baabu-sa...
aapka sapna sach hone ko jaa rha hai...
badhai ho...
so I cannot comment over characters... coz still am to acquiamt myself with names...
I bhill comment over writing style sa..
I toh lubhed how u showed the emotions... esp the description...
the starting one bhaaajjgh awesome... and then how she was shouting that too...
then rudra forging papeersss... ooohhh
saam daam dand bhed it ijjhhh
lubhed how u showed blind trust thing.., awesome...
lubhed it...
lubh u.,. eee
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