its a nice os. Really hated d gangs behaviour atleast swayam realisd his mistake after all. Bt i felt smtg mr should have bein included so dat gang also realise der mistake.its Just my pov. Taarey part was so emotnal. Keep writing mr.. : )
Di...loved it.. Ye gang..how mean..seriously... And swayam...I say the only flaw in swayum was and is that he couldn't understand his own sis... TaaRey*dreaming with teary eyes* Hitler...😲 Di...soch samajh ke likna chahiye na re...me bhi hitler hai...🤣 Perfect title... You on writing frenzy ???? Roz ek nya OS..ab jaldi sacred love ka update do...
I wish aisa hi hua hota di..! Aaj taarey hamare samne hote..! CVs couldnt realise this.. They just killed the pure love..! Shittz..! Anyways reading ur os's and ff's makes me happy..! A big smile comes on..! Again awesome os..! But i missed that natkhat romance..! ;) ;) Awww rey love u yaar.! Yeeahh rey screamed at swayam too..! And team ki toh >_< Hehheeheh nice cute realisation..! Love u taarey and miss u alot.!
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