|| Teri Deewani || A TaaRey OS - Page 2

Awsme os.. Tr got intimate.. Rey did that to take revenge frm swayam.. Taani left... After 4yr rey found his daughter nd taani.. Nd manofy her nd lived happily..

nice os
idea ws really gud
only thing was ijust felt lil rushed
i understand its a os
so its fine
hats off to ur creativity

XD lol! One of the most funny os' s I've evr read..don't mind but since u never wrote sumthing lyk dat it felt very odd...

but i liked it pooja but i think forgiving part could be a bit detail

Originally posted by: _Anusha_

XD lol! One of the most funny os' s I've evr read..don't mind but since u never wrote sumthing lyk dat it felt very odd...

Anyway...d romance was gud! :P

what was funny , i didnt understand your comment 🤔

it was a nice os, reyam enemys, taanis love, reys reveng, everythg was nicely written bt d last portn after rey meeting taarey daughter was a little too fast i guess, s i no its an os and der is a limit in writing bt still i felt so, bt on d whole dis os was emotnal, hot ,romantic and lovely with happy ending : ) and all d best fr ur exams...

awesum blossom os
luved it fully

oh gosh...reyam enemies...????!!!!!!!!!

heyyy dear i dont have 

words to describe ur

writing skills i means 

kahan se aate hain 

tumhe itne saare ideas

yrrr they are minblowing

n this os takes my breath

so many emotions are in 

one os just fabulous

love their romance

n the title was good bcoz

it describes the whole os

overall mindblowing dear

keep writing n thanx for pm

bye

take care!!!

Again an awesme Os...
I truly bowed u down
Awesme Os
.Rey used taani for his revenge Bt unknown to him Dat he will lose his only possession taani
Nd Der night was...I cnt hv wrds to explain
Loved Ur Os to the core