very nice. Priya-neha gud undstng. Very well written.
thank u for liking it
very nice. Priya-neha gud undstng. Very well written.
Originally posted by: zeylanica
Read 2 parts in a go ... lovely updates .. good goingContinue soon n thanks for d PMs dear
Originally posted by: jineejiggs
Part 3
thoda ajeeb sa laga yeh part mujhe, it doesn't speak of reality, I know this is fiction but still somewhat resemblance with reality is what I expected but its not, anyways moving on next part
Originally posted by: lalmadhu
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#006600">Very nice update. I hope iss identity game ko koi aur...(I mean Isha..) kuch galat faida naa uthayein...Well, wiating for more raya. Please continue soon.</font>
Originally posted by: jineejiggs
Part 4
the bond is building up, nice to read that, continue
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