Random Drabble: Her ~ PM's Sent..

mochhug thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
#1
Hey guys! So this is just a random drabble I came up with literally a few minutes ago. 

It's not really Asya related, although it could apply. 

Hope you like it. 😊


Her...

Her raven hair danced around her face, kissing her cheeks, a faint blush creeping up her milky skin. Her smile radiated happiness, as the sweet sound of her angelic laughter left her lips. She was happy. She was radiant. She was, her. 


She danced around her the open field, her arms flailing carelessly around the air, as she pretended to be held in someone's embrace, shifting from side to side. The rain kissed her skin, drenching her from head to toe, her smile growing with each and every drop. Her hands moved, to catch as many rain drops as her frail fingers could reach for, her head thrown back, the rain drawing endless patterns on her exquisite facial features. 


I watched on, at the mesmerizing sight before me. The angel, that was happily lost in her own world of rain and bliss, was finally free. Free to love, free to be loved, free to be happy. And I was lucky enough to be a witness to her happiness. Lucky enough to see her smile, her infectious excitement, her wild and crazy yet soft and curly hair stick to her body like it was her second skin. Her clothes becoming a part of her, as they, too, were soaked in the pitter patter of the falling rain drops. 


I looked up, letting the rain wash away all my worries, all my fears and all my sadness. There was nothing to be sad about. She was here. She was there. She was everywhere, and she was happy. Happy as a clam, happy as the shining sun. Spreading her joy, her innocence wherever she went. 


Touching anyone and everyone that she ever came across. There were a few select lucky enough to meet her. To be a part of her life. To be touched by her in a way only an angel could. And she was just that. She was an angel. 


She is my angel. 


A/N: 

Hope you guys liked it 😳

Edited by mochhug - 10 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

48

Views

4704

Users

21

Likes

88

Frequent Posters

SH7_Sunny thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 9 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Ressy messy its lionel messi
yay i am first here
monu it was good yaar
i loved it
loved the way e expressed all things in the rain
but for whom it is written means u kept in mind and wrote this.
Love all things u described here in this drabble.
Update soon ur FF also.
Thanks for the pmEdited by --SH7_Sunny-- - 10 years ago
mochhug thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Ressy messy its lionel messi
yay i am first here
monu it was good yaar
i loved it
loved the way e expressed all things in the rain
but for whom it is written means u kept in mind and wrote this.
Love all things u described here in this drabble.
Update soon ur FF also.
Thanks for the pm


Aww thanks hun! 😳

yes it was written with someone special in mind 😆

But that's the beauty of using pronouns. No names! 😛

😃
Edited by mochhug - 10 years ago
MissReadingFaye thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Thank you for that cute and sweet and dreamy drabble Monica, 
that was absolutely beautiful and I love anything that has rain 
incorporated in it. I live in the rainiest city of the UK and yep 
I'm a total sucker for the rain. 
Thank you for the awesome piece 🤗
mochhug thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: MissReadingFaye

Thank you for that cute and sweet and dreamy drabble Monica, 

that was absolutely beautiful and I love anything that has rain 
incorporated in it. I live in the rainiest city of the UK and yep 
I'm a total sucker for the rain. 
Thank you for the awesome piece 🤗


Aww your welcome 😳

I happen to live in the rainiest city in Canada lol. 
I used to hate the rain, but it's growing on me now 😳

Thanks for the lovely comment 🤗
MissReadingFaye thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: mochhug


Aww your welcome 😳

I happen to live in the rainiest city in Canada lol. 
I used to hate the rain, but it's growing on me now 😳

Thanks for the lovely comment 🤗


You're welcome Monica and Canada is so beautiful 😳
daydream. thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#7

Before I comment, Monica, your dabba...

 
Anyways, OMG! This is my new favorite piece of work by you! 👏 The language was perfectly descriptive, elegant, and beautifully penned. It was magnificent. <3<3<3
 
She's happy, and she makes him happy. :) How beautiful is that? I really like the simplicity of the piece.
 
I especially loved how you didn't use names.  I love it when people only use pronouns. The reader has control over who they want it to be about. And it creates a sense of beauty and mystery. 😳
 
I'm just gonna let my fangirl-mind make it about Asad-Zoya (KaBhi). 😆
 
Excellent work, Monica! 😃 Now go and finish MJ! 😡 Then start a new story. 😆
 
-Fari. 😳 ❤️ 
 
Edited by -LiveLoveLaugh- - 10 years ago
mochhug thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: MissReadingFaye


You're welcome Monica and Canada is so beautiful 😳


Indeed it is! Although it's the rainiest city here, it's also the most beautiful city here. I love it 
rajsmi thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Nicxe drabble for whomever you have in mind :-) Love the rains only through the window from the confines of my home but the lines were pretty!
Alone111 thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#10
I loved it..
It was gud..
U described it very well,,