi hai... Jaldi se taiyaar hoke rehna and blah blah... Aap office jaoge aur jaldi kaam khatam karoge tab hi toh hum whaan jaldi jayenge... Bye...''

Saying this,she went to her room to know about the condition of the other side.

Shan(glaring at her but in a calm way): Agar aap aaj iss party mein nahi gayi,toh,main aapse baat kabhi nahi karungi,tamaro magaj ma yeh baat baith gayo?

Annu: Par...

Annu n Shanu's Mom: Tujhe yeh party mein jaana parego,dikri.. Tere college ka re-union chhe... Shhu jagah aur atmosphere chhe... Tere kitne saare friends' aayenge waha pe... Tujhe jaana parega... Main tere liye kapre taiyaar rakhungi.. Tu abhi jaldi jaldi office jaa ke aa,warna,tujhe aur Shaanu ko wahaan pohuchne mein der ho jayegi...

Annu(smiling): Thik chhe,Maa aur Behna... Main office jarahi hu,Maa... Take care.Bye...

Shanu: Bye,Di.. Jaldi aana... (as Annu left) aapko aapke banra se jo milvana hai... (saying this,she gives a hi5 to her Mom and grooves on the song, ''Party toh bannti hai'' from Bhootnath Returns).

After all this,Shanaya told everything to Anika over the phone about everything that happened just a while ago and both the elder ladies' and the young girls' squealed in excitement and happiness and went to do preparations for the evening.

Later in the evening:

Ani(waiting since an hour,huffing and looking at the watch): Bhaisaa... What is this? Khud kehte ho ki jaldi taiyaar ho jao,aur,aap hai ko khud itna time lerahe ho.. Agar aap 5 second mein bahar nahi aaye,toh,dekhlena...

As Anika was about to step inside his room,she was stunned to see the ever-looking handsome man infront of her... She had a loss of words after seeing her Bhaisaa clad in three-piece suit... All she could do is apply a dash of kajal behind her Bhai's ears.

Ani(trying to pull his leg): You are looking handsome,Bhaisaa... Lovely suit,eh? Kisiko patane ka irada hai kya?

Sameer(smacking her shoulders lightly): Chup kar,shaitan. Maasa ko pata laga,toh,hum dono ki khair nahi...

Sam's MV: Hoping to propose Annu today... Fingers crossed.

Ani: Chalo Bhai,der horahi hai...

With that,they zoom off to the venue...

While in Annu's house:

Shaanu(smiling): Di,you are looking so elegant and pretty in this red and golden saree... Kisiki nazar na lage aapko... (applies a dash of kajal behind her ear.)

Annu blushed and said,quickly recovering, ''Chal,der horahi hai... Bye,Maa... Apna khayal rakhna...''

''Zarur beta... Tumlog bhi apna dhyan rakhna.. Bye...''

With that,Shanaya and Annu also zoomed off for the party venue,while Shanaya sent a text to Anika saying that they are on the way to the party venue... Anika also replied the same thing...

Precap: Last Part.Edited by zebbie0504 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superrbb Partner! Bhai nd Annu Di...Mast Hai..👍🏼 But yeh dono sacchi tubelight hai!!! Isliye hum dono ki hi sab karna padega!! 😆 Hayeee...Both of dem lukin sooo stunning!!! ❤️❤️ But Ab Mazaa aayega!!!! Party Main..Party toh sach me banti hai..Ab Plz Annu Di ko pm kar dena!! :D Continuee Soon..!!! P.S-Humare fiances kaun hai? 😉Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 10 years ago
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thank u so much for writing this 😊 mujhe mera promise yaad hai pr kya karu koi plot mind me nhi aa rha pr jaldi pura karungi 



👍🏼 mast start hai but ye OS tha naa to ek baar me khatam kr deti baki ka wait to nhi krna padta 😉 Shanaya meri sister aur hum log gujrati 😆 ye sach me mast hai 😆 oh le tum log chote tumhare fiances bhi hai...aur main aur sam tubelight 😲😡😡 ye baat kuch hazam nhi huyi 😆
tum logo ki college me kuch zyda nhi chalti...tumhare plan k according hi college ki reunion party aa gyi 😆

One of my fav song...Bade acche lagte hai 😳😳😳


aise jhatke degi to bechare sam ka kya hoga...khana atak gya 😆😆😆


shanaya emotional black mailing...nhi gyi to kabhi baat nhi karegi...😲 chote hone ka fyda 😆


sam to mujhe kaise bhi psnd hai...use itni mehnat krne ki kya zarurat hai...anika sabr rakh kyun bechare sam ki tang khich rhi hai...

oh le main part aate hi to be cont...😡 jaldi second part update krna 
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it zaibee dear 
Awesome 
Really dono tube light hai 
jinka stater kharaab hai 😆
Thanks for the Pm 
Continue soon 😊😊😊
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Last Part:

Both the girls' reach the venue with their respective brother and sister.They greet each other..Shanaya always respected and loved Sameer as her own elder brother,while,Anika always loved Annu as her own elder sister.While they were chatting,two young and handsome boys,aged mid-20's,comes towards the group and joined in their conversation.The boys' greet Sameer and Annu,while they blink at their fiancees',making them blush a dark shade of red.

Sameer and Annu,sensing the situation,cleared their throats to bring the girls' attention back.. The girls' again blushed at their presence and excused themselves along with their fiances',leaving the lovebirds alone for a while...

Sameer was looking at Annu,who looked very beautiful i that red and golden coloured saree,while,Annu looked at Sameer from head to toe,praising his handsome-ness in her mind...

Breaking the silence,he said,

''Tum aaj bohut khubsurat lag rahi ho,Annu...''

Annu blushed at that comment and replied,

''Thank you... Aap bhi bohut handsome lag rahe hai,Sameer. Waise,aapko red tie bohut suit karta hai... Umm... Wahaan baitte hai..Programme abhi shuru hone wala hai...''

''Thanks for the compliment,Annu... Ya,sure.. After you,Pretty Woman...'' Sameer replied,which made Annu blush again...

Everybody sat down,as the programme has started.After the speech by the chief guest,the college authorities awarded Sameer and Annu with bravery recognition award for their outstanding work and contribution in the Mumbai Police Department. Vidyut,Anika,Arjun and Shanaya were very much happy for them,as they achieved so much success,within a short time.. In the previous year,Vidyut and Arjun were also awarded in the same category.

After all the formal programme and pleasantries exchanged,it was time for some entertainment. Shanaya took the mike and took the cue...

''Heyya all... Whats up? Bohut dino baad aaj college mein aake bohut saare yaadein taaza hogayi... Issi reputed college se main,meri Annu di,mere fiance Vidyut,my dear Sameer bhai,my Annu di,my only bestie Anika and my love,Arjun ne humari parhai khatam ki hai... Its our second home... We all wish the best of luck for this college... All hail St.Xaviers..''

Everybody cheer with her and claps loudly...

''Wait a sec,guys... Aaj re-union party hai.. Gaana aur naachna hum jaise youngsters ki aadat hai... Aise shubh mouke pe ganaa aur naachna toh banta hai... Yo DJ... Play some rocking music,eh...''

The DJ showed a thumbs up to Shanaya and everyone and other alumnis' present there hooted...

Shanaya,Arjun,Vidyut and Anika did a peppy dance number,''Badtameez Dil'',for which they got applauded... Other ex-students danced on other peppy songs which made the whole party groove to their tunes...

Soon,the DJ took over the cue and said, ''Yo people,whats up? Bohut hua hai peppy nach gaana,ab chalo bajate hai some romantic music.. What say?''

Entire party hall showed thumbs up to the DJ,who played the first romantic song of the evening. It was played for Shanaya and Arjun.

Arjun took Shanaya in the centre.He held her slender waist and pulled her towards him,which resulted in crashing in his broad,caramel chest.. She was lost in the perfume fragrance he used. She wrapped her arm over his neck and started swaying to the music,with their eyes' locked,looking at each other.

''Jeene laga hoon,
Pehle se zyada,
Pehle se zyada tumpe marrne laga hoon...
Ho..o..o..o..o..o..o..o..oh...''

As the whole song played in the background,the whole atmosphere became romantic.. Sameer looked at Annu,who was looking at him... Their gazes' fixed at each other... Anika saw it and nudged Vidyut to see them..Vidyut hugged Anika from behind and placed a wet kiss on her shoulder.She blushed and turned to hug Vidyut tightly...

While Shanaya and Arjun finished their performance,they were highly applauded.Annu also was happy to see her Shanu so happy with the person she loves... They moved out from the dance floor and went towards Anika and Vidyut,who complimented them for their performance...

It was Vidyut and Anika's turn now.. Both of them went towards the dance floor.Vidyut placed his one hand on her waist and clasped the other with his hand and pulled her closer to him.His minty breath were fanning her cheeks.They were lost in themselves,when the song played in the background...

''Yeh laal ishq,yeh malaal ishq,
Yeh aib ishq,yeh bair ishq..
Tujh sanng bair lagaya aisa..
Mera naam ishq,tera naam ishq,
Mera naam,tera naam,mera naam,
Yeh laal ishq,yeh malaal ishq,
Yeh aib ishq,yeh bair ishq...''

Soon,they finished their romantic dance performance,which was applauded by the whole lot of people present in the hall.. Shanaya and Arjun,along with Sameer and Annu were really very happy to see the couple in true love...

''Aaj toh main apni dil ki baat bolke hi rahunga,Annu.. Dekhti jao...''
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A determined Sameer went upto the DJ and took his mike.. Sameer tapped it twice to check the sound... After checking,he cleared his throat,he spoke..

''Hello and Good Evening,ladies and gentlemen... Aaj mere liye bohut hi khaas din hai... Ek toh aaj mujhe aur meri colleague ko yeh award mila aur dusri taraf yeh hai ki,ki,main apni dil ki baat mere pyaar ko bolna chahta hu...

Main jaanta hu ki main bohut akdu aur sadu hu,in times... Tumhari haatho ki coffee peene ki aadat hogayi.. Pata nahi,kab aur kaise tumse pyaar hogaya.. Jo pyaar maine tumse kiya,woh saccha wala pyaar hai,sirf aur sirf tumhare liye... Bohut mouke aaye mere paas tumhe apni dil ki baaton se pehchaan karwane keliye,par,apni mann ki darr se kabhi kehnahi paya... Main sirf aur sirf yahi kehna chahta hu ki,Ms.Annunay Mehra,ki,main tumse bohut zyada pyaar karta hu,apni jaan se bhi zyada... Tumse shaadi karna chahta hu,apne baccho ke saath khelna chahta hu,tumhare saath burha hona chahta hu.. (He walks towards Annu,who was shocked at his sudden proposal... Both of them were aware of each other's feelingfs,but,they were scared to confess it...)

Will you please honour me by letting me be your ever loving and caring husband,who wants to grow old with you,love you?''

Annu saw Sammer kneeling down infront of her,with a ring box in his hand.. Everyone asked her to say ''Yes'' to Sameer... Anika,Vidyut,Arjun and Shanaya kept their fingers crossed...

After a moment,Annu happily placed her hand on his hand and replied; ''I also love you a lot,Sameer... And yes,main aapse shaadi karungi...''

The whole party squealed in happiness,as two lovers' re-united with each other.. Anika and Shanaya,hugged their fiances' in excitement.. Sameer slid the diamond solitaire ring in Annu's finger.After that,Sameer tok Annu in tight but loving and warm embrace... Anika and Shanaya were really very happy and informed their respective parents' about this news. They were also very much happpy to know about this...

''Yo yo boys and girls... Its time for the star couple of this night,Sameer and Annu to hit the dance floor...''

Sameer and Annu went to the dance floor and started dancing,being in each other's warm and loving embrace...

''Tu,
Tu hai wahi,
Dil ne jisse,
Apna kaha,
Tu hai jahaan,Main hu wahaan,
Ab toh ye jeevan tere bin hai saza,
Mil jaaye iss tarha,do leherein jis tarha,
Phir ho na juda,
Haan Yeh Vaada Raha...''

''I love you,Sameer...''

''I love you too,Annu..''

After this,Sameer bent a little and captured her lips in a warm yet loving kiss...Annu smiled in between the kiss and she also equally responsed to the kiss.. After they broke the kiss,they hugged each other and swayed to the beautiful romantic music playing in the background,promising to be with each other till lifetimes to come...

*The End.*
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Amazing
Superb proposal
Song selection amazing