BROTHERS...! ( Parrot Story for RIYA HBD Gift @ PG 137)!!! - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey gd, firstly, I am very very sorry for not reviewing any of ur stories till now.. It takes me these many days for reading all ur stories completely.. I have no words to express my views as after reading each and every story and i have to agree that all ur stories are really awesome.. Basically, I am very very bad at sharing my views but ur stories inspired me a lot for reading the stories again and again.. To say frankly, I was shocked at first when i started reading ur parrott stories coz i wondered how cum anyone can write the stories in different genre's that too in such a wonderful way.. Your stories are really very wonderful.. All your stories are very emotional, attached, friendly, relational.. You portrayed every story very well..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Candy..

Awww...Such a emotional soothy ride..❤️❤️
Loved this story as usual...
Han han..I know you are bored with this sentence again & again..😉😆
But its your fault that you make them so Lovable😉🤗

The messege given is really so true..Some steps taken silently destroy many things..
Khair Daya sir as usual cutie pie...
Abhi sir's & ACP sirr's pain potrayed too well...
Bhut acchi & emotional hay..
Thanks for such soothing story..

Love you..Take care🤗🤗


Yes I m Bored now Candy Baccha...😉😆
what, its My fault...😲😲
ab pata chaly ga jub Dada ki koi Story Nhai aaye gi...😡😡
But its does not mean that all Silent Step creating Problems... hmmm...😃😃
A Big Bulky Thank You to My Chota Cutie Pie...😳😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honey71

hey gd, firstly, I am very very sorry for not reviewing any of ur stories till now.. It takes me these many days for reading all ur stories completely.. I have no words to express my views as after reading each and every story and i have to agree that all ur stories are really awesome.. Basically, I am very very bad at sharing my views but ur stories inspired me a lot for reading the stories again and again.. To say frankly, I was shocked at first when i started reading ur parrott stories coz i wondered how cum anyone can write the stories in different genre's that too in such a wonderful way.. Your stories are really very wonderful.. All your stories are very emotional, attached, friendly, relational.. You portrayed every story very well..


Ur Sorry Accepted...😆😆
Obviously so much time required for reading tons of Stories...😆
mean My Stories make You Such Open that U started Reviewing...
Yes, its Difficult for Me to included Parrot in such a way that its Not looking like Weird and Reders accepted Him easily...😊😊
Honestly, its always be a Pleasure to have any New Reader Review in My Story/Work...😳😳😃
A Big Thank you so much HONEY... 😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Gd, You are welcome.. Yeah Gd , I want to open up myself and want to share my views from now on wards and so started sharing with ur story.. I want to continue to share my views over here and I hope i will overcome my problem and will try to share my views for every thing (Actually, i want to participate in all types of discussions here but i just can't express my views easily) without any hesitation as soon as possible..
but Gd, Why are you not interested to open a new PH?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada


ab pata chaly ga jub Dada ki koi story nhi ayegi



Whyy????😲😲
You cant do this with me..
No No No Dada..😭
Your stories are the only place where i can see Duo speciall Daya sir the way i imagine him to be❤️❤️
Dont take away my Daya sir from me...
Please...😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honey71

Gd, You are welcome.. Yeah Gd , I want to open up myself and want to share my views from now on wards and so started sharing with ur story.. I want to continue to share my views over here and I hope i will overcome my problem and will try to share my views for every thing (Actually, i want to participate in all types of discussions here but i just can't express my views easily) without any hesitation as soon as possible..

but Gd, Why are you not interested to open a new PH?


Yes thats a Good thing cz if U dunt open Urself... how the ppl interact U...😃😃
about Ur Query, the Less Review really Annoyed Me and all Creative Workers...😭😭
thats the Problem yaar...🤢🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Candy..



Whyy????😲😲
You cant do this with me..
No No No Dada..😭
Your stories are the only place where i can see Duo speciall Daya sir the way i imagine him to be❤️❤️
Dont take away my Daya sir from me...
Please...😭😭


ab tou Bhai sirf S kay agal Bagal hain...😭😭
Mujhy Nhai likhna aisa Gandy Bhai pr...

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Posted: 11 years ago
As always brilliant Dada... Reading after a huuuge gap
Loved our vry precious duo and of course it was very diffrent and I loved it...
Was little bit furious with Abhi sir since first part.. But end hote hote kam hogaya
Catching with your other stories and CID also
Keep writing... Love you always... Tc
Forgot to add Congratulations on becoming super coool cool bie
Edited by maggi.masala - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read the complete story finally..😃
Rocking story Dada! Loved it so much..read your story after a long lapse, feeling relieved. 😳
As if I got something precious that went away long ago...!
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Posted: 11 years ago
GD, whenever you write I read and send you a review on PM. The next thing you say is...yeh aapke taste ka nahi hai. But I read them because I want to see some nice episodes with our actual team which we never get on screen with the battalion.


I liked your prev story. Woh duo undercover Wala. Hence I started reading this.

Again like many of your prev stories Daya lands in hospital, starts crying. A few scenes into it I felt too depressed to continue.

You write such hilarious stories on the funny threas and when you write such senti stories it goes to the other extreme. Why do you do this? 😒

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