OS:- 'The Realization' (New) - Page 2

Originally posted by: anyania

Wow. U must be a writer. Do write more.

Originally posted by: arsha_simran

this is beautiful!!!

really very very nice!!! Just loved it...

at starting I wondered wats wrong with them... I thought they are house mates...

loved the way you described randhir's and sanyukta's feelings!!! Very nice!!!

sooo awesome!!!

the make out session wer they finally gave up their ego.. Beautiful...

and then finally the truth... SanDhir married but sanyukata opposed it and randhir wanted her to realize... Perfect!!!

perfect ending!!! Simply beautiful!!

and the last lines about realization wooowww just loved it...!!! Totally true and perfect!!

Oh Damn! Such a well thought abd deep plot! You left me hyperventilating in that rain moment! Isn't this what every girl waits for all through her life! Him noticing her, waiting for her and craving for her! I heart you for such an innovative idea and you were great penning this down! Do write more! Alluring work! Kudos to my Pou di! xD

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

Oh Damn! Such a well thought abd deep plot! You left me hyperventilating in that rain moment! Isn't this what every girl waits for all through her life! Him noticing her, waiting for her and craving for her! I heart you for such an innovative idea and you were great penning this down! Do write more! Alluring work! Kudos to my Pou di! xD