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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
superb story...do continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
nice update
geet gauss right by hearing pratibha's talk
hope pratibha will share her problem with geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
nice update, thanks for writing longer update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Part 7

 

Geet - pratibha why r u upset?

Me - no mam, I am nt upset.

Geet - sorry bt maine tunari phn conversation sunli thi aur muje pata hai ki tum thodi upset ho.

Me - nai mam issi koi baat nai hai

Geet - its ok tum batana nai chahati toh koi prob nai hai

Me - nai mam plz aap bura mat maniye actually baat aisi hai meri ek cousin ki shadi hai aur mera mann nai hai jane ka and meri mom force kar rahi hai muje jane ke liye.

Geet - agar apki mother itna bol rahi hai toh unki baat maan lo unne acha laega.

Me - I knw but prob is dat I don't like to go in the parties.

Geet - well u should go to party and enjoy urself.

Me - thank u mam for ur suggestion but I m njoying my life with my work. I don't need party to njoy.

Geet - alle lo tum toh bilkul maan ki tarah baate kar rahi ho who bhi aisi hi baate karte hai.

Unki ye baat sunkar main thoda smile karne lagi aur tabhi maan sir coffees ke sath  aa gaye aur puchne lage ki hum kya baate kar rahe hai

Geet - kuch nai bus kisi ke workaholic hone ki baat kar rahe the.

Maan - geet plz ab firse who baat mat suru karo

Geet - ha -ha main hi toh hu jo sab baate suru karti hu, aur aap toh bht bole hai.

Main unki meeti nok-jhok musurate hue sun rahi thi tabhi maan sir ne meri taraf dekha aur puchne lage

Maan - why are u smiling like this

My smile get  faded and get feared and said - nothing sir and sorry sir. I think I'll take my leave.

Geet - no u r not going now plz stay some more times.

Me - nai mam muje kuch kaam yaad aa gaya hai muje jana hoga  n thanks for coffee.

Geet - thanks ki koi baat nai hai dear. Its great time with u

Me - bye mam and hav a gud day sir

Maan - ya bye see u tomorrow

Geet - bye and take care.

After pratibha left from there geet to maan

Geet - she is vry sweet girl but  I can see there is longing in her eyes.

Maan - ya I can see tha too she always stay aloof in office.

Geet - bus ho gayi aapki office ki baate suru, kal se phele hi main naraz hu apke iss office ki baato se

Maan - geet main kya kar sakta hu jab koi important call ho toh use attend karna pada.

Geet - maine kab mana kiya aapko phn lene se but 3 ghante tak who bhi dinner bech mein chodkar.

 

Flashback-

IN THE LAST EVENING

After returning from office maan is trying  to pacify her but geet doesn't give any hint to get pacified.at last maan set on his knee and said to geet

Maan - geet plz itni kya narazgi office ka kaam tha uski presentation Monday ko hai toh karna aisa kahna pada.

Geet - acha tekh hai main kuch nai kahti aur apko maaf bhi kar deti hu.

Maan immediately  takes geet lips in his for a soul searing kiss. Geet senses become numb for few seconds and after dat she also respond and when their breath become short they apart and geet said

Geet - maan chaliye dinner karte hai apne lunch bhi bhar kiya tha.

Maan - ok main fresh hokar aata hu.

Both are having there lunch suddenly maan phone start ringing and its overseas client so maan have to attend dere call in middle of dinner and it take 3 hours to short out dere queries  and this made geet angry on maan again

FLASHBACK END

Geet - maan muje apki health ki parwah hai isliye aapko kahti hu lunch n dinner time par kiya karo par ussme bhi aap office work ko le aate hai

Maan - geet main aisa isliye karta hu kynki muje pata hai kit um hona  mera khayal rakne ke liye  

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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Ye maan ko na butter maarna ache se ata h😉
Kya line tha tum hona mera khyal rakhne k leye!
Waiting for the next! 
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
so short but lovely update.. maan ka jadoo chal gyaa... hehe.. waiting for more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
very nice
curious about pratibha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

part 8


Geet - maan muje apki health ki parwah hai isliye aapko kahti hu lunch n dinner time par kiya karo par ussme bhi aap office work ko le aate hai.

Maan - geet main aisa isliye karta hu kynki muje pata hai kit um hona mera khayal rakne ke liye.

Geet - aacha ji aap chahate hai ki main aapke aage piche plate lekar ghumu.

Maan - well maine itna toh nai socha tha but ab tum kah rahi ho toh I don't mind

Geet - maan aap bhi na kabhi kabhi bacho jaisi baate karte hai

Maan - ab kya karu meri mishty hai hi asi ki mera amnn uske sath bacho ki tarah khelne me maza aata hai

Geet - bus bus aur maska mat lagaye aage ke liye kuch chod do.ab chale ghar

 

NEXT DAY IN OFFICE

IN maan cabin

Maan - adi  mr.chopra ke project  ka budget ready ho gaya

Adi - yeesss sir

Maan - and Natasha(head architect) what is the progree of there  blueprint.

Natasha - sir blueprint mein last changes karne hai baaki final ho gaye.

Maan - toh unn changes ko karne ke liye yumhe koi invitation chahiye

Adi - hehehehe

Maan - ADI

Adi  - sorry sir

Maan - Natasha muje who blueprint aaj office timing se phele mere table par chahiye.

Natasha - ok sir, I will do it.

Maan - now u both can go

Lunch time

All are having their lunch in canteen.pinki,pratibha,Tanya, adi,sameer doing their lunch together on a table. Tabhi waha geet aa jati hai aur kahti hai

Geet - arre wah mere bina hi lunch ho raha hai.

Adi - geet tum kab aayi?

Geet - bus kuch time phele adi sir. Maan ko lunch karakar socha aap sab se mil lu

Pinki -toh khadi kyn hai aaja yaha.

Tanya - mam today u r loving very beautiful today.

Geet - thanku Tanya ye dress al maan ne muje gift ki hai

Adi - maan sir aur shoping woh  bhi bina tumare

Geet - nai adi sir,aapko nai pata kya

Adi - kya geet

Geet (looking at me ) - muje laga aapko pata hoga  

 Geet - main aur maan kal shoping ke liye gaye the aur muje ye suit pasand aaya par ye kisi aur ne pasand kar liya tha but maan ke kahne par uss ladki ne ye maan ko de diya

Sameer - koi msk ko mana hi nai kar sakta unki personality hi aisi hai.

Geet - nai ussne ye dress msk ko nai balki uss husband ko di jo aapi wife ko khush karna chahata the.

Pinki - who ladki sweet hogi tabhi ussne  dress dedi.

Geet - ha bhut hi sweet thi bt bolti kam thi

Pinki - fir toh woh hamari pratibha ki tarah hai ye bhi toh kaha baate karti hai,lunch ke liye bhi main hi iss bulakar layi hu.

A peon came to call geet to maan's cabin

Peon - geet mam, maan sir aapko bula rahe hai.

Geet - tekh hai

In cabin

Geet - maan aapne muje bulaya

Maan - ha geet iss project ki detail check kardo na plz muje ek blueprint check karne hai kuch deer main meeting hai

Geet - tekh hai

After sometime

Geet - maan iss file mein kuch clauses mein muje problem lag rahi hai.

Maan - geet inn point ko tum meri p.a. se discuss kar lena jab main meeting ke liye chala jau but abhi toh kuch meeti meeti baate karo

Geet - maan kya kah rahe ho aap office hai yaha kaam karte hai

Maan(with fake anger) - waah geet jab main kaam karta hut oh tume problem aur jab tumse pyar bhari baate karu toh problem

 Geet - nai maan aap meri baat ko galat samaj rahe hai

Maan - toh kya samju

Geet - aap aisi baate office mein karte hai toh muje saram aati hai ki agar kisi ne aapki ye baate sunli toh woh wahi faint ho jayega bechra

Maan - geet tumari wahi shy smile dekhne ke liye hi toh main aisi baate karta hu. Jab tak tumari who smile nai dekhta main mera din acha nai jata.

Geet - bus-bus ab aapko meeting ke liye nai jana.

Maan - arre ha main meeting ke liye late ho gaya who bhi tumari wajah se.

Geet - hawww! Meri wajah se kaise?

Maan - tum itna jo bolti ho ki rukne ka naam hi nai leti.

Geet - maan aap na!aapna!

Maan - geet job hi bolna hai meeting ke baad. Bye

With that maan kiss on geet cheek and left the cabin.

PRECAP - more mannet moments and geet-pratibha talk

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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Agle part me agar prathiba ki story start nahi hui tho acha nahi ho ga batarahi hu!😡
Waiting for the next! 

Aur ha kabi kabhi humare comments ka reply kar leya karo..
We'll also know about you.. n ur opinion. !
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Agle part me agar prathiba ki story start nahi hui tho acha nahi ho ga batarahi hu!😡

Waiting for the next!

Aur ha kabi kabhi humare comments ka reply kar leya karo..
We'll also know about you.. n ur opinion. !



ya main nxt part me pratibha ke baye me hi batane wali thi so dont worry dear.
And hello dear,how r u