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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
manvi coming to her old self...
viren and manvi part is nice
stopped at wrong place
continue soon

i will continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_nishal

awesome update anu

yu knw wat am just pulling my hairs now,
i cldnt cme up abt karan..
who's he?? if he dead?? how and when??
here cmes the another man, akash
he seems to be frnd of manvi, hope he s just a frnd fr he and shldnt mess up wth our virman
poor virat, he doesnt knw anythng  abt all these riddles..
i love the  bond of manvir.. its so awww
then,
wats that cd abt??
i thnk it relates to karan and manvi..
lets see
fr tat yu have to continue soon my sissy..
hope yu do soon..

thanku so much for ur long wala comment akka
in cd mmm secret akka
but i will reveal soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

awww superb jpdate anu really liked it
love to see manvi back in her old avtar
but who is this akash yaar n why she was calling him my akash again n again
love the manvir bond which is very pure
love jeevika's understanding
live everything in this part
now waiting eagerly for next part
do update soon
thanks for tge pm

dii thanku so much for ur comment di
love u
i will reveal every thing soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanku
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Originally posted by: sandhYA_123

AWESOME UPDATE IT IS PANAMA. ITS SUCH A SWEET STORY. LIKED IT VERY MUCH. HAPPY 2 SEE  MANVI IN OLD AVATAR AND LOVED MANVIR BONDING VERY MUCH AND MANVI SURPRIZE TO VIREN. BUT NOW WHAT HAPPENS MAYBE BECOZ OF AAKASH TROUBLE CREATE BETWEEN VIRMAN RELATIONS. AND AGAIN WHO IS THIS KARAN . SUCH A BIG SUSPENSE  IT IS AND ONLY U KNOW IT. SO PLZ REVEAL SOON. AND WHAT IS IN THAT CD. SO WAITING 4 THE NEXT. UPDATE SOON. TAKE CARE.

i will update soon di
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Awsm update dear. .
Thanks alot for pm dea. .
Already commented on page no. 15..
Keep rocking dear
Tc

thanku
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                                                        PART 8
Practices are going on full swing in campus nd all are enjoying it. (I love practices more than boring classes).
Here Virat is in a strong ditermination , ditermination to make manvi his , only his. But we don't know about our future naa. So let's wait and watch for the future. At that time Rahul and Meera entered the hall with so many cds in their hands.
Rahul: Hey guys tell me for which song i want to perform for the arts day.
Arjun:I think u both can perform a romantic nomber naa.
Shika:Yeah that's great idea. 
Virat:Yes i too thnk like that.
At that time Manvi come their with Akash.
Manvi:What are you  guys doing here?
Virat:Deciding Rahul's and Meera's song for their performance.
Manvi:Which one you decided?
Rahul:A romantic one nd i want to choose a romantic song now.
Manvi:Ok then i will help you.
Meera:Sure Manvi.
But at that time ateacher called Manvi and she went to that teacher along with Akaash and they are standing some what just to Virat and their gang.
Arjun: I think these is a romantic number.(Pointing towards a cd)
Meera: And what makes you  think that?
Arjun:Look the title  of the cd madam ' forever yours'.
Meera:Ok let's play these then.
Virat:But we want to wait for Manvi.
Shika:Oh mera lover boy she will come now its'elf and we are not finalizing these song naa. Now we are only listening these.
Misha:Yeah rite .
Rahul:Ok let us play.
They put the cd on laptop.
Virat:I think these is not audio.
Misha:Yeah this is vedio.
Rahul:Then we can see that naa.
And the vedio started to play and by seeing the vedio everyone become stunned.Nd by hearing her favourite song sung by her favourite personn make manvi run to the laptop along with Akash.
In that audio Karan is playing piano and singing Be intehaan song for Manvi and they are dancing and enjoying in that song along with some romantic scenes.(I am too small to describe all these things)
Here virat and every one become stunned by seeing these and manvi's eyes began to water.And next moment she ran from there with her full speed. Here Akash become angry to himself because now also he can't protect her from her past.
Virat:(To Akash):What is these sir.(With broken heart)
Akash understand the situationa nd he immediately without any reply switch of the laptop .
Akash:First i want to meet mannu and then i will answer all the questoins to you all.
Akash:At that moment his phone ring and it was Jeevika.With out any delay he took the phone and everyone can hear only one sided convo.
Akash:What. I will come now it'self and don't tell any thing to Manvi and i will bring her.
Akash then run to find Manvi and he found her with her peon kakka. Virat and others  are now  confused with Akash's behaveior and they too followed him.
Akash draggged crying Manvi and went to his car and drove off. And virat and their gang too followed them.
Manvi:What happened Akash? Any problem.
Akash:Are you ok Manvi.
Manvi:Haan i am ok but it's hurting Akash.But now i can control becuase i have my adi for me.
Akash:Haa Manvi Adi will there for u nd he will always.
and then the car stopped infront of a hospital.
Manvi:Hospital...But why we are here.
Akash:For now you want to be strong Manvi .
Manvi:But why Akash
Akash:Let's go inside Mannu.
Virat and other's also rechad their and other's are trying to console Virat unaware of another shocking surprise for them.
Inside the hospital,
Akash dragged Manvi tothe operation theatre.
And manvi saw jeevika along with her deda and pappa standing infront of the theatre with lots of tension in their face.
Manvi:Without any expression)Deda why are you all standing here. You all know naa i hate hospital and in house my adi is alone naa. Come let's go back.
Viren:Mannu Adi is here.
Manvi:Are you joking deda my adi in hospital.Is this April 1st today. AND DEDA I HATE THESE TYPE OF JOKE.
Jeevika:No mannu your deda is telling the truth Adi is in hospital .
Manvi:What what happened to him bhabi don;t make me mad now. I know you all are making me fool and she began to run away from their.
But viran and akash caught her and make her sit in ner by chair.
Deda:Mannu please listen to your deda please
Adi fell down from the steps?
Manvi become numb by hearing that nd next she only whispered.
Manvi:How?
Jeevika:He was sitting and playing Mannu and then a phone call came and i went to pick that and at that time. I am sorry Mannu.😭😭😭
Manvi(Whisper):My baby Adi
These makr our virat more anxious and confusion along with others .
Virat:Baby...
At that time doctor came outside and manvi didn't reat to any thing after that.
Doctor:He lost so much blood and we immediately need some blood. If any one having B negative please inforn us. 
Here in Manvi's house no one is B neg and Karan was b neg and they don;t know what to do nd Viren and Akash tried to contact blood bank but nothing is available.
Then their comes a sound from behind.
Virat: I have B neg and u can take my blood.
Akash and viren witout any delay informed to doctor about Virat and they are all thankful to virat. But here our Manvi have no expressions on her face and these scared everyone.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my god
Its getting more n more interesting
Poor manvi
N how virat will react after kng all truth
Eagerly waiting 4 next
Update soon