Yuvreen FF: Two is better than one <3 updated part 5 on page 8, 9 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
i listened rest of her song , it amazed me so much that i didn't even realise when it was finished,
all people clapped , i opened my eyes and searched for her but she was nowhere to be seen ,
i cursed myself for letting her go
all night i was just listening her voice in my heart ,
Precap: yuvis pov
"have you kissed anyone"

"no , never had a chance"
"well if i give u that chance?"
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
well well , sorry again for late ,
did u like yuvraj's pov or i shud write in only suvreen's pov ?
hope u all liked the update , do share ur thoughts , love you all
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Loved d precap n awesome update plzz do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
awesome update spu. Completely loved it. Precap interesting. Waiting.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
thank u all next part have a big surprise
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
part 4 :

"mumma , mumma mujhe job milgayi"
"kya sach me , me abhi puja rakhwati hun"
"mumma , unka sms aya tha , kal se me join kar rai hun"
"arre ja mandir jakar aa prasad chadhade"
"okay mumma bye"
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. nothing is peaceful than being here ,
i closed my eyes and started
"Gannuji , thank you so much , pata hai aj mujhe job mili ...are apko to pata hoga na .. akhir apineto karwaya hai ,
bas ab ap mere raj ko milado , jo mujhe ddlj ke taraf ghodepe bithakar lejaye"
i opened my eyes
ohh teri , maine ghoda bolatha ye gadha kaise agaya ?
"tum?"
"kyun mai yahan nai aa sakta?"
"hahaha, nai bas khadus mr.yuvraj singh, owner of the restaurent 'We', never thought u would be here, hahaha "
it was really funny to saw a guy like him there
"oyye chuhi, insaan chahe kaisa bhi chahe kitna bhi bada ho apne sanskar apni parampara ko nahi bhulata"
"arre wah, itni akal to hai tumme ...what ...tumne mujhe chuhi kaha?"
"nai , bakri kaha"
"oyye ek bar ambuja cement kya bola tumme itni himmat, ab ye diwar tutake rahegi "
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
"okay okay haha sorry baba , haha , lets have a walk"
"ohh why not"

he was funny , in a gud way , we introduced ourselves asked about the education , favorites ,
moment by moment we were getting more personal ,
suddenly he stopped in middle ,
"your voice is so beautifull"
"thanks"
"and so you are"
"what?"
"do you have a boyfriend?"
"no"
"do you have kissed?"
"no , never had a chance bfore"
"well what if I give u that chance"
my jaw touched to floor by shock , anger rose in my gut ,
"(thadd!!!!!!!!!), tumhari himmat kaise hui"
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Yuvraj's pov :

"(thadd!!!) tumhari himmat kaise hui "
i was stunned , force of her hand was imprinted on my chick , itna jor se thappad pahli bar khaya tha
"i ... i ... tum galat samajh rai ho , i mean ki i wanted to help uat finding a guy for u , then... u ...slapped...hey m nt that type ...i am sorry "
i was pissed beyond limit but on myself , i wanted to just tell that m not such tapori ,
"really?"
"haan haan .. i swear"
"ohh teri , i am sorry , me bhi na buddhu kahiki"
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
i was happy ki misunderstanding dur hogayi , but now she was feeling guilty and i cursed myself one more time for that ,
"hey its okay " i said her taking hands in my hands ,
"but i am sorry"ohh man she was crying now
"hey its okay i know" i wiped her tears ,
"par me bhi kitni budhhu hun"
"haan wo to hai"
she looked at me for 5 seconds and started laughing historically
even i couldnt hold back anymore ,
we laughed so much that time ,
"okay bye , mujhe chalna chahiye"
here came my being sad part
"really?" i asked her hoping she would say no ,
"yeah , mumma wait kar rai hogi"
"par i want u to stay here"
"huh ? u r so funny"
"and u r so cute"
100% sure she blushed
, i was happy , so much happy ,
and the thing she did ,
she stood on her toes and kissed my damaged chick ,
wow , i felt heavenly , 440 current ka jhatka laga ,
"thanks for giving me job " she said and vanished in the crowd ,
wow , all that time my mind was screaming just one thing ,
"i want her"
scratch that
"i need her"
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Precap :yuvraj's pov :
"woh dekhane me kaisa sidha sadha lagta hai bolta ki wo to kuch nahi samjhata"
there was something very beautiful , maybe its magic , her dream to sing , i think that power led us here , to meet , to be together ,
i think i am going kiss her this time , witout asking ,
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. so friends , this is the 4th part , equations are building up between our yuvreen , stay tuned to know what next , will they be together? or it is just a attraction ?

like and comments share ur thoughts ,
love you all
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Amazing 👏
I was just 😆 while reading
Luvd d ambuja cement scene 🤣