ASHLOK FF-Criminals,Love&Death(NOTE PG76) - Page 41

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

banjara=wanderer n thats wt m lisng to 24*7 nwadays😎

Originally posted by: arnaib

nice update 👍🏼 😳

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

first of all i just love dat song

nd astha cleaning his house cooking for both of dem like a typical wife

nd astha parents are dead or they are alive

nd precap is interesting

do update soon

Originally posted by: pranud

first of all, congrats for the half century🥳

ashlok scenes are really cute and the lyrics added much more to that..

awww she is changing him and his life😳

i think her parents' death is a trap.. again, someone shot shlok!😡

great update and please update soon dear

Originally posted by: Sam_15

Omg what a thrilling update! 😲 Very interesting and emotional!! 😳😳

Aww Shlok is slowly falling for Astha, and appreciating her presence in his life 😃 Loved the way you incorporated the banjara song in it. It suits the situation perfectly Btw I am obssessed with this song nowadays. Listen to it continuously...in fact was listening to it while reading ur update 😆😳

Astha was going to engulfed by the sea? 😕 But thank God Shlok saved her as always 😳

Loved the interaction in the cottage as well as the sea side. The part about baby star fish was so cute 😊

And omg Astha's parents killed? 😲😲😲 Shlok shot? 😲😲 😭😭😭 Hope he is alright...he has to be, right? Will Astha really leave him alone in this condition? I don't believe she will but let's see 😊

The story is becoming all the more mysterious and dark. Really hooked onto it 😃 Please update soon 😊😊

p.s. thanks for the pm 😊 and congrats for completing half century 🥳

Originally posted by: .Farah.

OMG... Thank you so much!😳

I'm obsessed too... Like literally... Therefore, it came in my story😆

You'll know soon😛😉

Wow.. I'm glad you like it! Thanks for encouraging... I was planning to stop this...

I'll try!😃

Welcome...and thank you!😳😳

oyeee y wr u planing to stop?😡

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

oyeee y wr u planing to stop?😡

Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...

yeh why

Originally posted by: .Farah.

The response I'm getting is too low... That's why

Hey sweety...dont stop ur updates...ur concept is really different and awesome...and i am sorry i haven't commented on your story for last few updates due to lack of time...sooo many fiction waiting for me...recently i finished sam's updates...I.A. next i will finish ur updates and will comment for every single chapter...then i will read aishaa and mawra's and others work...so much to read😆

Originally posted by: .Farah.

The response I'm getting is too low... That's why