PaRud OS: Choices - Page 5

That was amazing Anks! Now I have high expectations from the cvs to give us a great scene like the one you wrote! 

That was just fantastic. Hats off to you girl for such a beautifully written OS. They way you portrayed both characters was spot on. Paro's anguish of choosing Tejawat over Rudra was heartbreaking. I guess that's understandable when you've considered the man to be like a father then find out he never thought the same. A calm Rudra coming to the rescue was executed perfectly. If he'd come in with guns blazing who knows what the outcome would have been like. This is one ending the cv could take inspiration from. It would definitely do justice to the show. 

Very good and descriptive. I can see this happening.

can't stop reading you are such a good writer hope to read more and more 👏 👏 👏

WHOA!! NICE! I desperately hope this to happen in the story...

Hmm...

So... I don't watch Rangrasiya !!
I mean, yeaa... I have had glimpses of it when my mom sticks to TV, everytime it is aired. But I've never really 'watched' it...

Still I came here n read this.
Because I can never ignore any of ur write-ups dii !! ^_^

N I read it like a story... Not a fiction.
N to be frank, meko kaafi samaj me bhi aaya...😆

As always... The way u portrayed the emotions of the leads was flawless! Not just Rudra n Parvati, but u seemed to have well described Tejawat's POV too !!

I liked the way she was yearning to see him... Feel him... Or whatever...
But wanting him to come to her rescue...

As I said, I have no idea of the storyline Rangrasiya holds, so I can just compliment u on ur amazing writing skills !!

I liked it ! 😃 :*

Originally posted by: Rubab4137

superb..fantastic..
😛

Originally posted by: kammy63

Ur OS is like a ray of hope in dark times! 

Real Good! 👏

Originally posted by: sparikh

That was so awesome! Paro's unconscious mind dreaming of Rudra; comparing with Thakur's treatment - making her realize what she choose...all beautifully written.

-Sona

Originally posted by: CandYlicious_S

I was actually commenting to my topic's replies, isi liye dair hogae. ❤️  :(

Warna PaRud OS ho, aap ne likha ho, aur hum na aayein.. 😉 Aisa toh ho nahin sakta..! <3