OS: And All That Could Have Been - Page 2

Not a PaRud story rather a Laila one? I am not a big fan of Laila actually.Edited by golpokobita - 10 years ago

Really nice semanti
I loved it

Originally posted by: msin

Did Laila hit upon paro...interesting..😆

Beautiful! Now Laila is Rudra's competition..ha..ha.

Pa-La??

Now this would be an interesting twist or may I say AU??

Wapas aa jao writing mein Sem, Main aap ka Pa-La bhi padh loongi..

Best of luck for exams! Conquer them and come back sooon..
Edited by shree10 - 10 years ago

Nice read. I didn't like the Laila in the show, but reading this OS i can sympathize with her.

Originally posted by: Rag1ni

Oh my! Mera (very) early wallah birthday present. Pyaar, pyaar, pyaar.

This is so brilliantly written, now I know why you have so many pankhis. C'mon Paro bb, Major Saab ko chodh and dance to dil dola re dole re with Laila bb. Team Par-la best hai, which sounds so much like a Bombay suburb. And of course, we love the Bombay suburbs.

Also, Indian Government if you are reading this, down with Section 377. And Major Saab if you are reading this, don't be sad, you are hotter than hot. Aisa sirf maine nahin kaha, akbaaron mein bhi likha hai.

Waise aapne mera IF se door rehne ka tapasya bhang kar diya. I guess like a great man once said, lau can reduce you to anything. Let me go fetch my towel.

Originally posted by: White-Lies

Aren't you worried? Section 377 and all? From what I know of you, you have your roots firmly in the Indian tradition!😆

I LOVED the hat-ke-ness. But you know what the overall theme reminds me of? "Lihaaf", by Ismat Chugtai. I love..."different".

Bwahaha. 

Originally posted by: Rag1ni

Oh my! Mera (very) early wallah birthday present. Pyaar, pyaar, pyaar.

This is so brilliantly written, now I know why you have so many pankhis. C'mon Paro bb, Major Saab ko chodh and dance to dil dola re dole re with Laila bb. Team Par-la best hai, which sounds so much like a Bombay suburb. And of course, we love the Bombay suburbs.

Also, Indian Government if you are reading this, down with Section 377. And Major Saab if you are reading this, don't be sad, you are hotter than hot. Aisa sirf maine nahin kaha, akbaaron mein bhi likha hai.

Waise aapne mera IF se door rehne ka tapasya bhang kar diya. I guess like a great man once said, lau can reduce you to anything. Let me go fetch my towel.

That's really a beautiful OS.  Please do come up with  more. Happy b'day Ragini. Love watching your ipk creations.Hope end if your tapasya bring back our fun in watching your creations.