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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Lovely OS. Childhood love, beautifully written. Cep 4 "Maan" instead of Abhay in one place n some typos.
U should write more on AbhIya :D

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didlr

@didlr

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: flora212
This was wonderful story👏 salted coffee perfect title⭐️

good to knw u enjoyed

Thanks

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didlr

@didlr

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Andromeda001
Lovely OS. Childhood love, beautifully written. Cep 4 "Maan" instead of Abhay in one place n some typos.
U should write more on AbhIya :D

Thank u so much

Will do the needful😊

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Nice OS Tanshi 👏 But to be honest I was reminded of Maaneet while reading and not bcoz u have mentioned their names instead of Abhay and Piya once but the characteristics are just too similar 😊 It was cute n had fun reading it.

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didlr

@didlr

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: FieryHeart
Nice OS Tanshi 👏 But to be honest I was reminded of Maaneet while reading and not bcoz u have mentioned their names instead of Abhay and Piya once but the characteristics are just too similar 😊 It was cute n had fun reading it.

Thanks...n sry fr that

Can u plz let me knw who u are because u've taken my name bt i can't place u:)

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

WOW yaar suprbly awesomee os loved it so much... do write more dear...

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: didlr

Thanks...n sry fr that
Can u plz let me knw who u are because u've taken my name bt i can't place u:)

No need to be sorry 😳 I make hellish mistakes when I write and u have written two versions of ur story on different couples. Its bound to happen😳 My prev usernames have been mandy1024 and ..mandy.. I hope by now u must have guessed who I am 😆 I used to write abhiya FFs once upon a time before shutting down all my works in this forum.

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Anon

@raintrifle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

res

thanx for sending me a pm .

i will unres it soon 😃

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

lovely os... i like pia's self talk... abhay is caring as usual

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didlr

@didlr

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: FieryHeart

No need to be sorry 😳 I make hellish mistakes when I write and u have written two versions of ur story on different couples. Its bound to happen😳 My prev usernames have been mandy1024 and ..mandy.. I hope by now u must have guessed who I am 😆 I used to write abhiya FFs once upon a time before shutting down all my works in this forum.

Hi...sorry since ur user name was changed i couldn't recognise u:) thank u fr appreciating

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