AsYa FS ~ 5 Days of a Road Trip *Completed* - Page 53

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Day 1:

"The journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step."

A fantastic start to the journey of a lifetime

Road trip from Delhi to Mumbai with Jaipur as a halt

I loved both the characters

Of course the start for Zoya was not pleasant as her car broke down

But some beautiful paths can't be discovered without a problem

Help came for her in the form of Asad who I took an instant liking to

I loved the way introduced themselves to each other

'THE PINK CITY' wow... It was beautifully described

AsYa staying in the same room was superb

Jaipur was so beautifully described by you.

Awesome work Mina Di!

❤️

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Day 2:

"We can't know what's going to happen. We can just try to figure it out as we go along."

This part was superb

Loved the way you wrote and described everything

Asad surely drove a long way

Zoya is such a darling

First feelings... wow... I loved the way you showed them... amazing

Beautifully written

Wow

I am head over heels in love with this trip

❤️

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Well said Mahi... 👏

"It is good to have an end to journey toward; but it is the journey that matters, in the end."

This is a really beautiful quote! ❤️ Goes really well. But to think of it, every journey that ends has a story to it and eventually may not be The End! 😳

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Your selection of quotes have got me awestruck!

Thanks love. 🤗 But you know, I have been to Jaipur only once when I was around 4 years old so these are the faint memories. 😆

Plus I got help from Gazal who lives there! 😉

Love you! ❤️

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Day 3:

"Do not follow where the path may lead. Go instead where there is no path and leave a trail"

This day was just so amazing

Started at a perfect note

Asad drove at night with Zoya sleeping on his shoulder

This shows the level of trust and comfort

Zoya kissed Asad... wow... Hug and then the kiss... it was so magical and something unique

Asad realised his love and understood that Zoya had feelings too

In the evening, they were so comfortable with each other.. wow... brilliant work

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

What the hell? 😲 How did you become this beautiful with quotes. 👏 I loved the lines. ❤️ It's indeed true that we can never know what is actually gonna happen until and unless we experience every moment of what has already come. 😃

Thank you so much baby! 🤗 Your comments make me feel like a star! ⭐️

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Goodness me! *pinch me* 😲

Your quotes are so apt to the chapter and the story line! 😳

Indeed I have to get the mush. Or else it won't be me right! 😉

Thank you! ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Day 4:

"And I felt, in the silence that followed, everything that had happened on the trip to bring me to this place."

The moment they spent in the balcony. The way Asad slipped his arms around her waist and hugged her. The way he questioned about her day huskily whispering in her ear. The way he said he did not mind that she kissed him. The way he gently kissed on her cheek and told her to finish her coffee.

I love the blissful morning... it was so full of love... 😃

Zoya closed her eyes and made her head fall back on his chest. Asad smiled and made her face him. He gently bent and pecked her on the cheek. She blushed a shade of crimson and hid herself in his chest. They both were now sure that they were deeply in love. When it happened or How it happened, was no more a question as they were not bothered about the answers.

So much of romance in the morning itself... they both are so much in love with each other... just picture perfect 😳

They kissed each other as though that was the only important thing in their life, as though their life depended on it. They not bother about the people who walked past them giving them a glare. The only thing they bothered about was they were in love and were in each other's embrace.

The confession was so unique... words were not needed... they both knew what was in each other's heart clearly... well as their heart belonged to each other now.. they were bound to know ❤️

"Asad! You know I never thought that I would fall in love like this! This road trip has been the best thing ever in my life!", she exclaimed as she finished feeding the last bite to Asad and wiped off her hand with the tissue paper.

And this story is one of the best things I have ever read... I am loving it on AsYa all the more ⭐️

"I wish everyday would be like this!", exclaimed Zoya and she dropped a kiss on his stubble cheek.

"Very soon it will be like this!", said Asad as he dropped a kiss on her hair. She snuggled more into him and drifted off into slumber for a fresh start of a new life. A life with her love.. Her Asad!

Their love... Their understanding... Their bond... Their trust... Everything is so strong... It surely can never be broken... You are making me fall for AsYa all over again

This Road Trip had been the most drastic change in their lives, but also the most beautiful one! It had changed their lives and made it a paradise. They slept away dreaming of a tomorrow of togetherness, a tomorrow of love.

I totally agree with you... This road trip is surely life changing for them 🤗

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Day 5:

This Road Trip was about to end but now this Road Trip was the most memorable time of their lives. Of how they fell in love with each other being complete strangers!

They rode away to the Journey to Eternity, a Lifetime of Togetherness!

I am sure that they will have many more road trips but none will ever be able to beat this one... the one that they fell so in love with each other

I loved the way they both are so comfortable with each other

They singing part was so cute

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

THAT QUOTE IS FAVOURITED BY ME NOW!

Awww.. You quoted instances in the story! ❤️ HAHA.. Falling in love with AsYa all over again? 😲 Nah! With you? Not possible! 😛

Thanks love! ❤️