hey... superb update till part 16 loved it alot... the bond between maan and mahi is superb and maan s love for geet and mahi is tremendous... u r a amazing writer... i loved the fun between dev naina and pari ,... lolzz dev is always the scapegoat ... and gets scolding from maan but is very supportive and loves his family a lot... mahi is so cute and geet her world is mahi and maan...loved it alot .. u r astar and brilliant writer ...lots of wishes for your amazing=innovative=creative = mindblowing work...😊 i would love to read it further as it refreshes me... plzz give me access to the next parts..waiting for it...thanku 👏👏
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