how can i say i love you : re starting new thread

~A SHORT STORY ON LOVE MARRIAGE~

INDEX

PROLOGUE

CHARACTER SKETCH
PAGE 1

TEASER

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105972764

PART 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110666073

PART 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4007996?pn=18

part 3-6
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4007996?pn=49




PART 7 & PART 8


Part 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4007996?pn=83

Part 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120578315

PART 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4007996?pn=107

PART 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/123393397

PART 13 , PART 14 , part 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4007996?pn=118

Edited by suhaaana - 8 years ago

happy B'DAY my sweetest DONA di.. love you a lot .. this forum has given me lots of friends and di you are one amongst them...

hope you like my this little attempt

love suhana  

 

how can i say i love you

how can i say that i belong to you

how can i say that you are my life

how can i say that my breadths are for you

how can say that i can die for you

i can kill myself but i cannot say that i love you

 

( okk not so perfect but this is the basic theme of the story )

 

this is based on innocent love that can raise the heartbeats of the person but this cannot be the reason to make two souls one .. there are barriers that always forbids two loving souls in expressing and when they express themselves they are binded in the barrier of society which is the name of honour and pride..

Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago

CHARACTER SKETCH

 

MAAN SINGH KHURANA : he is nineteen and lives in delhi with his family .. an intelligent and hard and tough guy he despise girls for which he himseLf have no clue why he does  .. brilliant in studies and right now in second year of architecture ...

belongs to a good reputed family but he has hide his original status..

 

NAINA KHURANA : she is a loving mother of two sons and knows what is best for her family..

 

RAJVEER KHURANA : he is a well known business man in india ..owns a chain of hotels and handling khurana empire alone .. he has worked really hard to achieve this success and never let his success dance on his head ...

 

VIKRANT KHURANA : sixteen year old , a naughty brother but behaved .. he is in class 11..

 

SAVITRI DEVI KHURANA : head of the khurana family and a loving daadima of her grandsons..

 

GEET HANDA: she is in same class as maan , average in studies a bubbly chirpy girl..belongs from a highly conservative family .. lives in delhi along with her family

 

MOHINDAR HANDA : geet's father he is GM in a reputed bank.. he is strict but loves his children a lot .. he believes in hundred years old traditions still .. and belives that girls have no right on their life ...

 

RANO HANDA : a loving mother and a house wife ..

 

ARJUN HANDA : he is second son of mohindar handa .. a loving brother little bit strict but knows the change in traditions

 

NANDINI HANDA : arjun's wife

 

VEER HANDA : he is the eldest son of mohindar handa settled in gujarat along with his family loking after his business there..

 

PRIYA HANDA : veer's wife 

 

ANJALI SINGHANIA : elder daughter of  handa's married to dev singhania

 

DEV SINGHANIA : belongs to a reputed family from delhi ..  married to anjali

( he is negative character )

 

PRACHI SINGHANIA : three year old daughter of anjali and dev..

Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago

PROLOGUE

 

i didnt knew what is love .. i didnt knew how you made me come in your life but i feel that this life is not worthy for you and our love.. i cannot say how much i love you ..but i certainly can't live without you ...

 

you are my life you made this life worthy ..you are my love .. i know you love me and i won't let you go..

i will makE you love me and will never let you die ..

your breadths are mine and your eyes say me what you are to me..

maan : you girls are good for nothing do you know .. i am not dong anything now just get that damn project complete or i am going to coordinater..

scared and fearful eyes cascaded some tears and she sat on her computer looking at the designs trying to understand...

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geet : you are nuts do you know .. i have done my work now don't eat my head just leave ...

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tears were cascading her eyes she looked around and messaged..

I DON'T KNOW .. JUST DON'T ASK ME ANYTHING ..I CAN'T SAY YES AND MY HEART IS NOT LETTING ME SAY NO...

 

AFTER SOME TIME

 

I LOVE YOU... 💔

 

he messaged back

 

me too...

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geet : papaji, i won't marry anyone else.. i have seen di now i can't be another anjali.. it will be better i don't marry than marrying someone who will kill me slowly..

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rest you can predict

this is the base of the story or the incidents that will come in the form of the story

 

the story deals with some facts and true incidents , the concept of love marriage and caste differences ..

this is based on something real ( most of the incidents ) and i will post it on the forum if will get positive response.. else not post here only in my blog ..

though it has some emotional moment but its not a sad one ...

 

 

Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago

Thank you for this sweet sa gift 😳🤗
n congrats for the new ss 🥳🥳
nice cs
maan 19 yr old abhi se ladkiya pasand nahi hai😆😆
n nice prologue...family honor...nice concept...

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

Thank you for this sweet sa gift 😳🤗
n congrats for the new ss 🥳🥳
nice cs
maan 19 yr old abhi se ladkiya pasand nahi hai😆😆
n nice prologue...family honor...nice concept...

thank u didu
glad u like it
didu ye kisi se inspired hai so i cant comment on that his character is actually like maan

Edited by -indu- - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

thank u didu
glad u like it
didu ye kisi se inspired hai so i cant comment on that his character is actually like maan

😲
hain really😆
god save his GF or wife 😆😆

Originally posted by: -indu-

Nice one...

Poora overview dediya😛

didu dena hi tha
did u like it😊

Originally posted by: suhaaana

didu dena hi tha
did u like it😊